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Ghostbusters: Regenesis - 17 - Full Circle
Ghostbusters: Regenesis
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leotodrius
leotodrius<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>With the temperature climbing, signs are all around that Zytu is almost upon us all. Will the Ghostbusters be able to save the day, or is all life in our universe headed towards a dire Doomsday?
This chapter marks the 'season 2 finale' of the "Ghostbusters: Regenesis" series. I've had this chapter in mind for a long time. Chapter 8 held the first hints to Zytu, but this ties back into a lot of the last chapters. I also want to send out a special thanks to
zalrex. His comments and feedback on the GB chapters inspired me to sit down and write this story that had been sitting in my mind for months. Without him this wouldn't have been done for ages.Also, yes, it's a clean story for once, lol.
Rerun design created by
at http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7433888/Twenty five years after the Ghostbusters pioneered paranormal investigations and eliminations as a business model, franchise departments have spread across the United States. One such franchise operates in Portland Oregon.
This story accepts the movies, the 2010 game, "Real Ghostbusters" and "Extreme Ghostbusters" as canon history and combines elements from all four sources.
Ghostbusters, the "No-Ghost Logo" and subsequent marks and trademarks are the authorized copyright property of Columbia Pictures/Sony Pictures and are used freely per 17 U.S.C. Section 107 aka the "Fair Use Statute." This story is in no way, shape, or form associated with Columbia Tri-Star entertainment or it's works. All intellectual property belongs to its respective owners.
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I didn't want to sully the story with that sort of stuff, and honestly it was so emotionally heavy that I thought it needed to be clean. Death, rebirth, new hope, etcetera. No need to cheapen that. I'm SOOO relieved that you appreciated that I didn't go dirty with it. Also, I need to go ladle on some excessive thanks to the artist that drew the incarnation of Rerun that inspired me so much, so thanks for reminding me to do that.
I think fan art of Rerun would be extraordinarily welcome, just be sure to credit 
lanhao who came up with the design. His original piece is at http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7278762/ and the version I colored is http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7433888/
He's been in my heart too since the very first time I saw him and this story idea came into my head. :)
lanhao who came up with the design. His original piece is at http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7278762/ and the version I colored is http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7433888/He's been in my heart too since the very first time I saw him and this story idea came into my head. :)
OMG Ok this could pass completely as a Doctor Who Season Finale episode.
I really don't know what to say that haven't been said yet.
Great choice to make this chapter clean and so emotive.
I have to admit that I was a bit worried about Rerun because of all the paradoxes that have been created but you have solved them really good and simple.
I'm going to repeat myself again but you are really good writing this stories and this one in particular: Awesome
I really don't know what to say that haven't been said yet.
Great choice to make this chapter clean and so emotive.
I have to admit that I was a bit worried about Rerun because of all the paradoxes that have been created but you have solved them really good and simple.
I'm going to repeat myself again but you are really good writing this stories and this one in particular: Awesome
Glad to be helpful haha
There is one thing I wanted to tell you. I know this is not a serious novel but a fan-fantasy tremendously well elaborated, but I think maybe you should add some more drama. Till now two of the better chapters of this story are the one in which Nico tells what he has done and this one. But in the end they are all happy.
Listen. This doesn't mean that I want to turn this story into a sad one but you should explore the possibilities of adding more drama to some characters.
Now I have to say that after I read this chapter I imagined Rerun as a Doctor Who fan, watching the show to take ideas hahaha
There is one thing I wanted to tell you. I know this is not a serious novel but a fan-fantasy tremendously well elaborated, but I think maybe you should add some more drama. Till now two of the better chapters of this story are the one in which Nico tells what he has done and this one. But in the end they are all happy.
Listen. This doesn't mean that I want to turn this story into a sad one but you should explore the possibilities of adding more drama to some characters.
Now I have to say that after I read this chapter I imagined Rerun as a Doctor Who fan, watching the show to take ideas hahaha
Really nice work wigh the arc finaly.
I was curious on how you would escape the paradox trap and you did it well.
All the rest as already been said by others (Rerun, drama, clean ect)
There was a lot of character exposition and decelopment in this arc but I fell like Eli is slightly behind and Dakota is forgotten. What is exactly his possition in the team?
I was curious on how you would escape the paradox trap and you did it well.
All the rest as already been said by others (Rerun, drama, clean ect)
There was a lot of character exposition and decelopment in this arc but I fell like Eli is slightly behind and Dakota is forgotten. What is exactly his possition in the team?
Dakota is sort of a ringer, brought in for heavy hitting situations. He helps out with the equipment, but he isn't as much a team player as the others.
Eli, hmm. He feels like a better balanced individual in my head than the others. He doesn't have as many problems, so he doesn't have as much to work through but that can put him behind.
Yay, escaping paradoxes!
Eli, hmm. He feels like a better balanced individual in my head than the others. He doesn't have as many problems, so he doesn't have as much to work through but that can put him behind.
Yay, escaping paradoxes!
I think you have a right to be confused with time loop stuff. On the one hand, in the first chapter where Rerun is encountered, Seth feels like he knows the ghost and has seen him before, but on the other hand something changed since Rerun saw the end of everything and then changed the outcome. So yeah, I can see what led to confusion.
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