heh the muses strike again :P I know what that's like...

It's actually kind of funny, I've been experimenting with 2nd-person in what little spare time I've had recently as well. It's really just better for some sorts of description but at the same time it's hard to describe specifically what; it does always give a nice choose-your-own-adventure vibe though :D For whatever the teeth-changing description stuck with me the most, but that's sort of what you want in a TF sequence :P

I really don't know what came over me there, but in any case, we got this story out of it and it's awesome enough. :>

That seems to happen pretty often with writing in general and it's usually a good thing xD

I just wish the muse came by more frequently.

You and me both.