
ok so Rainbow is very much still in WIP, but it help if I know what is wrong with my picture early on so....
Please comment and give me feedback
Rainbow will be in me and carnival's Ice cream cats calander order details available soon!!!
Please comment and give me feedback
Rainbow will be in me and carnival's Ice cream cats calander order details available soon!!!
Category All / General Furry Art
Species Housecat
Size 1280 x 905px
File Size 657.4 kB
Yeah I have had a comment about the fingers on both hands already so I will make sure to fix them. I see what you are saying about the tail, it is something to do with the shadow. I will make sure to fix that to.
thank you for your feedback! I always look forword to reading you comments! :)
thank you for your feedback! I always look forword to reading you comments! :)
*smiles* My pleasure. I would also appreciate the crit if you look at my scribbles. Though maybe I better give you direct links... I am not sure if you are ok with all kinds of stuff I have in my gallery, I am pretty crazy...
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8783333
Me rakshasa is https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8642727 https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8693989
The polabear is
Taranis
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8783333
Me rakshasa is https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8642727 https://www.furaffinity.net/view/8693989
The polabear is

-what other have mentioned about the fingers
-I would give her tummy-lines (and bust) abit more 'curve to it to extenuate the female figure s'more (considering the nature of the Calendar we're trying to pitch ;'P) *her torso, around her middle-section looks abit too straight/flat/(even abit too muscled on the front?) to be all 'girl n squish' |'S where as her legs, arms & face -really- do!
Good Shizzle:
-the rounding off on her face (against the older version) is nice!
-attire and accessories are looking real neat!
-Body-size is a massive improvement in scale.
-her colours, again, are dreamy/awesome! (and though it's not in the final stages, making sure to place in some of those darker-contrasting lines around the edges of key shapes will help define key-parts apart from each other (along her jaw-line to separate from her neck/hair there for example, and either side of her arm that's planted on the ground, etc~)
Looking good though G-plom~! :'D
-I would give her tummy-lines (and bust) abit more 'curve to it to extenuate the female figure s'more (considering the nature of the Calendar we're trying to pitch ;'P) *her torso, around her middle-section looks abit too straight/flat/(even abit too muscled on the front?) to be all 'girl n squish' |'S where as her legs, arms & face -really- do!
Good Shizzle:
-the rounding off on her face (against the older version) is nice!
-attire and accessories are looking real neat!
-Body-size is a massive improvement in scale.
-her colours, again, are dreamy/awesome! (and though it's not in the final stages, making sure to place in some of those darker-contrasting lines around the edges of key shapes will help define key-parts apart from each other (along her jaw-line to separate from her neck/hair there for example, and either side of her arm that's planted on the ground, etc~)
Looking good though G-plom~! :'D
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