Well, dno why, but it seems like this one is more say, grab-able, more traditional looking. I like traditional.

When you say, "different style of linework", does that mean that it only includes like, the actual lining itself that you changed? Maybe that's what makes it look more traditional, the lines look sorta like pencil strokes. Pencil but no pen. Mmmmmmaybe you should make this a full pic, definitely hot enough.

More that the proportions and construction were different to usual - less cartoony, more realistic ^^

10 views, really? your better than that

No boobs, is normal :)

hey your linework is beautiful. if anything i would think about your layering and shading
a lot of artists just pour it on, and thats what im used to, i guess thats why i like you so much so simple.

it certainly is a very different style and not a bad one, I would recommend using a bolder outline for her skin as it seems to blend to just suddenly go to background, other than that nice work and keep broadening your horizons

Yeah, this was really just a sketchy test with more realistic features and proportions ^^

a sketchy test and you still impress me? You wizard XP