Wow.

That was...that was good. Damn good, in fact. Thank you for sharing it. Definitely watching you.

Hah, well thank you sir. I'll see if I can get a part 3 up at some point.

Ok...I just read this again. I mean it, this surprised me. I usually avoid fan fiction but this kinda makes me want to write my own. You managed to take what could have been a very predictable and obvious ending and had me too into the personalities of the characters to see it coming. I love how you managed to capture so much personality in so few words.

I kinda hope...well, I don't want to risk ruining what's next by giving you any ideas ^.~ (not that you'd really need any, certainly not from me). I am totally watching you. Thank you again...oh, and i've been trying to get my friends to read this, too!

Haha, awesome... I don't do fanfiction often, it feels kinda pointless working with established characters that you cannot develop. So when I do it, I always use my *own* characters. Makes things way more fun for me and more interesting for anyone reading. :J

I had originally planned on a Scythid next, but after getting a feel for writing this type of TF story, I'm now starting to lean toward something from BL2. A little more power might be more warranted.

Same here. I've only written a few fanfics, really. Nothing i find worthy of dredging up, however. I just wish I wasn't so lazy and unmotivated.

At any rate, can't wait to see what you cook up next.

Wow, im really impressed. I love borderlands, and now that i have read a borderlands transformation, i am happy. When is part 3 going to be out if their is going to be one?

Thanks! I'm still trying to decide, but having trouble getting into it these days. :J It would probably be either a scythid or a thresher.