This is beautiful work! The eyes are the most attention-getting part of the drawing. I love it.

Lovely.

Gorgeous.

Grand, very lovely.

It's not 'It's my first time to draw' instead write 'It's my first time drawing'

You can say 'next Wednesday' or 'on Wednesday' but both 'on next' doesn't sound right.

You can't say 'I'll make English speech' you can say 'I will make a speech in English'

Instead of speech you can say 'presentation' or 'demonstration' or 'lesson' a speech is more like when you are about to drink wine or after winning an election.

You can't say 'how to draw a digital art' I suppose you mean 'how to draw digital art' you don't need to put 'a' once one knows how to draw digital art they'll know how to draw more.

All fixed would read like this:
It's my first time drawing a 'real human', next Wednesday I'll make an English language presentation in our English class about how to draw digital art, that's my homework, so I did a 'step by step' ppt to finish it.

Hope this helps you without being insulting. Oh! And look nice.

Oh! And lookS nice.

Be nice... she's Chinese... and English isn't the easiest language.

Whoops! See how badly my English is
Thanks for teaching me! :)

Holy shit you drew that I AM impressed I thought it was a photograph it looks so real XD

awesome job

Lovely. I almost though this was a photograph. You did really well.

Amazing =o

great painting! I love it! :D

Woooow, you're very talented in that kind of things !!!!!!!!

Wow thats really good. I like her eyes

I honest to god thought this was a digital cam pic!!

The art reminds me alot of whoever it is that works at Square/Enix
(Makers of the Final Fantasy RPG games) and draws the game characters for them.

Oh Golly very good artwork

Oh wowowowow! That's excellent!

Astonishing! From the thumbnail, I assumed it had to be a photo. I love the deep color of her hair.

Where is her thumbnail?

Oh, I'm sorry! I assumed you knew what that term meant. A 'thumbnail' is a shrunken-down preview of an image. When you get new submissions, you see the tiny little versions of the pics before you click on them: those are called thumbnails. I don't know *why* they're called that, but they are.

Oh! I see! Learnt another word again! Thanks for teaching me! :)

You're welcome! Heh, once you've been on the web for a while, it's easy to forget that not everyone knows all the nicknames for stuff.

I almost though it was a photo myself. Please excuse the jaw-hanging-open, stare. I simply never have been more impressed in my life.

This is a very lovely pic, she has a heartwarming smile. ^_^ Hope to see some more "homework" sometime soon ;)

This is very excellent. I like the soft focus effect and the lighting. Has a very free and "floaty" feel to it.

you made it look more perfect then a real picture could

simply divine work