
It's Hueroc's turn for another magic lesson! This one offers a few clues about what he's really capable of.
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This chapter is a bit quiet and slow, yes. I considered combining it with the next one, but all the chapters of this sequence have been around this length so I figured that could wait until next time! Which hopefully won't be as long. >< Anyway, enjoy the dragons!
Comments and critique greatly appreciated.
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This chapter is a bit quiet and slow, yes. I considered combining it with the next one, but all the chapters of this sequence have been around this length so I figured that could wait until next time! Which hopefully won't be as long. >< Anyway, enjoy the dragons!
Comments and critique greatly appreciated.
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Species Western Dragon
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Well, Good to see Hueroc making progress..
You know, I might have to consider forming a persistent world for my stroies, instead of just jumping from one thing to the next >.>
Can't say much about your writing itself. Everything seems in order, as far as spelling and grammar are concerned. Though, I will say that not ever story has to be an epic. The slow days give readers time to settle down :)
You know, I might have to consider forming a persistent world for my stroies, instead of just jumping from one thing to the next >.>
Can't say much about your writing itself. Everything seems in order, as far as spelling and grammar are concerned. Though, I will say that not ever story has to be an epic. The slow days give readers time to settle down :)
Heh. I have a lot of different 'worlds' in my different stories, but doing a series in one consistent world can be an opportunity to flesh that world out a bit. Which I'm not really doing. >.>
Yeah, you could say that the clean chapters are the calm, settling breaks and the porn is the involved stuff. :P
Yeah, you could say that the clean chapters are the calm, settling breaks and the porn is the involved stuff. :P
Heh, patience does indeed has its benefits. A simple but interesting chapter this is, the little hatchlings showing off more of their defining characteristics(whike still being adorable) and the part where Hueroc is learning is quite insightful, considering that he knows(with Rhean's help) how his power usually works but its more subtler qualities still needs to be fully understood. Not much else to say on my part but thanks for the update, I love reading innocent, slice of life stories every once in a while, and you sir has made the wait worthwhile. Heh, reading about the sleepy little is makin' me feel the same thing tonight. Well, cheers!
P.S. The black-and-orange dragon..... I think he seems familiar.....oh yes, nice to see him flying free(for once), I bet he might even show off some stylish flying skills if he's not just making a cameo here.
P.S. The black-and-orange dragon..... I think he seems familiar.....oh yes, nice to see him flying free(for once), I bet he might even show off some stylish flying skills if he's not just making a cameo here.
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