Awesome story I am always eagerly awaiting the next part in this great storyline.

Thank you!

Memo to myself: avoid bothering the dragon with his Ragefire. x)
I hope that nothing will happen to the small Loria in growing up. =(

Good story young writer. ^^
I like the way you narrate your stories, attention to details and your characters. (Sorry for my bad english >_<)

Yes :P

She seems to be doing well! and she has her daddy to protect her.

Thanks!

"and she has her daddy to protect her."

...You try to reassure me? x)

Maybe ;)

Well, Good to see Hueroc making progress..

You know, I might have to consider forming a persistent world for my stroies, instead of just jumping from one thing to the next >.>

Can't say much about your writing itself. Everything seems in order, as far as spelling and grammar are concerned. Though, I will say that not ever story has to be an epic. The slow days give readers time to settle down :)

Heh. I have a lot of different 'worlds' in my different stories, but doing a series in one consistent world can be an opportunity to flesh that world out a bit. Which I'm not really doing. >.>

Yeah, you could say that the clean chapters are the calm, settling breaks and the porn is the involved stuff. :P

I smell a cameo! ;3 of one of your own! But aaawr! Sleeping hatchlings! And of course, all them flashy fires! Weeee!

Yes! Mainly because I just needed a filler to space dialog out, and it seemed like a good bit of scenery to occupy a line. :P And whee, fun fire magic c:

Heh, patience does indeed has its benefits. A simple but interesting chapter this is, the little hatchlings showing off more of their defining characteristics(whike still being adorable) and the part where Hueroc is learning is quite insightful, considering that he knows(with Rhean's help) how his power usually works but its more subtler qualities still needs to be fully understood. Not much else to say on my part but thanks for the update, I love reading innocent, slice of life stories every once in a while, and you sir has made the wait worthwhile. Heh, reading about the sleepy little is makin' me feel the same thing tonight. Well, cheers!

P.S. The black-and-orange dragon..... I think he seems familiar.....oh yes, nice to see him flying free(for once), I bet he might even show off some stylish flying skills if he's not just making a cameo here.

Innocent, slice of life... There's meant to be plot momentum here somewhere, I just can't find it x.x

That was just a cameo, needed a bit of filler between dialogue lines. :P