aw, that was nice! im not into vore, but that certainly had a great story. excellent job! ^_^

Heh, thanks. Guess i can't resist putting in a story, even to somthing like this.

its a good thing ^_^

An excellent job! You did very well, and the story is extremely touching. Are you sure this was your first time? I don't think it really was, as good as this is. In any case, well done! But from the ending, are you planning a sequal? Just curious.

Yes, this was my first time, but after how many other vore storys I've read by this point, it came pretty easly. Heh, even a simple vore story has to have a storyline with me(I think it add to it). As for a sequal, yes and no. The idea of the awakened and the soul eaters has been bouncing around my head for a while. Defintlly plan to write more, but with a lot of diffrent charicters, these two will make another appernce, just don't know when.:)

Ps: Thanks much for ta watch!!!;)

oh wow ^^

that was really awesome...when i saw it was vore, i didnt think i was gonna like it...but...i rlly did

Thanks much! I think by putting in a story line, then theres at least somthing other then the vore going on. Once again, thanks:).*Bows*

I guess I don't understand vore... But good story nonetheless.

Well, he survived. Who knew?