"This war was brought upon us because of one creature's mistake. Now we are the ones who must pay for his sins."
- Captain "Silver"
THIS IS A WIP, SO I'LL DELETE IT WHEN IT'S FINISHED, TRY NOT TO FAVE THIS SRSLY.
I would gladly appreciate ANY critique or suggestions you have to offer! I'm temped to make something much better out of this drawing, since all I've published until now are sketches. And no, I'm not really satisfied with the current progress of this.
I could need help with the colors and concept. What can I do to make it look much more "epic"?
Art from my story: Demon Whisperers
Art, DW © Me
- Captain "Silver"
THIS IS A WIP, SO I'LL DELETE IT WHEN IT'S FINISHED, TRY NOT TO FAVE THIS SRSLY.
I would gladly appreciate ANY critique or suggestions you have to offer! I'm temped to make something much better out of this drawing, since all I've published until now are sketches. And no, I'm not really satisfied with the current progress of this.
I could need help with the colors and concept. What can I do to make it look much more "epic"?
Art from my story: Demon Whisperers
Art, DW © Me
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1200 x 774px
File Size 1.01 MB
For the amount of rain there is rather little water going down his armor. I also would assume that the rain would make it a little more shiny?
I would also think that darker edges, as if you'd increase the contrast, would give a neat touch to the picture. And how about lightning strikes in the background?
Oh and yeah, I would probably also give more sharpness to the clouds. Or mass... I am not sure.
I really like this picture already but maybe this can give some ideas :3
Good luck!
I would also think that darker edges, as if you'd increase the contrast, would give a neat touch to the picture. And how about lightning strikes in the background?
Oh and yeah, I would probably also give more sharpness to the clouds. Or mass... I am not sure.
I really like this picture already but maybe this can give some ideas :3
Good luck!
you know what might make this more unified? making the character lineless to fit in with the painterly background?
also i am not sure what the black line on the right by the character is? But it seems unneccessary and maybe should be cropped out?
Some things in the foreground would give this more depth too, unless you wanted the character to be right in the foreground ?
The good things are many in this though, nice unified palette great anatomy and composition, i love it!
also i am not sure what the black line on the right by the character is? But it seems unneccessary and maybe should be cropped out?
Some things in the foreground would give this more depth too, unless you wanted the character to be right in the foreground ?
The good things are many in this though, nice unified palette great anatomy and composition, i love it!
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