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The kids discover some unnatural readings and go to investigate, but what they find is something totally unexpected.
Action/Age Regression
Action/Age Regression
Category Story / Baby fur
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Size 120 x 49px
File Size 258 kB
This was a Triumph! I'm Making a note here: HUGE SUCCESS.
It's hard to overstate my satisfaction!
Heh, sorry if you're getting sick of Portal references by now, but I this story. I'm really looking forward to more from you. You've got such a wonderful style for AR stories.
It's hard to overstate my satisfaction!
Heh, sorry if you're getting sick of Portal references by now, but I this story. I'm really looking forward to more from you. You've got such a wonderful style for AR stories.
...wow.
A piece of furry fiction that
A. Is obviously well thought out
B. Is a single, self contained story, despite obviously being part of a series
C. Feels natural
D. Contains kink elements and -does not derail because of it-
E. Contains some downright Power Rangers elements and still doesn't seem silly because of it
F. Has multiple characters that feel like more than standard stereotypes
...are you some kind of refugee from an alternate dimension?
The only thing that I might change is just some basic, nitpicky editing -- blocks of text in all capitals are nearly impossible to read. I tried to break through the mighty wall of text and failed miserably, so I just kinda skimmed that particular bit. If you've got access to a good small caps font, use it. If you're going to use Word formatting, you may as well take advantage of what it can do for you.
As it is, damn, man. Glad I installed Openoffice for this.
A piece of furry fiction that
A. Is obviously well thought out
B. Is a single, self contained story, despite obviously being part of a series
C. Feels natural
D. Contains kink elements and -does not derail because of it-
E. Contains some downright Power Rangers elements and still doesn't seem silly because of it
F. Has multiple characters that feel like more than standard stereotypes
...are you some kind of refugee from an alternate dimension?
The only thing that I might change is just some basic, nitpicky editing -- blocks of text in all capitals are nearly impossible to read. I tried to break through the mighty wall of text and failed miserably, so I just kinda skimmed that particular bit. If you've got access to a good small caps font, use it. If you're going to use Word formatting, you may as well take advantage of what it can do for you.
As it is, damn, man. Glad I installed Openoffice for this.
I liked it!
At times I felt a bit silly for reading it and getting those "Hey, this is pretty cool!" chills, but yeah, it was a good read. Definitely made my morning interesting.
I should mention that most of the links to files on your site give me a 404, though!
Take it easy. <3
At times I felt a bit silly for reading it and getting those "Hey, this is pretty cool!" chills, but yeah, it was a good read. Definitely made my morning interesting.
I should mention that most of the links to files on your site give me a 404, though!
Take it easy. <3
Ah! I forgot to mention!
So many stories like these leave the protagonists hanging in their predicaments, or they never get back to how they're supposed to be, when they never wanted to end up how they did in the first place.
That always leaves this tight feeling of unease, I guess you could say. It doesn't feel finished unless the protagonists, the characters you really get attached to, win out in the end.
In this one, they did, however. Replaces that tightness with a.. satisfying warmth.
So many stories like these leave the protagonists hanging in their predicaments, or they never get back to how they're supposed to be, when they never wanted to end up how they did in the first place.
That always leaves this tight feeling of unease, I guess you could say. It doesn't feel finished unless the protagonists, the characters you really get attached to, win out in the end.
In this one, they did, however. Replaces that tightness with a.. satisfying warmth.
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