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After waking up from his dream of being a toddler again, Ringo finds himself back at his house and in his nice comfy bed. But something isn't right with this picture, for starters, the cold, damp feeling Ringo has around his crotch.
Wow this one took some time to come out. Since I finished the last part, I had all the notes for the next chapter written down. But this being my last year of university, I kind of got caught up with school work.
Another issue is that after looking over the notes I had, I realised that this would have to be it's own seperate chapter, otherwise it would have been a serious TL;DR situation for you guys,
I'm really sorry if this isn't up to my usual quality of work...it's been about 7 months since I sat down and wrote something creative. Hopefully it turned out okay though. But you are welcome to give me constructive critisism, it'll probably help me out when I finally get to the next chapter at the end of the semester.
Hope you guys enjoy!
Ringo belongs to Myself
Skeebe belongs to
skeebe-fox
Wow this one took some time to come out. Since I finished the last part, I had all the notes for the next chapter written down. But this being my last year of university, I kind of got caught up with school work.
Another issue is that after looking over the notes I had, I realised that this would have to be it's own seperate chapter, otherwise it would have been a serious TL;DR situation for you guys,
I'm really sorry if this isn't up to my usual quality of work...it's been about 7 months since I sat down and wrote something creative. Hopefully it turned out okay though. But you are welcome to give me constructive critisism, it'll probably help me out when I finally get to the next chapter at the end of the semester.
Hope you guys enjoy!
Ringo belongs to Myself
Skeebe belongs to
skeebe-fox
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 14 kB
Can I give a request? I am really curious as to Skeeb's teen personality. I mean growing up in one day, you really only showed that he
-Has intelligence of an adult
-Seems friendly and mature
-But likes to talk down to Ringo
I know nothing else about him. I mean what music does he like? Clothing preference? Is he into girls? Favourite kinds of movies and shows. I want to know what kind of person he is because for a toddler who grew up in one day he is a character development gold mine.
-Has intelligence of an adult
-Seems friendly and mature
-But likes to talk down to Ringo
I know nothing else about him. I mean what music does he like? Clothing preference? Is he into girls? Favourite kinds of movies and shows. I want to know what kind of person he is because for a toddler who grew up in one day he is a character development gold mine.
Thank you very much for that! ^_^ I was planning on showing some of that in either the next chapter or the one right after it. If you have some ideas you wanna share of what you'd like to see, let me know! Like I said, I'm still new to writing stories, so any help is really appreciated. Send me a note and we can talk a bit more if you like ^_^
And thanks for the input! I always love getting some constructive comments haha. Let's me know people actually want to see more of the story
And thanks for the input! I always love getting some constructive comments haha. Let's me know people actually want to see more of the story
This story is awesome :D and I'd love to suggest some stuff.
You see, this story I find very dramatic, Ringo losing his independence and the indignity he has to go through (His baby brother changing his diapers) Just the fact his baby brother is basically stealing his adult life but doesn't want to hurt him, it's really interesting. And to be honest it's really good so far. And I'm assuming once Skeebe gets a taste of Adult life he might not want to go back. Especially if he meets a cute girl (Or guy, knowing your personal preference ) But like I hinted earlier, I have no idea if he even comprehends romance.
I'll just note you tomorrow (It's 1 in the morning right now )
You see, this story I find very dramatic, Ringo losing his independence and the indignity he has to go through (His baby brother changing his diapers) Just the fact his baby brother is basically stealing his adult life but doesn't want to hurt him, it's really interesting. And to be honest it's really good so far. And I'm assuming once Skeebe gets a taste of Adult life he might not want to go back. Especially if he meets a cute girl (Or guy, knowing your personal preference ) But like I hinted earlier, I have no idea if he even comprehends romance.
I'll just note you tomorrow (It's 1 in the morning right now )
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