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Down at the lake today, and I tried to find a good angle. Sadly, I couldn't find much of one, so I got a picture of this instead, as well as other things. Any suggestions for improving this?
Category Photography / Still Life
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 848px
File Size 306.8 kB
Going under the assumption you were going for an abandoned theme here I like how you captured the tire along with the canoe. To answer your question, my suggestion to have improved this shot was to back away from the canoe and capture more of the surrounding area. Especially if this canoe was abandoned, then I would have incorporated the tire more into this photograph. I think if you had approached this canoe further back around four to five feet at a five o'clock angle, then I think you could have caught the tire as well as some of the waterfront. The issue that I see here is that the canoe kind of takes up the whole photograph without giving a viewer a reference point of where it is.
I hope my commentary was not too harsh, and I think you are a good photographer. I just wanted to be honest in light of your asking for feedback.
I hope my commentary was not too harsh, and I think you are a good photographer. I just wanted to be honest in light of your asking for feedback.
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