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Awesome comic, it has great potential. Only one negative comment; it moves too fast. You need to find a way to slow it, at this point ou could use a time loop as a filler. Show Ember's story, take it slow though. If you intend to have a long time comic that is. If it is just a short fun thing, then great work.
Ah I had not realized that is what it was. Well then I apologize for the pre-empted criticism, and I commend you on an excelent short comic. You have done a wonderful job, art is really good, and a pretty nice resolution. Also the story comes on strong and bold, but not too strong, which is good.
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