Very pretty and the art is so crisp and clean. Love the work on the clock.

thanks =D i look a lot of time on this page

It shows.

A lot of time, and there's a clock. Was that pun intentional or not?

not but awesome XD

LOL. Kind of makes me want to name units of currency hours and minutes in some story or game so you really spend time on things.

Wow I love the scenery hon :D

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=D i kinda went all out on page one XDDD

hehe nothing wrong with that hon ;)

-hugs

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we will see ^^''' im not to proud of the next page, but truthfully i think its because of the changes to quartz i did... XD its still weird to me

OwO Yay!!! It's back! I missed this comic soooooooooooo much! O_o But this is a HUGE improvement and jump in skill from the first try. ^w^ I love it.

XD wait till i post page 5 XDDD i did it kinda almost the same as the first time, but i cried when i saw the different, i didnt know i improved so much (not to sound conseeded)

^^ I had someone tell me that I improved alot since the last time I put anything up but I honestly can't see the difference since they're so close. Improvement is always good, and it's always awesome when someone say's you've improved alot.

re draw something you were once really proud of, youll be suprised of the differences

Yep. HUGE difference.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9081583/

wow! ill say

I'm so excited right now!

XDDDD

Everything looks so gorgeous.

thanks hun i worked really hard on this page

Perfect opening!

: D

Hmm, something of that world is broken...

dayum. the improvement from v1.0 is obvious. looking forward to more

I'm getting a Doctor Who flashback here. "Time... it's moving!"
Mind you, that is probably entirely because I'm needing to tie my mother down in front of the DVR and get her to watch that exact episode. Is it too much to ask that the woman who introduced me to Who keeps at least a year up to date?

But yeah, side tracking aside, it's a very dramatic opening. Perfectly chosen lines set to subtle imagery. I know you've said that the story is mostly keeping to the same plotline established before, but I'm still waiting baitedly for what comes next.

omg omg omg omg O_O you do landscapes so well O_O and I LOVE this! <33333

Funny you should say that, Allie... XP

Yes. Many

Falling? Yes, in a truck going down hill.
I must be 7 years old when I had that dream.