I will save it to look at it while on the drive to Vegas. =3

The idea certainly seems interesting

This definitely seems like a very interesting plot idea, already I find myself wondering exactly what would occur between the hosts they all find that would bring down Omnus. Very interesting, I want to know what happens! ><

The setup has merit, but this covers an awful lot of ground in a short amount of time. I mean, you go from "Dawn of Man" to "Industrial Revolution and World Wars" in the space of a sentence. I daresay I've heard this sort of story before, but I'd still like to see how you approach it.

And please, take out every instance of "There was" in the first paragraph. It's highly repetitive.