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By heartsong,
posted 18 years ago Traditional Artist

for poetigress's thursday prompt...thought id give it a try, i need to start writing more

originally was going to do a story...got stuck, and this came out
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hanksamson ~hanksamson

Writer

18 years ago

like i said before... love that you just did what felt right

heart-wrenching...

*still wishes he could bite Fate's hands and keep them away... couldve kept them away...*

heartsong ~heartsong

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Traditional Artist

18 years ago

*tight hug* no cryin

none can hope to hold Fate in check...she is too powerful, too cruel...a juggernaut impossible to stop as time itself

we can only hope to use the time she gives us wisely...squeezing everything we can from this life before its gone

hanksamson ~hanksamson

Writer

18 years ago

:3 i know *tight hugs* youre sho shmart!

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

*smile* not really...ive learned a thing or two perhaps...but im far from smart, or wise, or anything like that

hanksamson ~hanksamson

Writer

18 years ago

whatever you say, dearest ;)

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wait howd you do that? arent you in school right now?!!?!

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

bwahaha!!

proxies, m'dear, wonderful, i-know-how-to-get-around-the-blocker proxies ^^

DireWolf505 ~direwolf505

Furry MilTech Enthusiast

18 years ago

Wow, that's incredibly heavy, and moving.

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

ty

DireWolf505 ~direwolf505

Furry MilTech Enthusiast

18 years ago

Null sheen.

DoomCat ~doomcat

Writer

18 years ago

Really beautiful, and moving. Full of feeling.

Maybe puntuation was not that well done, but anyway it's beautiful...

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

hehe....i dont use a lot of punctuation in my poems ^^

DoomCat ~doomcat

Writer

18 years ago

I'm not sure what kind puntuation works for a poem, hehe.

Great job, btw!

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

ty ^^<3

and i dont think it rlly matters...i lot of poets used weird or no puntcuation

DoomCat ~doomcat

Writer

18 years ago

You are right, poems are a really free area in that sense... but you can work puntuation to make a poem said diferent things...

vixyyfox ~vixyyfox

Writer

18 years ago

*smiles... I liked it but it was so sad....

V.

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

*hug* for whatever reason, i find sad stories and poems easier to write than happy a lot of the time...they just come more easily

faruzah ~faruzah

Writer

18 years ago

*cries*

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

*hugs and gives you cookies*

no cryin hun

faruzah ~faruzah

Writer

18 years ago

*sniffle munch* 'kay...

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

*licks your cheek*

-_- isorry imake yousad

faruzah ~faruzah

Writer

18 years ago

You didn't. That was very well written! It just hit home a lot.

heartsong ~heartsong

OP

Traditional Artist

18 years ago

<3 *nuzzles* awww -_-

panzergulo ~panzergulo

Storyteller

17 years ago

Heavy. Touching. Sad. Very interesting read, this poem of yours.

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