Okay, I'm sorry about how you have to download it, but I can't seem to get it to work so it can be seen without errors, anyone who can tell me how to do that wins the internet. In any case, I've been told my work is good, so if you like the second part, but failed to see the first one, http://www.furaffinity.net/view/859519/ theres the link. I almost have the third part done, and I showed it to a friend and he loved it.