You made the collab with me.

The theme of alternate realities seems to be re-occurring.

hehe i guess

nice story, though i am not a fan of age regression, it didn't seem too overwhelming of the story to me

uh huh we tried not to make it too young :3

Not the most perfect thing in the world, but I must say, I am impressed.
It's official: You've improved a vast majority. I remember when you misspelled a lot of things. Now spelling seems 2nd nature.
Also, I do believe FA format uses brackets, not arrows.

i wasn'tthe one who edited it and i haven't improved cuz it was a cloab kinda and it was his idea

What do you mean you haven't? If some other stories aren't any indication that you've improved, then I guess either I've gone crazy officially, or well...actually, there can't be any other explanation.

maybe :P

It could be only a little improvement. Even still, you've improved regardless, that much is sure.

Nice! I REALLY like stories that bend reality! This was a PERFECT blend of detail and simplicity, and the only complaint I could EVER have is that there aren't more meetings between the two characters before the big change. Then again, that's like complaining about how the Lord of The Rings movies leave out the billion and one pointless details that Tolkien wrote in; it's really not something that matters overall. Regardless, this was a great story and I hope to see more, Corbyn!

aww thta kind of you :3

That's very kind of you, TheEeveeProphet. I had a lot of fun writing this story with Corbyn.