Hey, any artists viewing my page.....this is my first attempt at using actual line to start myself off. Usually I just draw it and be done with it, no pre lines or anything, so I am hoping I am getting this right. So please just tell me.....does this look like it is starting off "right"?

NOTE: this will probably be thrown into the scraps later....but I posted it now cause I do not know if watches see when new "scraps" are posted....