This was part of an in-class project we did this week, and has nothing to do with the comic I'm working on right now.

In class this week, the instructor had us group up (almost always a grade death-sentence for me, introverted as I am) and use a one page script he wrote to practice comic flow. Each group would decide how they thought the page should be approached, then draw it in a large area on the white-board. The goal was successful story telling with page/panel flow, and at the end of the class, the outcomes would all be compared side by side.

I actually did end up in a group for once, but unfortunately, we did NOT get to present our idea. There was a bit of clashing of group numbers and people in the class vs people NOT in the class and....its irrelivant, and to explain it would be to whine. So in the long run, there was not enough room for everyone to work, and as I was out of the room at the moment with one of my group members, the last spot was snagged and we got ousted.

This only really irked me because it means our group missed out on the instructor AND class critique; at this point in all of our college classes, we hardly EVER do actual class critique anymore, and its so hard to come by online, I was really looking forward to getting some outside input -.-

I decided to take the thumbnail I'd drawn for our idea and put it on paper. Because it involved a robot T-rex. And I liked my robot (cyborg?) T-rex design. I'm planning on tossing it in my pages folder to turn in at the end of the quarter, as my example of a break-out.

Sorry for the awkward image, my roommate is asleep, and the scanner is in her room, so I had to take a picture of it and adjust the levels on the computer. This will eventually be inked, and if i have time (cause I'd really like to) will be colored.

Script and Dialogue (which will be added later) by Don Long of AiC
Image in all its scratchyness by me

And seriously. Critique is welcomed. That WAS the point of the project :/