I was just writing a rather lengthy piece of feedback, but apparently this site is so damn idiotic that pressing the full-view button, deletes everything and I cannot recover it.

Fast recap of what I remember from it.

-Bad gun-handling.

-Generally nice poses! Especially the top guy.

- Fine expression on the top guy, less so on the gal below.

-Better poses that I've seen for a little while, from you :)

-A tad lacking in colouring, but still very much your style. Same goes for lines. I suggest trying to either lose the lines entirely, or give them a bigger part of the entire drawing. Like: thicker lines that creates contrast, combined with thin lines, or no lines for a faster transition of colours. Like blending colours for a sense of speed and urgency!

Otherwise keep up drawing! :D

^.^' not really proud of this myself gamel .

I don't really agree with you on the lines but thats just me , I prefer line art than painted style and thicker lines just make things look ....un realistic to be honist .


yes XD I agree the hands didnt want to go wright with the gun , Reason I am not so proud of this drawing .

Thank you , I am not amazing at poses , I keep trying differnt ones but they next to never come out correct .

Narric looked at it when it was done and I demanded he didnt critic it . XD I know there is so much wrong but I can not for the life of me fix it , I guess my skill isnt at that level yet

I understand this feeling :)

Did you get the wacom bamboo yet? Is it treating you well? :D

yep yep , It's great <3 Thank you for telling me about it

<^.^>

The question to really ask here..
Where did i go wrong to end up falling backward?

XD where did you go wrong to fall in the first place

Looks amazing ;w;

Thank you paka

You're welcome, Ruru ^^

oh wow this looks amazing! :O

I am glad you like it my dear <3 Thank you for commissioning me.