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This is episode 1 of the second season of my series. Please, do NOT whine about how long it is; I'm fully aware of how long it is and you don't have to express that like I'm some kinda idiot. The reason it's so long is because, well, look at LAST season's first episode. I had to split it into three parts (each part 12 pages), and if you can do simple math, 12 x 3 = 36 pages. So, really, THIS season's first episode is the exact same, with just two more pages. SO, NO COMPLAINING! Besides, you can't rush good work. If you rush things like this, you get a meager piece of trash with hardly any pages or any entertainment. Well, I'm not that kind of writer. I put in the work and the hours to produce something that I really hope is up to my standards and is able to fully entertain all of you and make you intrigued. That is what I hope each and every time I put one of these out.
As for this episode itself, I daresay that not ALL of them will be this long. I simply had to introduce the new playing field to the contestants, which means all the buildings and interns and other minor characters who will be there to help out and stuff. Then, I had to explain how the season's challenges will go, while going into detail on exactly WHAT those challenges are and how they work. So, after getting through with the challenge ITSELF, I then had to do a lot more with the very first elimination, to make it all fit and come together. Believe me, it is NOT easy. If you're a good writer, you need to do a LOT to put out good products. It's the same with you artists: we're much of the same, when you think about it.
So, I did the very best I could, working with 52 characters (plus several important interns, and a cameo from a certain annoyance). I hope you all enjoy this, and...please, GIVE ME GOOD COMMENTS! Do NOT just give comments with a single line or sentence. That's just rude and REALLY lazy. If I can write an entire thing like this in only a few days, the LEAST you can do is write a decent comment telling me your thoughts, opinions, and more! Seriously, do you KNOW how much it drives me nuts to see comments that read: "Great job so far. Keep it up!" or "Wonderful. Make me laugh." or anything else along those lines. Seriously. I write something that's probably more pages than most fan-fictions you all have read in your lifetimes, and you give me comments like THAT? Are you seriously that lazy? Fix it, or else I will beat you all! Anyway, enjoy.
Episode 1 Challenge Genre: Action (Video Game)
Episode 1 Video Game Parody: Sonic Adventure 2: Battle
Important Journal: Teams, Eliminations, Episodes, Confessionals
Total Drama Vore Action Edgic: Edgic
Contestants:
1. Aaron Scales [Mobian Parrot/Star Warrior] (Male)
2. Alyssia Blustripe [Skunkette] (Female)
3. Anthony Smith [Anthro Red Ant] (Male)
4. April [Horse] (Female)
5. Aurion Black [Shiny Zoroark] (Male)
6. Brandon Chan [Lucario] (Male)
7. Brittany [Rabbit] (Female)
8. Caleb [Fennec Fox] (Male)
9. Cerin Wolfe [Dragon] (Male)
10. Char [Charizard] (Male)
11. Chrissy [Alien] (Female)
12. Colza [Arctic Wolf] (Male)
13. Denco [Anthro Silver Wolf] (Male)
14. Elise Dera [Lykachin] (Female)
15. Galen [Gardevoir] (Female)
16. Gear Grey [Grey Kitsune] (Male)
17. Gloria [Draconian] (Female)
18. Homicide [Dragon] (Male)
19. James Greenwater [Pikachu/Eevee/Vulpix/Zoura] (Male)
20. Kali Shadiya [Flygon] (Female)
21. Kara Merkuria Zastel [Panther Demi] (Female)
22. Kendra Pyrous [Wolfess] (Female)
23. Kiki [Neko] (Female)
24. Lorraine Valshire [Anthro Manadragon/Gemron] (Female)
25. Lucas [Mewtwo] (Male)
26. Marisa Pussigal [Neko] (Female)
27. Matthew Guerrero [Blaziken] (Male)
28. Mewth [Mew] (Male)
29. Mizuhiro Neko [Catwings Shapeshifter] (Male)
30. Muirne [Mouse] (Female)
31. Myuu Mitsu [Minccino] (Male)
32. Nate [Eevee/Charizard Shapeshifter] (Male)
33. Nite Tailleur [Dragon Shapeshifter] (Male)
34. Nyterious Nytedodger Daligdig [Blue Arctic Fox] (Male)
35. Richter [Rat] (Male)
36. Ricky Raccoon [Raccoon] (Male)
37. Ryan Murphy [Kangaroo] (Male)
38. Sagi [Mewtwo] (Male)
39. Seolfyr Plateado Argyros [Houndoom] (Male)
40. Sicha Tanner [Skunkette] (Female)
41. Silenrea Anon [Latias] (Female)
42. SilverFang Summerwind [Wolfilisk] (Male)
43. Soline [Pantheress] (Female)
44. Sparkster Lightpath [Pikachu] (Male)
45. Spencer Macrowolf [Wolf] (Male)
46. Tag [Mobian Mosquito] (Male)
47. Taijey H. Okale [Anthro Feline] (Female)
48. Terra [Half-Tigress] (Female)
49. Volsar Rewtree [Abra] (Male)
50. Wolf-9 [Genetically Altered Wolf] (Male)
51. Yoshi Blueblood [Luxray/Shaymin] (Female)
52. Zane [Toon Hedgehog] (Male)
Host:
Josh (Meowth) [Male]
Assistants:
DJ (Meowth) [Male]
Grey (Hyena-Wolf) [Male]
Lead Camera Girl:
Twilight Sparkle (Pony) [Female]
Punishment Girl:
Frost (Cat) [Female]
As for this episode itself, I daresay that not ALL of them will be this long. I simply had to introduce the new playing field to the contestants, which means all the buildings and interns and other minor characters who will be there to help out and stuff. Then, I had to explain how the season's challenges will go, while going into detail on exactly WHAT those challenges are and how they work. So, after getting through with the challenge ITSELF, I then had to do a lot more with the very first elimination, to make it all fit and come together. Believe me, it is NOT easy. If you're a good writer, you need to do a LOT to put out good products. It's the same with you artists: we're much of the same, when you think about it.
So, I did the very best I could, working with 52 characters (plus several important interns, and a cameo from a certain annoyance). I hope you all enjoy this, and...please, GIVE ME GOOD COMMENTS! Do NOT just give comments with a single line or sentence. That's just rude and REALLY lazy. If I can write an entire thing like this in only a few days, the LEAST you can do is write a decent comment telling me your thoughts, opinions, and more! Seriously, do you KNOW how much it drives me nuts to see comments that read: "Great job so far. Keep it up!" or "Wonderful. Make me laugh." or anything else along those lines. Seriously. I write something that's probably more pages than most fan-fictions you all have read in your lifetimes, and you give me comments like THAT? Are you seriously that lazy? Fix it, or else I will beat you all! Anyway, enjoy.
Episode 1 Challenge Genre: Action (Video Game)
Episode 1 Video Game Parody: Sonic Adventure 2: Battle
Important Journal: Teams, Eliminations, Episodes, Confessionals
Total Drama Vore Action Edgic: Edgic
Contestants:
1. Aaron Scales [Mobian Parrot/Star Warrior] (Male)
2. Alyssia Blustripe [Skunkette] (Female)
3. Anthony Smith [Anthro Red Ant] (Male)
4. April [Horse] (Female)
5. Aurion Black [Shiny Zoroark] (Male)
6. Brandon Chan [Lucario] (Male)
7. Brittany [Rabbit] (Female)
8. Caleb [Fennec Fox] (Male)
9. Cerin Wolfe [Dragon] (Male)
10. Char [Charizard] (Male)
11. Chrissy [Alien] (Female)
12. Colza [Arctic Wolf] (Male)
13. Denco [Anthro Silver Wolf] (Male)
14. Elise Dera [Lykachin] (Female)
15. Galen [Gardevoir] (Female)
16. Gear Grey [Grey Kitsune] (Male)
17. Gloria [Draconian] (Female)
18. Homicide [Dragon] (Male)
19. James Greenwater [Pikachu/Eevee/Vulpix/Zoura] (Male)
20. Kali Shadiya [Flygon] (Female)
21. Kara Merkuria Zastel [Panther Demi] (Female)
22. Kendra Pyrous [Wolfess] (Female)
23. Kiki [Neko] (Female)
24. Lorraine Valshire [Anthro Manadragon/Gemron] (Female)
25. Lucas [Mewtwo] (Male)
26. Marisa Pussigal [Neko] (Female)
27. Matthew Guerrero [Blaziken] (Male)
28. Mewth [Mew] (Male)
29. Mizuhiro Neko [Catwings Shapeshifter] (Male)
30. Muirne [Mouse] (Female)
31. Myuu Mitsu [Minccino] (Male)
32. Nate [Eevee/Charizard Shapeshifter] (Male)
33. Nite Tailleur [Dragon Shapeshifter] (Male)
34. Nyterious Nytedodger Daligdig [Blue Arctic Fox] (Male)
35. Richter [Rat] (Male)
36. Ricky Raccoon [Raccoon] (Male)
37. Ryan Murphy [Kangaroo] (Male)
38. Sagi [Mewtwo] (Male)
39. Seolfyr Plateado Argyros [Houndoom] (Male)
40. Sicha Tanner [Skunkette] (Female)
41. Silenrea Anon [Latias] (Female)
42. SilverFang Summerwind [Wolfilisk] (Male)
43. Soline [Pantheress] (Female)
44. Sparkster Lightpath [Pikachu] (Male)
45. Spencer Macrowolf [Wolf] (Male)
46. Tag [Mobian Mosquito] (Male)
47. Taijey H. Okale [Anthro Feline] (Female)
48. Terra [Half-Tigress] (Female)
49. Volsar Rewtree [Abra] (Male)
50. Wolf-9 [Genetically Altered Wolf] (Male)
51. Yoshi Blueblood [Luxray/Shaymin] (Female)
52. Zane [Toon Hedgehog] (Male)
Host:
Josh (Meowth) [Male]
Assistants:
DJ (Meowth) [Male]
Grey (Hyena-Wolf) [Male]
Lead Camera Girl:
Twilight Sparkle (Pony) [Female]
Punishment Girl:
Frost (Cat) [Female]
Category Story / Vore
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Richter is already whining every single time that he can't do the same. UGH! I am NOT putting it into the author's notes; I have enough stuff already there. It's not MEANT for stories; I don't care what others do. Now I guess I have to copy and paste the entire thing into a note for YOU as well. *sighs* Seriously, why me? Why can't people just get Microsoft Word? You don't HAVE to buy it; you can download it!
I'll send you some notes with the story...but, please, leave your comments about it on HERE.
I'll send you some notes with the story...but, please, leave your comments about it on HERE.
Technically, yeah, you should've. But, it wouldn't have mattered; second or third place is really much of the same. Plus, D-Claw jumped off your nose. ANYONE would've been distracted by that. Still, you were so cute and hilarious, Spencer dearest~
Thanks very much. I'm glad you're finally paying attention, and I love ya.
Thanks very much. I'm glad you're finally paying attention, and I love ya.
And I'm glad you're alright with that. You're a funny macro wolf who loves to butt-squash and stomp on micros. That just screams hilarity right there!
I guess you'll just have to wait and see, eh? IF you're still around. With what happened in this episode, I daresay that NO ONE can think they're safe.
I guess you'll just have to wait and see, eh? IF you're still around. With what happened in this episode, I daresay that NO ONE can think they're safe.
Very interesting start, i'm very curious about that vote, won't say anything more not to ruin it for others but it definitely didn't turn out as i half expected it too, it was an amazing read and i cannot wait to see more,
i can see this is going to be a very powerful series, i've know who i'm hoping on winning the series but we'll have to see, also very interesting mechanics for the placing of teams and what happens, i'd put more about it but i can't this episode cause don't wanna spoil for other readers, will probably talk more about it on a later episode,
Hope you enjoy writing as others will reading, even though it had some things i dislike reading it's just the nature of such a large story, Can't wait to see what twists and turns you have for later, thoughj i do have 1 question, do the players have any influence on the votes used in the story or is it more your writing it in as it fits?
Thanks for Taking your time to read
i can see this is going to be a very powerful series, i've know who i'm hoping on winning the series but we'll have to see, also very interesting mechanics for the placing of teams and what happens, i'd put more about it but i can't this episode cause don't wanna spoil for other readers, will probably talk more about it on a later episode,
Hope you enjoy writing as others will reading, even though it had some things i dislike reading it's just the nature of such a large story, Can't wait to see what twists and turns you have for later, thoughj i do have 1 question, do the players have any influence on the votes used in the story or is it more your writing it in as it fits?
Thanks for Taking your time to read
I wonder if I should make a voting table or something...hmm. Well, you're free to say what you wish; a few certain others kinda ruined it already anyway. But, I'm glad it was mostly a shocker; since Muirne and a few others called me out on being too predicable last season, I wanted to not be like that again.
Well, whoever you are, I'm super happy that you like this! I know I could always do better, as nothing is perfect, but I really do try my best. It may not have CONSTANT vore, but I really do hope it has enough other elements to make it continue to be successful and entertaining to readers. Just so you know, the teams were done randomly; it's the only fair way to do things. Sure, I could've just put teams together that "fit" and "made for good story", but I didn't want to fix the story like that. I simply put all the names into a hat, and then randomly drew them out and put them on each team. That gives me a challenge then, which I like; it forces me to work with how the teams were sorted out.
I have a strong idea on what "things" you disliked, but...well, they're my own personal likes/fetishes/kinks, and I simply adore using them, as I find them funny. But, overall, I'm just really glad you liked it! That means a lot to me. And, the players? Do you mean...the users who own the characters, or the characters themselves? I'm not entirely sure what you mean. I guess...kinda a combo of both. See, a few people outside the story are very close to the person who was voted out, so logically their character would not have voted for them. But, those outside the story who AREN'T close to the one voted out (or simply just acquaintances and nothing more), they could be swayed to vote a certain way, which is what a certain wolf successfully did.
Thank YOU for taking YOUR time to write!
Well, whoever you are, I'm super happy that you like this! I know I could always do better, as nothing is perfect, but I really do try my best. It may not have CONSTANT vore, but I really do hope it has enough other elements to make it continue to be successful and entertaining to readers. Just so you know, the teams were done randomly; it's the only fair way to do things. Sure, I could've just put teams together that "fit" and "made for good story", but I didn't want to fix the story like that. I simply put all the names into a hat, and then randomly drew them out and put them on each team. That gives me a challenge then, which I like; it forces me to work with how the teams were sorted out.
I have a strong idea on what "things" you disliked, but...well, they're my own personal likes/fetishes/kinks, and I simply adore using them, as I find them funny. But, overall, I'm just really glad you liked it! That means a lot to me. And, the players? Do you mean...the users who own the characters, or the characters themselves? I'm not entirely sure what you mean. I guess...kinda a combo of both. See, a few people outside the story are very close to the person who was voted out, so logically their character would not have voted for them. But, those outside the story who AREN'T close to the one voted out (or simply just acquaintances and nothing more), they could be swayed to vote a certain way, which is what a certain wolf successfully did.
Thank YOU for taking YOUR time to write!
I must say Joshy, you had me bitting my claws wondering who would come in first. Caught me off guard as well when I pulled through for the team. *wraps tail around the kitty host* You're a very sneaky kitty.
D-Claw: As for Volsar, well he's living up to a reputation of an annoyance. He's got some nerve messing with a top notch super-villain as I.
D-Claw: As for Volsar, well he's living up to a reputation of an annoyance. He's got some nerve messing with a top notch super-villain as I.
*blushes* Hey, I'm not the ONLY sneaky kitty around. After being killed a number of times, it was only fair that our resident dark orange kitty cat finally came through. *cuddles against* Oh, and D-Claw? You behave! You're getting a big dinner as it is, not to mention two free remade video games, so be nice.
Ha, I just love it when people are left shocked! It means I did my job as a writer. And, I COULD always make a voting chart to say who voted for who, much like with Survivor. But, we'll see. It shouldn't be THAT hard to figure out, though; you kinda have to read the contestants' reactions at the end when the vote was read.
Happy Thanksgiving to you, too.
Happy Thanksgiving to you, too.
Thanks so much, Cerin. Glad you enjoyed it.
Yep, Cerin revealed his true form after he got annoyed with Volsar picking on all the contestants. It ALMOST cost him the challenge, but thankfully not. Cerin will bounce back; he simply needs to learn how to control himself.
I love shocking. I love making people stunned. I knew everyone would be very shocked by this.
Yep, Cerin revealed his true form after he got annoyed with Volsar picking on all the contestants. It ALMOST cost him the challenge, but thankfully not. Cerin will bounce back; he simply needs to learn how to control himself.
I love shocking. I love making people stunned. I knew everyone would be very shocked by this.
Well...that was a very interesting episode. Volsar's fight with Cerin was epic, though had I gone all out he wouldn't have stood a chance. Though Volsar was having fun then, and fun is being just a little stronger then your opponent. So many got to smell my ass, ah the pleasures.
Hey, don't call out Cerin like that; he's no slouch! Haven't you see his confessionals and pictures? He's deadly! At least on paper. *snickers* And, you're just evil. I hope you know that. You deserved what you got; you can only be an ass so long until someone smarter than you turns the tables on you and pays you back. In this case, it was a wolf from my own state~
Okay...just...fucking WOOOOOW.
*That crystal is going to be important. Will need to watch out for that later.
*Seriously need to make alliances with some people while we have the luxury of not having to vote one another off. I can't be so cold and distant all the time - it'd mean my death at the first vote! I can help my team and still have my rivalries and issues at the same time.
*Nice, Sonic challenge. Looks like all of those runs through Sonic 3 & Knuckles and everything prior paid off!
*HOOOOLYYYY SHIT VOLSAR. WOW. Did NOT see that coming. AT ALL. What. the. FUCK.
*Species first is so very true...but the last thing I want to do is end up costing my team a challenge because I'm trying to save Sagi's butt. I've gotta start training him to fend for himself - especially with Volsar out ALREADY.
(Out of character notes - Josh, you sure as hell seem to be going out of your way to stop a lot of drama in a series that focuses on it. I went into this competition with 2 enemies and one heated rivalry, with the expectation of making more enemies. I wouldn't be suprised if my involvement in this story ends with me no longer having enemies and somehow making friends. And thank you for acknowledging my outside-of-story actions in-story. As little as needed to be done for that, I appreciate it.)
Writing a confessional now!
Oh, and Silenrea - Josh talked to me. My "mental barrier" as it were is now lowered. Feel free to message me any way you like.
*That crystal is going to be important. Will need to watch out for that later.
*Seriously need to make alliances with some people while we have the luxury of not having to vote one another off. I can't be so cold and distant all the time - it'd mean my death at the first vote! I can help my team and still have my rivalries and issues at the same time.
*Nice, Sonic challenge. Looks like all of those runs through Sonic 3 & Knuckles and everything prior paid off!
*HOOOOLYYYY SHIT VOLSAR. WOW. Did NOT see that coming. AT ALL. What. the. FUCK.
*Species first is so very true...but the last thing I want to do is end up costing my team a challenge because I'm trying to save Sagi's butt. I've gotta start training him to fend for himself - especially with Volsar out ALREADY.
(Out of character notes - Josh, you sure as hell seem to be going out of your way to stop a lot of drama in a series that focuses on it. I went into this competition with 2 enemies and one heated rivalry, with the expectation of making more enemies. I wouldn't be suprised if my involvement in this story ends with me no longer having enemies and somehow making friends. And thank you for acknowledging my outside-of-story actions in-story. As little as needed to be done for that, I appreciate it.)
Writing a confessional now!
Oh, and Silenrea - Josh talked to me. My "mental barrier" as it were is now lowered. Feel free to message me any way you like.
Uh, thank you for that exclamation, Lucas.
*snickers* Very interesting, Lucas. Will that crystal be important later on? Maybe. It's funny how both you AND Silenrea mentioned it to me now; you two think alike a lot of the time, whether you realize it or not. We'll see how you bond with your team with the future episodes; everything can't start off that easy, as characters need to grow into form. Yep, a Sonic challenge, but it was more like a random race...oh, but that's all Sonic is, so never mind! And, yep, Volsar went bye-bye. I just LOVE how shocked some of you are. It's hilarious and downright awesome. I love shocking people and making them read something unexpected~
(Well...there's a difference between GOOD drama and BAD drama, and...um, I don't know. I just do what my heart tells me to do. I know that's cliche, but it's the truth. I do everything in my power to make this as fun and hilarious for everyone involved, regardless of their issues otherwise)
*snickers* Very interesting, Lucas. Will that crystal be important later on? Maybe. It's funny how both you AND Silenrea mentioned it to me now; you two think alike a lot of the time, whether you realize it or not. We'll see how you bond with your team with the future episodes; everything can't start off that easy, as characters need to grow into form. Yep, a Sonic challenge, but it was more like a random race...oh, but that's all Sonic is, so never mind! And, yep, Volsar went bye-bye. I just LOVE how shocked some of you are. It's hilarious and downright awesome. I love shocking people and making them read something unexpected~
(Well...there's a difference between GOOD drama and BAD drama, and...um, I don't know. I just do what my heart tells me to do. I know that's cliche, but it's the truth. I do everything in my power to make this as fun and hilarious for everyone involved, regardless of their issues otherwise)
>Sonic
>Random race
Bullshit. I was the kind of person that found damn near every special stage ring in S3&K, had Super/Hyper waaaay before I should have. I spent more time trying to grind out rings and 1-ups and bonus stages than I did racing through the stages. Sonic can be played as "hold right and win" but it's just no fun like that IMO.
>Random race
Bullshit. I was the kind of person that found damn near every special stage ring in S3&K, had Super/Hyper waaaay before I should have. I spent more time trying to grind out rings and 1-ups and bonus stages than I did racing through the stages. Sonic can be played as "hold right and win" but it's just no fun like that IMO.
Colza is so insane.
Nope, but that's what happens when you come in second or third, and Frost is the best in the business! Sucks to be you~
He got what he deserved. He went up against a very intelligent and passionate wolf, and he didn't have the numbers on his side this time around.
We'll have to wait and see. He could go next, he could go in four episodes, or he could last quite a while! Who knows? With this shocking elimination, you'll never know WHAT I'll do next.
Nope, but that's what happens when you come in second or third, and Frost is the best in the business! Sucks to be you~
He got what he deserved. He went up against a very intelligent and passionate wolf, and he didn't have the numbers on his side this time around.
We'll have to wait and see. He could go next, he could go in four episodes, or he could last quite a while! Who knows? With this shocking elimination, you'll never know WHAT I'll do next.
*rubs butt in pain* OWW THAT CAT SPANKS HARD!
Anyways, HOLY CRAP. I had high expectations for Episode 1, and I have been blown away! I like the balance of contestants, even those who only spoke once, but I think everyone got to speak once right? As for the challenge, the escaping the city thing was an awesome idea, and I am that weird that I would question why the military is firing at us. Besides the point, I can't believe you kicked Volsar off first! The little Abra deserved it anyways. You had my heart pounding in the same way my heart pounds when I watch Survivor! And I fulfilled my quest not be kicked off first! Nate and Mewth, I have your backs for the whole game, and Sakato, I will protect you from Chris! So, I guess that's all I have to say. Now for the long anxious wait for Episode 2.
Check out my contestant chart: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9267407/
Anyways, HOLY CRAP. I had high expectations for Episode 1, and I have been blown away! I like the balance of contestants, even those who only spoke once, but I think everyone got to speak once right? As for the challenge, the escaping the city thing was an awesome idea, and I am that weird that I would question why the military is firing at us. Besides the point, I can't believe you kicked Volsar off first! The little Abra deserved it anyways. You had my heart pounding in the same way my heart pounds when I watch Survivor! And I fulfilled my quest not be kicked off first! Nate and Mewth, I have your backs for the whole game, and Sakato, I will protect you from Chris! So, I guess that's all I have to say. Now for the long anxious wait for Episode 2.
Check out my contestant chart: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9267407/
That's what you get for being a near-loser.
I'm shocked at how much I've been writing, but by the look of things, it sure worked out alright! I'm really glad you were shocked and excited and everything went beyond your expectations! The first elimination is sometimes a shocker, and I wanted it to be no different this time around, either. He had it coming. So long as I could make you feel a lot of different emotions and feelings while you read, I did my job. And for that, I'm happy. I'm sure Nate and Mewth will be thankful for your kindness, too, whenever they notice it.
Yes, I saw it. I don't really want to comment every single time, since that's just a waste, but nice update~
I'm shocked at how much I've been writing, but by the look of things, it sure worked out alright! I'm really glad you were shocked and excited and everything went beyond your expectations! The first elimination is sometimes a shocker, and I wanted it to be no different this time around, either. He had it coming. So long as I could make you feel a lot of different emotions and feelings while you read, I did my job. And for that, I'm happy. I'm sure Nate and Mewth will be thankful for your kindness, too, whenever they notice it.
Yes, I saw it. I don't really want to comment every single time, since that's just a waste, but nice update~
*whines in pain*
That is seriously good writing if you can stir up emotions like that. It was a pretty bold move, but it sure paid off ^^
I hope they notice it soon
And that link is for the others to notice, I know you know about it
And now I shall wait impatiently for Episode 2!
That is seriously good writing if you can stir up emotions like that. It was a pretty bold move, but it sure paid off ^^
I hope they notice it soon
And that link is for the others to notice, I know you know about it
And now I shall wait impatiently for Episode 2!
Yep, no complaints here. Though I would like to see her squashing some opponents instead of virtual people, but virtual victims are better than none. It was quite shocking, especially since he seemed so well-liked (how he managed that I have no idea...), but I can't say he didn't have it coming, after blowing the challenge.
I really loved that nod to Chrissy's recent appearance alteration.
So, quick question, for confessionals, do we need permission from the character's creator to include them or can we just grab any random contestant or person that hasn't been exempted?
I really loved that nod to Chrissy's recent appearance alteration.
So, quick question, for confessionals, do we need permission from the character's creator to include them or can we just grab any random contestant or person that hasn't been exempted?
Well, since all the challenges are going to be taking place in virtual reality, that might be hard. But, maybe while the teams are not in a challenge, she could squash some. As for you-know-who getting voted out, yeah, he totally had it coming. He's well-liked, but still a total lazy-ass, disgusting, rotten Pokemon.
Heh, I was wondering if you'd catch that!
Generally, you don't need permission from the standpoint that you don't do anything that they would honestly not like or want to have happen. For this, it's usually best to check their profiles (on my one journal where you signed up) to see if you're using any kinks and whether or not they'd be okay with it. Otherwise, it's fine to do; everyone signed up to be in my story, and they ALL know that confessionals take place, so it's more than fine.
Heh, I was wondering if you'd catch that!
Generally, you don't need permission from the standpoint that you don't do anything that they would honestly not like or want to have happen. For this, it's usually best to check their profiles (on my one journal where you signed up) to see if you're using any kinks and whether or not they'd be okay with it. Otherwise, it's fine to do; everyone signed up to be in my story, and they ALL know that confessionals take place, so it's more than fine.
Well even if they didn't really get squashed, it'd still be fun to watch Chrissy do it to someone with a name. But yeah, if she stays around long enough I'd love to see her get some real squashing in too. I know, I could hardly read his confessionals because of some of the things he did.
Totally caught it.
Awesome, working on mine now.
Totally caught it.
Awesome, working on mine now.
:) Hey, I should do something in return for this fucking awesome thing! I'm loving it so far! haha.. I wish I'd known that virtual reality is what you were going with.. haha, Elise is well versed in that field (its commonplace in her world) .. as soon as I got the set up for the place, I envisioned her walking in and calling the set up primitive, mabye cute.. :p (silly earth tech.. haha..)
Ha, you're so awesome. I love Elise. I'm sorry that, for the most part, she doesn't have that big a role. But, with so many characters, I'm trying to give each and every one a little airtime. I tried my best, you know? And, I'm just glad that you're loving it; that's my prime directive.
:)
I can't wait for a final fantasy type challange.. Elise is literally right at home with that, considering she lives in an rpg world.. haha XD
And, if I may ask, Elise will definately want to know how your running these machines.. so, perhaps in a confessional-type-thing, she may find out? possibly hack it and sync up her own internal systems (she has basically an inner super computer, do to her job.. haha, its used to sync up to virtual reality back home, much more safe.. for her.. :p)
I can't wait for a final fantasy type challange.. Elise is literally right at home with that, considering she lives in an rpg world.. haha XD
And, if I may ask, Elise will definately want to know how your running these machines.. so, perhaps in a confessional-type-thing, she may find out? possibly hack it and sync up her own internal systems (she has basically an inner super computer, do to her job.. haha, its used to sync up to virtual reality back home, much more safe.. for her.. :p)
I suppose it's alright...so long as it doesn't give her an unfair advantage in any way. I can't let that happen; I was accused of letting Aaron have unfair advantages in season 1, and took a lot of heat from it. If it's just meant for another way for Elise to go into virtual reality, then fine. If not, I'm afraid you can't do that.
yeah, its just a more "conventional" way of her doing it..
I want to kind of convey that shes not from round here.. nor is she from 'round this time.. haha.. and she doesnt have much exposition so far, so I'm hoping that the confessionals can do her character some good.
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also, having gotten rather far, I have a just a few things to say about the portrayal of Elise. its pretty good, other than she's pretty well spoken, and not one to lightly be commanded around by the likes of Kara.. or listen to the idiotic puns of a certain fire-bird.. haha..
and, twoards the end of the competition.. she isn't an idiot, haha.. It just came off as you portraying her as one. Its just sorta bugged me. Its alright, though. you're doing a pretty good job at portraying her for what little time shes in it, and im glad you put her in at all. :)
I want to kind of convey that shes not from round here.. nor is she from 'round this time.. haha.. and she doesnt have much exposition so far, so I'm hoping that the confessionals can do her character some good.
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also, having gotten rather far, I have a just a few things to say about the portrayal of Elise. its pretty good, other than she's pretty well spoken, and not one to lightly be commanded around by the likes of Kara.. or listen to the idiotic puns of a certain fire-bird.. haha..
and, twoards the end of the competition.. she isn't an idiot, haha.. It just came off as you portraying her as one. Its just sorta bugged me. Its alright, though. you're doing a pretty good job at portraying her for what little time shes in it, and im glad you put her in at all. :)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9305999/
here is the first one. the second will be shorter, and up shortly.
here is the first one. the second will be shorter, and up shortly.
Jesus Christ Josh, are you trying to kill me?! I was up last night waiting to see what you had in store, and even had dreams about it, but THIS! Good god, I thought my heart was going to give out from all the excitment and terror at the end!
I have to admit, it was hard getting through all 38 pages, (my fault, not yours), but damn if it wasn't worth it. Not only did I play that "major role" you hinted at, but you pitted me against Volsar, one of the biggest names in this series, but your more or less put me against most of the big name players on my team! And on top of that, you booted Volsar! I can't even express how much of a shock that is. Just... wow.
Okay, shock and near heart attack aside, I think it goes without saying how I feel about this one. That is easily the biggest twist I've ever seen out of this game, and puts this on a whole new level.
As far as critisisms; apart from the typical word errors, nothing. Even on a personal level. I was almost annoyed by Galen's sudden hatred of me, but as I read, you really hit it dead on. I'm not the easiest guy to like. I'm not easy to hate, but unless you get to know me, I'm more of a loner then anything, and I'm more then happy to see that play into the game. I can't even conplane about how I pretty much just made half my teams shit-list, given just how much this sakes things up.
All in all, bravo Josh. And you know I say this not for surviving in your seires, but as a read who's been blown away. Oh, and no hard feelings Volsar?
I have to admit, it was hard getting through all 38 pages, (my fault, not yours), but damn if it wasn't worth it. Not only did I play that "major role" you hinted at, but you pitted me against Volsar, one of the biggest names in this series, but your more or less put me against most of the big name players on my team! And on top of that, you booted Volsar! I can't even express how much of a shock that is. Just... wow.
Okay, shock and near heart attack aside, I think it goes without saying how I feel about this one. That is easily the biggest twist I've ever seen out of this game, and puts this on a whole new level.
As far as critisisms; apart from the typical word errors, nothing. Even on a personal level. I was almost annoyed by Galen's sudden hatred of me, but as I read, you really hit it dead on. I'm not the easiest guy to like. I'm not easy to hate, but unless you get to know me, I'm more of a loner then anything, and I'm more then happy to see that play into the game. I can't even conplane about how I pretty much just made half my teams shit-list, given just how much this sakes things up.
All in all, bravo Josh. And you know I say this not for surviving in your seires, but as a read who's been blown away. Oh, and no hard feelings Volsar?
You have no idea how happy and giddy your comment makes me. To know that I got THOSE kind of emotions out of you? Well, I seriously must've did something right this time around! And, all the way up to the final page, I got your heart racing. While I don't wish a heart attack on you, I am pleased with hearing that. It means I kept you entertained!
Yeah, I was shocked with how much I wrote myself, but...it just happened. You can't rush perfection (or something you hope is as perfect as possible). I couldn't wait to see the look on your face (theoretically speaking) when you found out what your major role was. But, I knew you were the wolf for the job, and I couldn't be happier with how it worked out. This just goes to show you that, just like in Survivor, all those big-named players don't ALWAYS run the game. Anyone can make a big move, and you did one to kick off the season with a bang, my fellow Montana wolf. I'm super glad you're happy.
Well, I told you that I had learned some things since last season, and that this was gonna be a whole new experience! I didn't lie, did I? Heh.
Believe me, it's not easy having players talk crap about those I love, but...well, sometimes, the truth hurts. I'm not saying anything negative about you at all, but...well, you said it yourself. You are a loner and you do seem emotional at times, like with how I accidentally upset you with season 1's finale. Galen was just giving a reason to vote you out; she probably didn't mean it to the point of pure hatred. But...after what happened, who knows? With Volsar gone, like you said, you might be on a lot of their hate lists. We'll have to see just how long you last, David~
Thank you SO much for your wonderful comments. Damn they're awesome; I can't tell you how excited and pleased and happy you make me with you spill your guts and share your heart and feelings with me every time I post an episode. Thanks so much! Oh, and I think Volsar will be fine; he just likes to have fun, after all.
Yeah, I was shocked with how much I wrote myself, but...it just happened. You can't rush perfection (or something you hope is as perfect as possible). I couldn't wait to see the look on your face (theoretically speaking) when you found out what your major role was. But, I knew you were the wolf for the job, and I couldn't be happier with how it worked out. This just goes to show you that, just like in Survivor, all those big-named players don't ALWAYS run the game. Anyone can make a big move, and you did one to kick off the season with a bang, my fellow Montana wolf. I'm super glad you're happy.
Well, I told you that I had learned some things since last season, and that this was gonna be a whole new experience! I didn't lie, did I? Heh.
Believe me, it's not easy having players talk crap about those I love, but...well, sometimes, the truth hurts. I'm not saying anything negative about you at all, but...well, you said it yourself. You are a loner and you do seem emotional at times, like with how I accidentally upset you with season 1's finale. Galen was just giving a reason to vote you out; she probably didn't mean it to the point of pure hatred. But...after what happened, who knows? With Volsar gone, like you said, you might be on a lot of their hate lists. We'll have to see just how long you last, David~
Thank you SO much for your wonderful comments. Damn they're awesome; I can't tell you how excited and pleased and happy you make me with you spill your guts and share your heart and feelings with me every time I post an episode. Thanks so much! Oh, and I think Volsar will be fine; he just likes to have fun, after all.
Well, if this keeps up your going to put me in the ground! *takes a deep breath* Yes you sure did do something right, if your sole goal was to make this quiet, calm, mostly well mannored wolf nearly have a emotional pannick attack!
Hey, I'm not saying its a bad thing. Writing massive works is one of your greatest tallents. And I hope you got the reaction you where hoping for. Nearly drpped me. And if this is how the stroy is "kicked off", I can't wait to see where things go.
Well, you really show'd just how much you learned.
Hey, if there is ANYONE in parisipating in this story who can take critisism, its me. In fact, I'm glad to see you playing my weaknesses. And off all your players, you have goof-balls, psychos, control freaks, egomaniacs, and even shy little weaklings, (no offence meant towards anyone). But of everyone, Nine is the only real gloomy loner, and I'm glad to see that being used like everyone elses flaws. And I know I can be emotional at times, and I'm sorry about that, but I'm also honest, and want to be honest with my friend. And as far as the hatred, both in character and that that makes it outside, (I saw you standing up for me), its nothing I can't handle ^^. And like you know, I not here to "win". I'm willing to go whenever you feel I've fufilled my role. I'm just happy to have been along for the ride
And your welcome. I've honestly been rather afraid about how my comments would turn out this year, given my steadily growing time offline. But I'm glad you appreasiate them ^^. And as a warning, if you don't see me write away after a chapter, its not because I don't care or am not paying attention, its for other reasons, (like you discovered last season).
Oh, and I didn't plan on doing a confessional this season, (given how much trouble I've had writing lately), but this chapter MADE me write one. Its a little short, but I hope it'll make do. ^^;
Hey, I'm not saying its a bad thing. Writing massive works is one of your greatest tallents. And I hope you got the reaction you where hoping for. Nearly drpped me. And if this is how the stroy is "kicked off", I can't wait to see where things go.
Well, you really show'd just how much you learned.
Hey, if there is ANYONE in parisipating in this story who can take critisism, its me. In fact, I'm glad to see you playing my weaknesses. And off all your players, you have goof-balls, psychos, control freaks, egomaniacs, and even shy little weaklings, (no offence meant towards anyone). But of everyone, Nine is the only real gloomy loner, and I'm glad to see that being used like everyone elses flaws. And I know I can be emotional at times, and I'm sorry about that, but I'm also honest, and want to be honest with my friend. And as far as the hatred, both in character and that that makes it outside, (I saw you standing up for me), its nothing I can't handle ^^. And like you know, I not here to "win". I'm willing to go whenever you feel I've fufilled my role. I'm just happy to have been along for the ride
And your welcome. I've honestly been rather afraid about how my comments would turn out this year, given my steadily growing time offline. But I'm glad you appreasiate them ^^. And as a warning, if you don't see me write away after a chapter, its not because I don't care or am not paying attention, its for other reasons, (like you discovered last season).
Oh, and I didn't plan on doing a confessional this season, (given how much trouble I've had writing lately), but this chapter MADE me write one. Its a little short, but I hope it'll make do. ^^;
*hugs you tightly* I love you a lot, David. I just hope you stick with me through the long hull, and I'll always be there for you as well. Do or don't do whatever makes you feel comfortable or right; it's fine with me. I'm just going to keep doing what I think will work best for the series, and I hope that it can keep everyone happy and entertained. You didn't really need to make a confessional, but the fact that you did is amazing! That's so wonderful of you to do.
very shocking first episode! Also thanks for giving April a country gal voice that was really nice of you, heh a bit different then normal text I know but that makes her really stand out from the others so thank you very much. It also must have been a really hard choice for her to make during the vote should she choose to be honest as volsar did say it was a team effort but it seems he was really out for fun then team work, or should she give into desire and keep him. Also that camera girl looks very familiar XD then the challenge was a video game she really knew ;3
I think most of all April feels kinda out of place she talks different and does not have any real powers, she would also most likely be noting who has what ability's and powers to watch out for just in case she may have to deal with them later or try to befriend. Then there is all this tech around that would make her feel very out of place from the country. Her team mates seem to be of half pokemon so she would fit in more with them cause they are of pokemon she has used in video games at some point. Now with Volsar gone April's attention is on wolf-9 now seeing how he was able to execute a plan and make it happen maybe looking to as a leader for now.
also *gives Josh an ice pack* ouch O.o
Did you read the pilot first? Either way, I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I've practiced using southern/country speech, so I'm good with making April use it. Yes, I realize that the vote would be really hard for her to make, being honest and all, but it was one that ultimately had to be done. It was the right decision. Oh, and...yes, that camera girl should be VERY familiar to people like us.
Okay, got it. I really love April. While I used her a lot in the pilot, I'm gonna have to have her share screen time with a lot of others, you know. But, yeah, we'll see what happens next with Wolf-9 and the rest of her team. They really should be feeling the aftershocks of what just took place.
*holds it between his legs* Thanks. Q__Q;;;;
Okay, got it. I really love April. While I used her a lot in the pilot, I'm gonna have to have her share screen time with a lot of others, you know. But, yeah, we'll see what happens next with Wolf-9 and the rest of her team. They really should be feeling the aftershocks of what just took place.
*holds it between his legs* Thanks. Q__Q;;;;
No I cared, it was just I was going threw some kind of depression and just took awhile to get back sorry about that, guess you could call it a panic attack or something? I just felt like coming on FA would not be a good idea I still posted up my art work and trying out new art styles... but that was kinda causing the problem cause I get jealous of other artist and feel... I guess sad by my work, but I'm all better now. I'll send you April's Pilot and ep 1 confessional sometime when I get to work on it. I'm not very good at typing ^^; so it will be more like a movie script.
*hugs tightly* Hey, that's alright. Don't worry about it. We all go through those stressful times when we just need to get away for a while. I get that way sometimes, too. I just hope that you're feeling better now.
Oh, and you don't HAVE to make confessionals if you don't WANT to; they're not mandatory. It just that everyone seems to have fun making them, and I love seeing them, so...yeah. Take a look at my newest journal for examples of confessionals if you're unsure how to make them. But, whether you do or don't, I don't care what they look like; it's the thought that counts. I love all the confessionals that get made and I'm very grateful and happy to everyone who does them.
Oh, and you don't HAVE to make confessionals if you don't WANT to; they're not mandatory. It just that everyone seems to have fun making them, and I love seeing them, so...yeah. Take a look at my newest journal for examples of confessionals if you're unsure how to make them. But, whether you do or don't, I don't care what they look like; it's the thought that counts. I love all the confessionals that get made and I'm very grateful and happy to everyone who does them.
No, they're technically not required, but...I would LOVE to see you make some of April. Just look at my newest journal at the bottom to see others' confessionals and what THEY did to get ideas. I'd love to learn more about April; it'd help me write her better, for one. For two, she could have "fun" with anyone she wanted in a confessional.
Either way, thanks for reading, and I love April a lot already~
Either way, thanks for reading, and I love April a lot already~
A great start to season 2! Congrats to all the other members of Team Assassin, as I'm sure Alyssia is more than happy to be on the winning team today. Also nice to see her making friends.... lets just see how long that lasts.
No from my point of view. Definitely cheered me up reading this, still trying to get over being sick. Nice to see Grey take charge a bit.
I have to admit I'm surprised you didn't have Grey give the entire tour and explanations given his military background, but hey as long as some one tells the fools whats going on. :3
Looking forward to the next episode, some great writing as always. Great to finally be reading these once again!
No from my point of view. Definitely cheered me up reading this, still trying to get over being sick. Nice to see Grey take charge a bit.
I have to admit I'm surprised you didn't have Grey give the entire tour and explanations given his military background, but hey as long as some one tells the fools whats going on. :3
Looking forward to the next episode, some great writing as always. Great to finally be reading these once again!
Yep! Didn't have a lot of room to play with Alyssia this time around, as she wasn't really that important (no offense); you know what WAS important. But, she's still really cute and fun to use, and we'll see how long her spunky attitude lasts with making friends indeed!
Well, that's how it goes for the hosts and their cute wolf-hyena co-host. They all take shots at each other and try to punish one another; it was only fair Grey get his turn. I'm glad it cheered you up; I really hate seeing you sick. Poor thing. Also, I...kinda forgot about Grey's military background. My bad.
And I'M super glad that people still care and are just as excited and even happier than last time. I'm stoked! Thanks for reading, Grey. Love you~
Well, that's how it goes for the hosts and their cute wolf-hyena co-host. They all take shots at each other and try to punish one another; it was only fair Grey get his turn. I'm glad it cheered you up; I really hate seeing you sick. Poor thing. Also, I...kinda forgot about Grey's military background. My bad.
And I'M super glad that people still care and are just as excited and even happier than last time. I'm stoked! Thanks for reading, Grey. Love you~
No offense taken at all. No major plot points are tied in with her and it's the start so it's tough as it is to give every one a role no matter how small it is. I'm sure she will have a larger roll as more people get eliminated, provided she isn't taken out first. For now she's just glad to be here and glad to be on the team taking the first win of the season.
No worries about forgetting his background, I can't expect you to remember everything, after all you have 60 or so people to write about. It's nice to see that this time they will be going back and forth a bit rather than the usual abuse and taking it being one sided. The switch up will provide lots of comedic moments and scenes and show the love they have for each other, even if that love is tough and smells a little rotten.
I'm stoked as well for this, especially since I get to return as a co-host and sit back and watch while the others fight like animals (Which technically they are) I have high hopes and expectations for this season no matter who wins!
Love you too Joshy and thanks again for the cheering up with this.
No worries about forgetting his background, I can't expect you to remember everything, after all you have 60 or so people to write about. It's nice to see that this time they will be going back and forth a bit rather than the usual abuse and taking it being one sided. The switch up will provide lots of comedic moments and scenes and show the love they have for each other, even if that love is tough and smells a little rotten.
I'm stoked as well for this, especially since I get to return as a co-host and sit back and watch while the others fight like animals (Which technically they are) I have high hopes and expectations for this season no matter who wins!
Love you too Joshy and thanks again for the cheering up with this.
I did my best. She got to wrestle with Murphy and stuff Mewth up her ass yet AGAIN. Plus, she had a few other lines. So, overall, I thought her minor role fit in this episode. It wasn't really about her team, after all; it was mainly about Team Galaxy and their obvious plot point, with Team Avenger and Cerin being the second plot point. Gloria will become more important later on~
well, that was one action-packed first episode! :3 also loved the first game you picked up to be referenced as SA2 is one of my personal faves X3
Also, shame that I'm in a team with no friends from the first season, but again, having friends in the other teams MIGHT be useful :3 toward me and toward the others, as I'm pretty sure the lil chu would go out of his way to help a friend in another team, he cares that much :3
Also, looks like I already got a new friend in my team anyway! even if she calls me Twiggy! X3;
and about the ending...yeah, totally did not see that coming, good work :3 this was pretty much as shocking as the early plot twist in Xenoblade :3 and that's one of mah fave games ever story-wise *tailwags*
Also, shame that I'm in a team with no friends from the first season, but again, having friends in the other teams MIGHT be useful :3 toward me and toward the others, as I'm pretty sure the lil chu would go out of his way to help a friend in another team, he cares that much :3
Also, looks like I already got a new friend in my team anyway! even if she calls me Twiggy! X3;
and about the ending...yeah, totally did not see that coming, good work :3 this was pretty much as shocking as the early plot twist in Xenoblade :3 and that's one of mah fave games ever story-wise *tailwags*
One of your favorites, eh? Well, how about that? Guess I'm just awesome like that.
Yeah, it seems like cute little Sparky would indeed do that, but with a team of misfits, he might find himself thrust into the leader's role with his video game knowledge a lot. So, he'll have to do a lot of extra work this season without being able to fly under the radar. Plus, we saw what happened when others were helping out players on other teams. Just be careful.
You make a very good Twiggy. *pats on the head* Terra is pleased.
*squeezes tightly* A shocker indeed, and I couldn't be prouder. I'm super glad you liked it and was shocked. Thanks for your kind words, Sparkster. Love you.
Yeah, it seems like cute little Sparky would indeed do that, but with a team of misfits, he might find himself thrust into the leader's role with his video game knowledge a lot. So, he'll have to do a lot of extra work this season without being able to fly under the radar. Plus, we saw what happened when others were helping out players on other teams. Just be careful.
You make a very good Twiggy. *pats on the head* Terra is pleased.
*squeezes tightly* A shocker indeed, and I couldn't be prouder. I'm super glad you liked it and was shocked. Thanks for your kind words, Sparkster. Love you.
I still have to get further in Xenoblade so no spoilers. XD
Apparently Wii games look a little crisper on the Wii U, might be cause of the HDMI connection or the content being upscaled in sort of a way; it's less smooth and a bit more pixelated/jaggy.
I noticed it with the Wii to Wii U transfer, which is pretty cute even though it takes a long time.
Apparently Wii games look a little crisper on the Wii U, might be cause of the HDMI connection or the content being upscaled in sort of a way; it's less smooth and a bit more pixelated/jaggy.
I noticed it with the Wii to Wii U transfer, which is pretty cute even though it takes a long time.
Oh man, I can't believe I forgot about flying again!
And now with Volsar gone I'm going to have to 'mon up and remember my pre-season training if I want to be able to survive and help my team win for once.
I gotta use my vast gaming knowledge to find out the tricks of each game, without that I'll be bumbling through most of the challenges again.
But most of all I gotta make friends with those on my team and perhaps on other teams too, such as with Brandon, since unlike Lucas I do like Lucarios.
All in all, the kids gloves are gonna have to come off and I'm gonna have to compete as seriously as I've never have before.
And now with Volsar gone I'm going to have to 'mon up and remember my pre-season training if I want to be able to survive and help my team win for once.
I gotta use my vast gaming knowledge to find out the tricks of each game, without that I'll be bumbling through most of the challenges again.
But most of all I gotta make friends with those on my team and perhaps on other teams too, such as with Brandon, since unlike Lucas I do like Lucarios.
All in all, the kids gloves are gonna have to come off and I'm gonna have to compete as seriously as I've never have before.
That's the Sagi I like to hear! No being a toilet and a seat and pushover THIS time. With your dear master going bye-bye, it's time to focus and help your team out! I'm expecting big things from you, Sagi. I'm pretty sure a certain other Mewtwo is as well. We'll see just how you bounce back from this stunning news.
Wait, Silenrea is YOUR mistress? It's no wonder she's so well-known and well-liked; she has pets everywhere! *smacks the kitsune off his head and gives him a stern spanking* Glad you like it so far. It's about time you got to reading! I do hope you're feeling better, though.
Okay, I actually did manage to read it today, but as I'm still on my phone, I'll save a lengthy reply for when I'm at my PC later, if I don't focus on my final project for class. Sorry, but class is important. I must say that I am pleased with this outcome, after what Volsar did to me last season. I'm all for forgiving and forgetting, but preventing a repeat does have its place. I'd have been protecting people with Cerin, if I had seen it happen, and I'd probably have burned myself with my own fire in the process. If only I could teleport as efficiently as Volsar, I could have gotten to the finish line first and then helped Lucas bring in stragglers, but alas, I can only teleport two times, at the most, without being near a power source like a forest, before being completely drained of all power and being rendered completely useless... Such a shame. In the future, beyond the point in time the me in TDVA exists in, I do learn to control my fire, after also eliminating my black spot and regaining the use of my full power. This gives me increased use of teleportation, as well as releasing my color change power, but alas again, that has not yet happened by the time I signed up for this series, as it was a much more recent development. But, as I said, this phone is too annoying to type on for lengthy replies, so I must bid you adieu. Until next time!
Well, thank you for the long speech on why you should've won and why you want to teleport more often. That was very moving, and I am so touched. I don't know why, but I am. So, thank you for caring and explaining yourself, my cute little cat-wings creature with the furry butt and the apparent power to control fire sometime in the future. I love ya.
Yahhooo! Its me agaiiin!! .....Uhm... But Josh...It was...uh....51 pages long....!!!!!!! Uh AH !!!! FAK!! Its not been too long since that first...uh...whatwasit called... Pilot? Pilot....Pilot episode!! How do ya write so fast? Do ya have a super high tech brain helmet that turns your thoughts into text? Youre a text monster!!! XD
But anyways!! uh....Well!! XD It was a very exciting episode!! It was the first actual episode!! And uh...! Well Im not really too good with words... But it was really good!! I really cant recall the last time when ive been this...like... uh... positively anxious while reading a story!!!!
The competition part was very nice! You got em straight in action. Thats good. It was a good idea to use virtual reality kinda thingies for the game contests, as it considerably lightens the writing burden on your shoulders! Since ya dont have to describe the surroundings in utter detail, because people can just look up the game n see what kinda places it contains!! It was a smartypants move!!
And uh... criticism....I feel that I should always provide some in my comments to help the artists improve!! (writer=artist)
Soooo.....!! Well I dont think this really is a fault. Its prolly just because of my lack of...like...nati...vety.... But I get kinda confused with how the scene bounces around from some characters to anothers without a really big warning. Hmh...WELL actually! Maybe it DOES count as criticism...
Since I think ya wanna be a super master kinda writer someday! So I think its good to see all kinds of peoples viewpoints right?
So then bout Terra n her awesometastic performance!!!! XD
XD IM actually very happy she is still a complete moron!! Shes so....somehow.... COLORFULLY WRITTEN!!! I love colorful things!!!
Im glad she's still very positive and carefree! Its nice to see her in action! And you write her so nicely that its very easy to imagine all the oddities she is up to. Also!! Im very glad she already got herself a CUUUUTE friend!! I bet Me and Twiggy will be the best friends forevar!!!
Also....Its very nice.....how she is the only person in the competition....who is honestly in just for the fun...XD All the others are so tense...and competitive...and so scheming...!!!
And i bet it would be EPIC TO RIDE A GIANT PIKACHU!!! I could take over the woooooorld!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!! GOOOO TWIGGYYYY!!!!!!
X3 The challenge was a lot of fun too! No wonder I didnt win... I dont really like Sonic. And ive never really tried any other sonic games than those where he just runs normally and jumps on things.... like.... the platformer kinds.... the not competitive racing kinds.
But anyways!! I had a question for you!! But uh...i forgot it.........Gimme a sec n ill try to remember it............................................................................................................................hm........ OH OH!!! RIIIIGHT!! Did I understand this correctly!! Uh... The first team always gets prizes and no bad thingies happen to em... The second and third team enjoy sum bodage fun with miss.meanie. And the last coming team has to eliminate one player ALA survivors?
Also....I really didnt see volsars outvoting....coming. Well actually i kinda did! Since I accidentally looked at the comments....*sob*
But still...While i read their discussions n votings bout who should go! I really was hoping Volsar wouldnt go....He was such a charismatic character! They shouldnt be eliminated first! The more interesting they are, the longer they should stay in! X3
But anyways!! It was a goody good story! Ill wait eagerly for the next part!! I dont wanna make you hurry! Quality over carelessness! But please be quick!!!! I wanna see the next part already!!!!! *flails*
But anyways!! uh....Well!! XD It was a very exciting episode!! It was the first actual episode!! And uh...! Well Im not really too good with words... But it was really good!! I really cant recall the last time when ive been this...like... uh... positively anxious while reading a story!!!!
The competition part was very nice! You got em straight in action. Thats good. It was a good idea to use virtual reality kinda thingies for the game contests, as it considerably lightens the writing burden on your shoulders! Since ya dont have to describe the surroundings in utter detail, because people can just look up the game n see what kinda places it contains!! It was a smartypants move!!
And uh... criticism....I feel that I should always provide some in my comments to help the artists improve!! (writer=artist)
Soooo.....!! Well I dont think this really is a fault. Its prolly just because of my lack of...like...nati...vety.... But I get kinda confused with how the scene bounces around from some characters to anothers without a really big warning. Hmh...WELL actually! Maybe it DOES count as criticism...
Since I think ya wanna be a super master kinda writer someday! So I think its good to see all kinds of peoples viewpoints right?
So then bout Terra n her awesometastic performance!!!! XD
XD IM actually very happy she is still a complete moron!! Shes so....somehow.... COLORFULLY WRITTEN!!! I love colorful things!!!
Im glad she's still very positive and carefree! Its nice to see her in action! And you write her so nicely that its very easy to imagine all the oddities she is up to. Also!! Im very glad she already got herself a CUUUUTE friend!! I bet Me and Twiggy will be the best friends forevar!!!
Also....Its very nice.....how she is the only person in the competition....who is honestly in just for the fun...XD All the others are so tense...and competitive...and so scheming...!!!
And i bet it would be EPIC TO RIDE A GIANT PIKACHU!!! I could take over the woooooorld!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!! GOOOO TWIGGYYYY!!!!!!
X3 The challenge was a lot of fun too! No wonder I didnt win... I dont really like Sonic. And ive never really tried any other sonic games than those where he just runs normally and jumps on things.... like.... the platformer kinds.... the not competitive racing kinds.
But anyways!! I had a question for you!! But uh...i forgot it.........Gimme a sec n ill try to remember it............................................................................................................................hm........ OH OH!!! RIIIIGHT!! Did I understand this correctly!! Uh... The first team always gets prizes and no bad thingies happen to em... The second and third team enjoy sum bodage fun with miss.meanie. And the last coming team has to eliminate one player ALA survivors?
Also....I really didnt see volsars outvoting....coming. Well actually i kinda did! Since I accidentally looked at the comments....*sob*
But still...While i read their discussions n votings bout who should go! I really was hoping Volsar wouldnt go....He was such a charismatic character! They shouldnt be eliminated first! The more interesting they are, the longer they should stay in! X3
But anyways!! It was a goody good story! Ill wait eagerly for the next part!! I dont wanna make you hurry! Quality over carelessness! But please be quick!!!! I wanna see the next part already!!!!! *flails*
It's 51 pages for YOU, since you probably download it differently and have it appear in a different way than it does on my computer. For me, it's only 38 pages. But, whatever you say, you dingy girl. Oh, and I'm a writer; it comes naturally to me. Just like drawing comes naturally to YOU. So, yeah, I can write as much as I need to when I just sit and focus. I'm awesome like that.
Thanks for that, sweetie. I did what I thought would be most fun; not necessarily the most easy, but most fun. I don't ALWAYS look for the easiest way to do things; taking shortcuts isn't always smart or sporty. Glad it got you really anxious and excited and stuff, though.
That's just how I separate scenes. All writers do it different ways. For me, I separate scenes in two different ways. First is when I use: ~~~ to separate paragraphs. That indicates a different scene. Another way is after someone gives a confessional; the reason being is that a confessional usually happens off to the side, so it's good to use them to help divide scenes. Those are my two ways of doing that.
Well, that Pikachu is really called "Sparky", but since you said Terra likes to give people nicknames, it seemed right to give everyone's favorite Pikachu a cute nickname. I'm not sure he's overly thrilled with it, but he had it coming. And, yeah, writing Terra is a lot of fun. I'm trying not to make her look like a COMPLETE moron; it's just so hilarious and easy and fun to do. I'm honestly glad that you like how I use Terra, though; that's everything to me. How others judge and perceive my writing is obviously the most important thing. Oh, and Sonic is pretty awesome; the games are hard, but I love Sonic and the franchise as a whole.
Yes, that's right, goofy girl. It's as follows:
1st Place Team: Excellent dinner, immunity, & video game or movie prize relating to won challenge
2nd Place Team: Average dinner, immunity from elimination but given bondage spankings as punishment
3rd Place Team: Average dinner, immunity from elimination but given bondage spankings as punishment
4th Place Team: Terrible dinner, forced to go to the elimination ceremony and vote someone off
Volsar had it coming; that's what you get for being an evil little brat. *snickers* I'm sorry that you're disappointed, but they ALL have to go eventually. Volsar was simply first on the chopping order. At least he's in a better place now: inside Silenrea's beautiful, roomy butt.
*gently straps you down into a hospital bed and gives you some air* Stay calm now, sweetie. Stay calm. It'll be okay. Once I give everyone a good, solid day to read and do confessionals and react to it and stuff, then I'll get started on the next one. Until then, you just relax and be a good half-tigress.
Thanks for that, sweetie. I did what I thought would be most fun; not necessarily the most easy, but most fun. I don't ALWAYS look for the easiest way to do things; taking shortcuts isn't always smart or sporty. Glad it got you really anxious and excited and stuff, though.
That's just how I separate scenes. All writers do it different ways. For me, I separate scenes in two different ways. First is when I use: ~~~ to separate paragraphs. That indicates a different scene. Another way is after someone gives a confessional; the reason being is that a confessional usually happens off to the side, so it's good to use them to help divide scenes. Those are my two ways of doing that.
Well, that Pikachu is really called "Sparky", but since you said Terra likes to give people nicknames, it seemed right to give everyone's favorite Pikachu a cute nickname. I'm not sure he's overly thrilled with it, but he had it coming. And, yeah, writing Terra is a lot of fun. I'm trying not to make her look like a COMPLETE moron; it's just so hilarious and easy and fun to do. I'm honestly glad that you like how I use Terra, though; that's everything to me. How others judge and perceive my writing is obviously the most important thing. Oh, and Sonic is pretty awesome; the games are hard, but I love Sonic and the franchise as a whole.
Yes, that's right, goofy girl. It's as follows:
1st Place Team: Excellent dinner, immunity, & video game or movie prize relating to won challenge
2nd Place Team: Average dinner, immunity from elimination but given bondage spankings as punishment
3rd Place Team: Average dinner, immunity from elimination but given bondage spankings as punishment
4th Place Team: Terrible dinner, forced to go to the elimination ceremony and vote someone off
Volsar had it coming; that's what you get for being an evil little brat. *snickers* I'm sorry that you're disappointed, but they ALL have to go eventually. Volsar was simply first on the chopping order. At least he's in a better place now: inside Silenrea's beautiful, roomy butt.
*gently straps you down into a hospital bed and gives you some air* Stay calm now, sweetie. Stay calm. It'll be okay. Once I give everyone a good, solid day to read and do confessionals and react to it and stuff, then I'll get started on the next one. Until then, you just relax and be a good half-tigress.
Wow. A lot of comments. Well, I may not be involved in the story yet, I say yet because I asked tailslover13 if I could be in Season 2, and he said that it was filled, but if I'm still interested by the time that season 3 starts, I might be able to be in it.
Also, this episode turned out to be perfect in my eyes.I love the new challenges, as well as the fact that contestants can now be eaten multiple times in virtual reality without losing, which means I might be able to see the female characters eaten repeatedly. Ahhh, I so do love females being prey for AV. *giggles and has a feeling that I'm going to get aved for typing this* I loved the shocker at the end, although with how Volsar lost the game for his team, I wasn't as surprised as I might've been. Also, now I'm all caught up, and I've read all the episodes of Season 1 and the pilot of season 2 as well as this one. If the final vote had been mine though, I don't know who I would've voted for. Both Wolf-9 and Volsar have their good points and bad points. Wolf-9 didn't really stick out in my mind during season 1 and while Volsar may be mean on the outside, I don't think he's truly evil, since he cares deeply for his slaves and pets and is never mean to them in any way. Most of what he does is just mischieviousness, and he's noble when it comes to accepting defeat.
I can tell that this season is going to be far better than even Season 1 was, and I'm truly looking forward to reading it and following what happens every step of the way.
Also, this episode turned out to be perfect in my eyes.I love the new challenges, as well as the fact that contestants can now be eaten multiple times in virtual reality without losing, which means I might be able to see the female characters eaten repeatedly. Ahhh, I so do love females being prey for AV. *giggles and has a feeling that I'm going to get aved for typing this* I loved the shocker at the end, although with how Volsar lost the game for his team, I wasn't as surprised as I might've been. Also, now I'm all caught up, and I've read all the episodes of Season 1 and the pilot of season 2 as well as this one. If the final vote had been mine though, I don't know who I would've voted for. Both Wolf-9 and Volsar have their good points and bad points. Wolf-9 didn't really stick out in my mind during season 1 and while Volsar may be mean on the outside, I don't think he's truly evil, since he cares deeply for his slaves and pets and is never mean to them in any way. Most of what he does is just mischieviousness, and he's noble when it comes to accepting defeat.
I can tell that this season is going to be far better than even Season 1 was, and I'm truly looking forward to reading it and following what happens every step of the way.
*face-sits and relaxes on* Happy Thanksgiving to you. Thanks for catching up with everything, since that's awesome that you bothered to actually read them all. I'm glad that you really like where this is going, and I can't wait to add on more and more and put in more surprises as the season goes along. It's rather interesting hearing your thoughts on the final outcome and who you would or wouldn't vote for and for what reason. Volsar simply had it coming; I couldn't let ALL the veterans just run away with it. Besides, I have my reasons. Either way, thanks so much for your support; I love it and appreciate it with all my heart.
*wiggles happily as I'm facesat on* You're welcome. I loved every second of reading the episodes too. They were so exciting and fun to read that I stayed up two whole nights reading them.I did get some sleep in the morning/early afternoon though. Tonight, I think I'm going to sleep very good and happy Thanksgiving to you too. I'll be commenting on every episode from now on to let everyone know what I thought about it.
1) Cool, so there's another Mobian and he's on my team ^^ sweet! His reference pic looks damn awesome too...come to think of it, I really need to redo my rference pic. there's a bunch of stuff wrong with it ^^;
2) ...wishing I had brought my Medicaly-inclined Breloom, Spore, with me now ^^; guess I'll just have to try extra hard to not get injured this season
3) Hey, I'm not Chauvinistic because I prefer the company of men, I'm just gay.
4) wait...if the challenge is supposed to be a team effort, what's the point of letting your teammate attack eachother? :/ shouldn't they be attacking the other teams?
5) “I thought we were just having a fun race through a city of nice, quiet people!” ...fuck, my team is doomed -_-
6) Matt only beat me cause my Terra-board was on the frits and shorting out or something...gonna have to take a look at it after the challenge *Confessional preview*
7) ...I'd probably tell Lucas he was being too rough if it weren't for the fact he was making our teem somewhat less doomed ^^;
8) darn, too bad the challenges are VR now >.< I had a great idea for my confessional (that I ended up coming in behind the skunk chick even though I took off ahead of her, because I nabbed some cute human boys for an after challenge lunch) but that wouldn't work because they're virtual and wouldn't come with me back to reality DX stupid Reality!
9) Daaaaaw *hugs Cerin*
10) You're a braver dad than I, Mat...you'd never catch my son Ace working for TDV. Then again, he's 10 XD
11) How I read Volsar's line: “He’s targeting me, huh? Well, gotta give him credit for having the guts to have the balls to have the chutzpa for trying, that’s for sure.”
12) Damn, Volsar went out first :( that totally screws up some plans, but but they weren't all that relevent anymore anyway ^^; still a good story Josh.
2) ...wishing I had brought my Medicaly-inclined Breloom, Spore, with me now ^^; guess I'll just have to try extra hard to not get injured this season
3) Hey, I'm not Chauvinistic because I prefer the company of men, I'm just gay.
4) wait...if the challenge is supposed to be a team effort, what's the point of letting your teammate attack eachother? :/ shouldn't they be attacking the other teams?
5) “I thought we were just having a fun race through a city of nice, quiet people!” ...fuck, my team is doomed -_-
6) Matt only beat me cause my Terra-board was on the frits and shorting out or something...gonna have to take a look at it after the challenge *Confessional preview*
7) ...I'd probably tell Lucas he was being too rough if it weren't for the fact he was making our teem somewhat less doomed ^^;
8) darn, too bad the challenges are VR now >.< I had a great idea for my confessional (that I ended up coming in behind the skunk chick even though I took off ahead of her, because I nabbed some cute human boys for an after challenge lunch) but that wouldn't work because they're virtual and wouldn't come with me back to reality DX stupid Reality!
9) Daaaaaw *hugs Cerin*
10) You're a braver dad than I, Mat...you'd never catch my son Ace working for TDV. Then again, he's 10 XD
11) How I read Volsar's line: “He’s targeting me, huh? Well, gotta give him credit for having the guts to have the balls to have the chutzpa for trying, that’s for sure.”
12) Damn, Volsar went out first :( that totally screws up some plans, but but they weren't all that relevent anymore anyway ^^; still a good story Josh.
1. Yeah, he is pretty cute, eh? I figured you'd like seeing a Mobian on your team.
2. Since most things will happen in virtual reality, hopefully that won't happen. It's not like Soline will be getting to you much. Maybe.
3. Fair enough, you goofy bird.
4. Attacking each other? Who was attacking each other?
5. Hang in there, Aaron. You have my sympathy.
6. *rolls eyes* Making excuses already? Well, that's fine; I love that about you anyway.
7. Lucas is kinda like that. He means well, but his tactics are typically very weird and sometimes harsh.
8. Well, there's both good and bad things about virtual reality. I suppose, if you wanted to look at it the way you did, that would be one of the "bad" things. Again, my sympathy to you, Aaron.
9. Cerin is a bit like Lucas. He means well, and he's very emotional and stuff, but he has a very bloodthirsty true form that makes him very unique and different. He's a very interesting character.
10. Matthew is...well, he's not a BAD father. He just...is a bit reckless and crazy. I'm sure his kids will be fine, though. I've got them under protection.
11. Aaron, you're so hilarious. *spanks for that* But, you sure do make me laugh more than Matthew does, and HE'S supposed to be the joker!
12. I don't like being too predictable, so Volsar had it coming. I like seeing people shocked. All the same, I'm glad you liked it, Aaron.
2. Since most things will happen in virtual reality, hopefully that won't happen. It's not like Soline will be getting to you much. Maybe.
3. Fair enough, you goofy bird.
4. Attacking each other? Who was attacking each other?
5. Hang in there, Aaron. You have my sympathy.
6. *rolls eyes* Making excuses already? Well, that's fine; I love that about you anyway.
7. Lucas is kinda like that. He means well, but his tactics are typically very weird and sometimes harsh.
8. Well, there's both good and bad things about virtual reality. I suppose, if you wanted to look at it the way you did, that would be one of the "bad" things. Again, my sympathy to you, Aaron.
9. Cerin is a bit like Lucas. He means well, and he's very emotional and stuff, but he has a very bloodthirsty true form that makes him very unique and different. He's a very interesting character.
10. Matthew is...well, he's not a BAD father. He just...is a bit reckless and crazy. I'm sure his kids will be fine, though. I've got them under protection.
11. Aaron, you're so hilarious. *spanks for that* But, you sure do make me laugh more than Matthew does, and HE'S supposed to be the joker!
12. I don't like being too predictable, so Volsar had it coming. I like seeing people shocked. All the same, I'm glad you liked it, Aaron.
Ha, I'm glad you thought so! For the most part, that's what I see Kendra as; a huge fan of the host and a lovesick wolfess. I'll play off that for a while. And, yes; Wolf-9 is incredibly smart. He was heading into this season with a new conviction to help out those close to him, not to win. Wolves in general are very smart animals, so it was no shock, really.
Well, everyone has to go eventually, and I couldn't just let ALL the veterans get far AGAIN. That wouldn't be fair. It was the perfect setup for a shocking episode 1 to kick off the season. Don't be too depressed, okay? Volsar will always be there...in more ways than one, I'm sure.
I swear, you're ALL crazy. No matter who I talk to, it seems that you're either Volsar's pet, or Silenrea's pet, and all you do is bow down and call them master and mistress like little fools. I'm glad I'm no one's pet. It's so stupid. *hugs* But, all the same, it's not like I don't agree with you; Matthew is a bit...emotional and violent sometimes.
I've been up to a lot of things so I just got to read it. Thou I must say I sort of called the virtual reality thing for it made a lot of since at the time.
That sort of tech Is a specialty of my OC. If I was in this(which I don't even know if I care to be atm) and got hooked up to that, or even got near it, the systems would get high-jacked in a moments notice. heh. This is a long and good read as before I'd say. Thou the loss of Volsar in this one.surprised me.
That sort of tech Is a specialty of my OC. If I was in this(which I don't even know if I care to be atm) and got hooked up to that, or even got near it, the systems would get high-jacked in a moments notice. heh. This is a long and good read as before I'd say. Thou the loss of Volsar in this one.surprised me.
... Why josh? Why did you put a devious coon who may or may not know his way around computers better than most people know their way around their own bathroom in close contact with a machine that you immediately explained can be turned into an overcharged electric chair?
The possible implications of me tampering with the equipment in an effort to eliminate the competition (and hopefully get some delicious barbecue in the process) great read. Nice pacing, lots of humor, every um... enticing... yeah, let's go with enticing bits to it. Definitely gets Ricky Racccoon's stamp of adoration. *Pulls out a giant paddle with a smiley face stamp on it and spanks josh until that face is imprinted nice and red*
The possible implications of me tampering with the equipment in an effort to eliminate the competition (and hopefully get some delicious barbecue in the process) great read. Nice pacing, lots of humor, every um... enticing... yeah, let's go with enticing bits to it. Definitely gets Ricky Racccoon's stamp of adoration. *Pulls out a giant paddle with a smiley face stamp on it and spanks josh until that face is imprinted nice and red*
*rolls eyes* While Ricky probably isn't going to last too long (as I already have all the eliminations marked out and planned), believe me that a devious and adorable raccoon like you is always in my heart and mind and all your odd little tidbits of spunky naughtiness always turns me on and makes me giggle. You're so cute, Ricky. Gotta love you.
*proceeds to put an ice pack on his rump and plot Ricky's looming doom and painful punishment*
*proceeds to put an ice pack on his rump and plot Ricky's looming doom and painful punishment*
It appears our little cling on made another confessional
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9321470/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9321470/
Wow. That was insane. Agh, never beating Sonic adventure was my undoing. I just know. Volsar left in a less flashy manner then I thought when would happen. Do even more of my best. Get Matt, Sil, Aaron, Yoshi, and me to the final or blow up the place. Which ever will happen first. you Never know with my luck. But be most epic battle of all time. Lightsaber and everything. *shake fist* Show you all power. Fear me. *begin yipping adorably as fail at being scary.*
That made absolutely no sense and you will now be punished for your random silliness. *turns into a toilet, then replaces you with the one in the confessional* There, that should do it! Now, knowing how some of the girls are around here, this new toilet should be VERY handy! Serves you right, James.
Interesting addition, I like the concept with the new VR location, and the idea of everything being IVR, kinda sucks that all vorish deliciousness will happen outside of the interesting locations and in a boring 'ceremony' room. One of the things I enjoyed about the last series was the random vores off to the sides and whatnot. I guess it'll still happen but it won't be permanent, since everyone'll wake up in their own helmets regardless.
Teams of 13 with 20 beds? yeah...totally not gonna be a plot-point later on >_>
Sweet, on a team with Muirne and Sicha, the series is looking infinitely better already ...remind me to kidnap a member from team Galaxy from time to time...I'll need her for....cuddles. Though...Terra will do as well, but hey, what can I say, I'm a loving kind of cat.
Ohh...no surprise, Aaron is -already- disliked...remind me to eat him one day. Maybe cook him first and feed him to someone else as a little karmic retribution
I liked the bouncing off Homicide's head, and I was a little surprised you didn't have any of the -numerous- people flying into him vanish into a poorly timed yawn, I like him more than the other dinosaur who's name I forget in the last series.
Overall, nice start. I'll see about writing a confessional, mainly because a few friends already have.
Teams of 13 with 20 beds? yeah...totally not gonna be a plot-point later on >_>
Sweet, on a team with Muirne and Sicha, the series is looking infinitely better already ...remind me to kidnap a member from team Galaxy from time to time...I'll need her for....cuddles. Though...Terra will do as well, but hey, what can I say, I'm a loving kind of cat.
Ohh...no surprise, Aaron is -already- disliked...remind me to eat him one day. Maybe cook him first and feed him to someone else as a little karmic retribution
I liked the bouncing off Homicide's head, and I was a little surprised you didn't have any of the -numerous- people flying into him vanish into a poorly timed yawn, I like him more than the other dinosaur who's name I forget in the last series.
Overall, nice start. I'll see about writing a confessional, mainly because a few friends already have.
Oh, I didn't even know that you realized I had started on this season, since you didn't comment on that one journal I posted where I asked people to comment if they were paying attention. But, it's nice to see you anyway. And, yeah, that's how I'm doing it this season. All the random eatings just wasn't fair last season, regardless if they were unimportant or not. Everyone deserves a fair vote this time.
We'll see just how much of a plot point it'll be.
Yeah, that's a crazy team right there. Mostly with insane girls and wimpy boys, so it should be rather intense. Have fun in whatever way you want with them, as everyone will probably deserve it.
It's Aaron we're talking about. Naturally he's already disliked. Those who win too much and are very arrogant are USUALLY disliked. But, he's also close to being a chicken and turkey, so he's tasty.
Who, Fissure? Yeah, Homicide is my Fissure for this season. And, the episode was already dragging on for too long, so I didn't want to keep dragging things out with random absurdities, even though that was a good idea.
You can write some if you want; it's your choice. I always did enjoy them, but as you know it's not a requirement. Do whatever you want, so long as you have fun with it. That's the important thing.
Oh, and so true. Volsar probably will find a way to say that that's not true, but it is. He is easily a famous god-modder, and the way he bragged how he could easily take down Cerin with his sword despite Cerin being insanely powerful in his true form just proved it. I couldn't agree more. Volsar himself is very likable and nice, but his character is downright annoying and a god-modder. It always drives me crazy.
We'll see just how much of a plot point it'll be.
Yeah, that's a crazy team right there. Mostly with insane girls and wimpy boys, so it should be rather intense. Have fun in whatever way you want with them, as everyone will probably deserve it.
It's Aaron we're talking about. Naturally he's already disliked. Those who win too much and are very arrogant are USUALLY disliked. But, he's also close to being a chicken and turkey, so he's tasty.
Who, Fissure? Yeah, Homicide is my Fissure for this season. And, the episode was already dragging on for too long, so I didn't want to keep dragging things out with random absurdities, even though that was a good idea.
You can write some if you want; it's your choice. I always did enjoy them, but as you know it's not a requirement. Do whatever you want, so long as you have fun with it. That's the important thing.
Oh, and so true. Volsar probably will find a way to say that that's not true, but it is. He is easily a famous god-modder, and the way he bragged how he could easily take down Cerin with his sword despite Cerin being insanely powerful in his true form just proved it. I couldn't agree more. Volsar himself is very likable and nice, but his character is downright annoying and a god-modder. It always drives me crazy.
Eh, didn't see the journal. when you're watching a thousand different people journals become a bit of a moot point to manage.
Very true, the chicken's beak also makes a -perfect- buttplug....and even better? he can't talk with it up there!
Thaat's the one, but a likable fissure.
Yeah, and that just makes me dislike Cerin too, anyone with an "I put a bullet in my mouth and the Other Guy just spat it out" alter ego is as bad as a god-modder, there's no way to actually -beat- them on their own terms because they'll always just turn into their 'true form' or whatever and be unstoppable. At best it's no fun, at worst it's just a dickish thing to do. Like with Volsar's elimination, it was nicely done, but any other character would have had to go with whoever reached them first, and I'm fairly sure the only reason you gave Volsar the choice to force himself up Sil was because you're fully aware any kind of end that wasn't a "Look how awesome I am, I can leave how I wanna" would just result in 'lol I teleported away secretly'. I haven't even read his confessional and I'm positive it'll have a sneaky 'look how I escaped and am hiding in plain sight again'
Very true, the chicken's beak also makes a -perfect- buttplug....and even better? he can't talk with it up there!
Thaat's the one, but a likable fissure.
Yeah, and that just makes me dislike Cerin too, anyone with an "I put a bullet in my mouth and the Other Guy just spat it out" alter ego is as bad as a god-modder, there's no way to actually -beat- them on their own terms because they'll always just turn into their 'true form' or whatever and be unstoppable. At best it's no fun, at worst it's just a dickish thing to do. Like with Volsar's elimination, it was nicely done, but any other character would have had to go with whoever reached them first, and I'm fairly sure the only reason you gave Volsar the choice to force himself up Sil was because you're fully aware any kind of end that wasn't a "Look how awesome I am, I can leave how I wanna" would just result in 'lol I teleported away secretly'. I haven't even read his confessional and I'm positive it'll have a sneaky 'look how I escaped and am hiding in plain sight again'
You are still a very bad girl and need to be punished anyway, which I will enforce soon enough.
Yeah, and I already know just how much you love putting things inside your butt that include Aaron or Meowth-related parts.
That's probably true; I do already like Homicide better.
Well, yeah, but in the very least Cerin can handle adversity fairly. For the most part, I wasn't even going to do anything involving his "true form", and I doubt he would've cared. He just does all that to try and look awesome; I don't think it's the same as Volsar. But, it's not like I don't agree. It almost seems like half the characters I use are god-modders in some way shape or form.
Yeah, and I already know just how much you love putting things inside your butt that include Aaron or Meowth-related parts.
That's probably true; I do already like Homicide better.
Well, yeah, but in the very least Cerin can handle adversity fairly. For the most part, I wasn't even going to do anything involving his "true form", and I doubt he would've cared. He just does all that to try and look awesome; I don't think it's the same as Volsar. But, it's not like I don't agree. It almost seems like half the characters I use are god-modders in some way shape or form.
Ooh, starting off with one of my favourite games, my favourite level from it too. And, oh, with an unexpected elimination too. If Wolf-9 was a sly Fox-9 instead he might have tried splitting the vote by getting some of the people who would never vote against Volsar to vote against some other randomer- but I guess his straightforward strategy worked to his favour too.
Though, like everyone else I suspect we haven't seen the last of Volsar for this season. Some characters are just as good or better on the sidelines causing mischief rather than fighting for the #1 spot (*Muirne hums innocently*)
Also you're such a silly thing talking about how long the episode is like it's a bad thing! If we didn't like the story, we wouldn't be reading it... and since we do like it, why on earth wouldn't we be happy about there being more of it?!
Though, like everyone else I suspect we haven't seen the last of Volsar for this season. Some characters are just as good or better on the sidelines causing mischief rather than fighting for the #1 spot (*Muirne hums innocently*)
Also you're such a silly thing talking about how long the episode is like it's a bad thing! If we didn't like the story, we wouldn't be reading it... and since we do like it, why on earth wouldn't we be happy about there being more of it?!
Wolf-9 is very smart, but...yeah, he seems like a straightforward type of guy. I could've gone that other way, but it seemed a bit too complicated this early on. He did what he had to do. But, I'm glad you liked this and had fun seeing it. That always makes me happy to see.
*smacks Muirne's butt* Volsar probably ISN'T fully gone, that's for sure. For one, Silenrea doesn't digest her prey, so Volsar will probably be chilling inside her rear all throughout the show without us knowing. For two, he's that insane to go on causing trouble even when eliminated.
Believe me, I've had to deal with a LOT of readers through my time. From my experience, a good number of them whine and complain if things are too long, probably due to their laziness. Then, I usually got the whole "I skimmed it" or "It was too long, so I didn't read all of it" excuses, which pisses me off. It's why I always feel hesitant to bother with some things, since I have had a long history of people being lazy and pissing me off.
*smacks Muirne's butt* Volsar probably ISN'T fully gone, that's for sure. For one, Silenrea doesn't digest her prey, so Volsar will probably be chilling inside her rear all throughout the show without us knowing. For two, he's that insane to go on causing trouble even when eliminated.
Believe me, I've had to deal with a LOT of readers through my time. From my experience, a good number of them whine and complain if things are too long, probably due to their laziness. Then, I usually got the whole "I skimmed it" or "It was too long, so I didn't read all of it" excuses, which pisses me off. It's why I always feel hesitant to bother with some things, since I have had a long history of people being lazy and pissing me off.
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