Good job! you learnt quite quick, and it's quite smooth for a first try, see?
You'll have Flash tamed in nooooo time!

Sexy pixels xD
Now get some booty jiggling

Needs more sex.

(slow sarcastic clap)

Eph you.
:0

http://i.imgur.com/p5rqP.gif

Needs a little more work, but your getting it :D

Needs more work? On what--specifics, man.

Well, the breathing needs to be a little more detailed, your character seems to be shrinking and enlarging because of the type of breathing you used. Try to think of another way to make an illusion of him breathing.

I know this is only a tet, but you should practice on backgrounding as well. Might give you a better feel for scenery once done.

I like how simple the animation is for the meet, its cool looking like that. Also, if your character is moving from the breathing, why not blinking or something else?

Last thing is rough edges on the lines, but I don't know which version of flash you are using. CS edition (I think) fixes the edges like Illustrator does.

Keep going though!

Just gonna..reiterate while taking your advise. taking these into consideration, because YAY, CRITICISM, right?

Well, the breathing needs to be a little more detailed, your character seems to be shrinking and enlarging because of the type of breathing you used. Try to think of another way to make an illusion of him breathing.

I was only taught the basics of tweening, which lead to this. At this point in time, with the knowledge I have now, it's the first best thing until another method is is discovered..

I know this is only a tet, but you should practice on backgrounding as well. Might give you a better feel for scenery once done.

That's an entirely different deal on its own. Here, i'm learning the deal of "movement". ATM, I don't even have a general stance on BG work drawing in general! In any other case, this would follow, but sure!

Also, if your character is moving from the breathing, why not blinking or something else?
Blinking is simple enough for me to put in here on my own. I wasn't taught how to do it during the teaching, but for someone like me who's experienced enough working with animations outside of flash, it wasn't really prioritized enough for me to ask about it, since it's..well, simple.

Last thing is rough edges on the lines, but I don't know which version of flash you are using. CS edition (I think) fixes the edges like Illustrator does.
Quick question--how many pixel arts have you seen? <:3c

Of your caliber? all your animations! But everything else, not a lot.

well what do you mean by "rough edges" because like you said, all of my animations have been pixelated--like you just acknowledged.

Ah good point! :D My mistake then.

Neh, it was a first taste on what frames, keyframes, symbols and basic tweening is~
He started from scratch knowing nothing of flash until just today =P

That may be. I still wanna give feedback and try to help. It's been years since I used flash as well. I think the last one I used was Professional 8? o_O good lord.

...why do they not sell slabs of meat in the market. Ah would so devour a slab of meat.

I
KNOW
WHAT
YOU
ME--waidaminute

you're a rabbit.

...R...rabbits are omnivores! Dey are!

Kinda reminds me of an old video game or something.

you're the second to have said that.

So I'm not crazy then...

So.. He's craving large meat if I'm not mistaken..

dam it you~...well semi-beat me to it.

how impressive.

Oh shut it.
I'll make something pretty nice to look at. YOU'LL SEE!



YOU'LL ALL SEE!!

So he wants a thick piece of meat in his mouth?... sounds reasonable.

Nice first try here.

SO tempted to use a Fawful quote here.

Do it. I FUCKIN LOVE FAWFUL

Beef?

I has no beef.

Fawful is beefless.

The piece of meat reminds me of the meat on EVO Search for Eden...

don't know what Entrant Violin Origins: search for Eden is.
Sorry--I don't play anything on the xbox as it sucks balls.

It's an SNES game made by Square Enix... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/E.V.O......earch_for_Eden

welp...ok.

You should play it, it's really good.