Well other than needing a editor to fix some things (mostly forgotten words and such) you have me hooked. I like this alternate universe x men though i am not sure if it is based on anything from acomic or not since i stopped reading x-men when they got to many titles and i got to little cash to keep up with it.

but you have me hooked i can say. i already got mad since this story ended to quickly! (the reason i wait to read online comics is because i get mad if there is to little to read. luckily there are more chapters up for this so YAY!)

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

other thn the characters, nothing's based on the comics as far as I remember.

and I know I need an editor, best I have at this point is a few beta readers who point out a thing or two