My first song is finally finished.

I want to thank all those who gave me ideas.

I hope everyone likes this. I've revamped it majorly from my original.

I started around early October and worked on it on and off.

Alot of that time I didn't put any work into it, because
I was frustrated with FL studio because I was still figuring it out.

I'm sure now I could put out a song like this in much less time.

Feel free to give ADVANCED critique.

(Please don't say "I don't like it" or something like that. If you have any critique, please give detail like "There's too much space between this instrument, and this one." or something like that.)

(PS: I know the instrument is named Seriphim, it should be Seraphim)

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I wanted to thank the following for their instruments:

Instruments (By author)

My name | Instrument's name

Axis - Fallon

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Clap - Claps.pat
Drum - Battle.it 3


Dr. Awesome

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Scream - Untitled


Epic Megagames

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Bell - DETHBELL.ST
Deep Bass - monsterb.st
Deep Xylophone - Megagames
Monks - Ohme.st


FL Studio

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Broken Piano - Broken Piano
Sequonitron 1 - Sequence - Sequonitron
Seraphim - Synth string - Seriphim


K&P

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Quick heartbeat - Quick Heart pulse