What in Dixies!?!

... oh god it's actually working for me. I- I need to go read something

I must say

For being completely fetishey and stuff

This reads EXACTLY like an episode.

Oh my Celestia, shes glowin...must'ave been the altitude & heat.

Oh boy~ X3

I've read the comments and find it funny how many people haven't/won't go read the story.

The choice of font makes me giggle very much. It's such a messy contrast from the neat and tidy world of the ponies. I also saw the last two, and the smiley face sure made me laugh. And Pinkie is so fantastic. You've gotten really good at dialogue over time, if you look back and go through your written work. You've written them so well thus far, and can hardly wait for more.

Aye, it is rather odd O_o

^^ Glad the Capn' was able to do the show a bit of justice in his own way.
Thank ye! Well, hopefully he will write again soon ere fer ye :)

Dat belly bulge.

Could Rainbow have encounted a changeling or something?