the dialogue's cool and you do a good job establishing the characters' dynamics. i'm not a big fan of the art style you use on tania, it clashes heavily with the rest of the characters and i can see you were going for a simple style with her but it comes off as lazy. you have a good head for comics, the way the panels and dialog flows seems very natural. i hope you continue this series.

why thank you so much, and i will continue with the series as soon as possible. plus, tania's style is far different from the boys'. being that she's designed like that, it's slightly hard to upgrade her look.

anyway, i won't disappoint you with the series. who knows...i might get to the good stuff