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A Big Bad Wolf Gets His Just Desserts (Part 4)
[[ This is part 4 of the series. It doesn't stand alone. Please read the prior parts first. ]]
The Wolf is growing rounder. As his belly fills, attitudes continue to change. The last of the pies are nearly gone, but buttons are already straining on his shirt. What of his bet with Molly? How much more will he have to eat? And how much more can his already bulging belly hold? "Stay tuned" to this and future chapters to find out!
(Story contains conversations between furry and human, long loving descriptions of various foods, and gluttony - lots and lots of gluttony!)
The Wolf is growing rounder. As his belly fills, attitudes continue to change. The last of the pies are nearly gone, but buttons are already straining on his shirt. What of his bet with Molly? How much more will he have to eat? And how much more can his already bulging belly hold? "Stay tuned" to this and future chapters to find out!
(Story contains conversations between furry and human, long loving descriptions of various foods, and gluttony - lots and lots of gluttony!)
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Wolf
Size 78 x 120px
File Size 40.4 kB
Listed in Folders
All I can say now that you've allowed me to correct errors is "you asked for it." =P Now I will correct grammar errors!!
Add a "to" in "next the peach pie".
Somehow along the way you typed "they had become had become".
Take out the "a" in "a rather thirsty".
Great work, Vargr! Your writing skill have definitely improved! Most of the errors are all things that are usually just crazy things that the computer screws up on. [pats Vargr on the back]
Add a "to" in "next the peach pie".
Somehow along the way you typed "they had become had become".
Take out the "a" in "a rather thirsty".
Great work, Vargr! Your writing skill have definitely improved! Most of the errors are all things that are usually just crazy things that the computer screws up on. [pats Vargr on the back]
Excellent! Thank you so much for those catches! At least this wuff didn't mess up the "oven/over" trick this time. *grins*
You're really good at this! Wuff might have to commission you as "editor and quality control" for any major stories Vargr submits!
*Vargr gives a wolfish grin and leans into the pats*
You're really good at this! Wuff might have to commission you as "editor and quality control" for any major stories Vargr submits!
*Vargr gives a wolfish grin and leans into the pats*
Thank you, Rank! And thanks for the +Fav as well.
Vargr is VERY happy that you're enjoying this story so much.
Wuff is keeping track of those constructive comments, and editing the master copy here on the wuff's den machine. Once this 'novel' is done, wuff will publish it in a single file, and cut the chapters back out again with the corrections incorporated, for replacing the seperate chapters on the wuff's gallery now.
Vargr is VERY happy that you're enjoying this story so much.
Wuff is keeping track of those constructive comments, and editing the master copy here on the wuff's den machine. Once this 'novel' is done, wuff will publish it in a single file, and cut the chapters back out again with the corrections incorporated, for replacing the seperate chapters on the wuff's gallery now.
Vargr's Author's drawing talents are limited solely to technical stuff like schematics, room layouts, etc. Well, not quite true. Wuff DID do 2 images as part of a LiveJournal meme. You can find them here: http://vrghr.livejournal.com/31615.html
One thing to keep in mind - wuffy didn't really "draw" any of the stuff on those two pictures. Those are nearly 100% cut and paste fro clip art and other sources, with lots of manipulation to fit them in a common scene.
Other than those, there are some non-furry photos (aircraft, landscapes, hot air balloons, etc) at various places on the web, and repeats of some of Vargr's stories here located at a couple other sites.
There are also a few images of the silly old dragonwuff, done by other artists. But those are scattered around lots of sites. You have to look them up on the artist's pages/website, since wuff hasn't gotten permission to re-post most of them elsewhere.
One thing to keep in mind - wuffy didn't really "draw" any of the stuff on those two pictures. Those are nearly 100% cut and paste fro clip art and other sources, with lots of manipulation to fit them in a common scene.
Other than those, there are some non-furry photos (aircraft, landscapes, hot air balloons, etc) at various places on the web, and repeats of some of Vargr's stories here located at a couple other sites.
There are also a few images of the silly old dragonwuff, done by other artists. But those are scattered around lots of sites. You have to look them up on the artist's pages/website, since wuff hasn't gotten permission to re-post most of them elsewhere.
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