Yay! A definite improvement on your part! And such a great part of the story. I've never read any weight gain or vore stories where there is an actual plot other than someone eats something/someone. Again, you've definitely done a good job!

This wuff is 'guilty' of writing those sort of shallow vore/feeding/gaining stories too. *grins* There's nothing wrong with them, if you're just looking for some "light and mindless" entertainment. But this one sure turned out to be something a lot more.

This is definitely a case of wuff's characters "seizing the story" and taking it places Vargr hadn't originally intended. When wuffy first imagined this, it was just supposed to be a simple fairy tale, based loosely around a story of a goose, biscuits, and a down-filled mattress that Vargr had read as a cub.

During the early planning for this tale, the wuff was supposed to be overwhelmingly greedy and short-sighted. He breaks into Molly�s house and demands that Molly feed him the cooking he found on her stove, as written. But that story ended MUCH earlier. In that version, Molly tricks the wolf into eating her pies next, as in this one, trying to fill the wolf so much that he can�t eat her next.

But in that one, she feeds him the pies one at a time. Each new pie is bigger and better than the prior. Wolf is so greedy; he can�t keep from devouring each new pie, even though he�s getting very full. By the time she brings out her �masterpiece�, the wolf has reached his limit. She�s also used up all her ingredients for more pie, so the wolf knows that once he finishes this last pie, he�ll be free to eat her next.

With more greed than brains, the wolf continues eating so he can gobble her down next. Though he�s already filled to his limit, he tries to stuff down that last pie anyway. Crammed beyond his bursting point, the villainous wolf finally explodes. And instead of getting eaten, Molly gets to show off a new wolf fur coat in her next trip to town. And the story ends with a moral, something on the order of �Greed goeth before a *bang*�

*chuckles* As you can see, things have diverged GREATLY since those early plans. Some day Vargr might still write a variation of that original idea, but this story is on a very different tack.

So that is how you intended the story to go! It's cool, but this is much better.

Um... where are those 'shallow' feeding/gaining stories that you wrote cause I can't find any in your gallery?

Well, "The Predator" and "Gas Attack" were exactly "intellectually challenging". *chuckles*

But the real �candy fluff� pieces wuff hasn�t published. Those were mostly just for Vargr�s entertainment, or failed experiments, or the sort of stuff wuff didn�t really think was worth public exposure.

On the other paw, there might be some out there who would get a few seconds of diversion from one of those stories. Perhaps Vargr SHOULD publish some. (once he gets all the nasty grammar, spelling, etc. cleaned up in them!)

So, you think the original idea behind B.B.W. was cool too? Do you think wuff ought to right that version up as well? Of course, Vargr would have to change the species and situations enough to make it different enough to be a seperate story.

If wuff DID write that one, what sort of critter do you think ought to be the "villian" in that one? What fur is tops on your "popping" list? *grins*

Are those story on FA, cause I can't find them. Are they under adult rating cus I'm underage.

The other version, yes maybe you should write it.

For the 'villian' I think you should a bear, or a lion.

*hugs draggywuff*
^__^
You're fur is so soft!

Ah! That's right, wuff marked those stories "mature", because of the popping in one, and the violence and vore in the other. Perhaps Vargr over-protected them, but it seemed safest to err on the conservative side rather than get wuffy's paws "slapped" for letting inappropriate stuff out to the general public. Perhaps Vargr should get some second opinions on those ratings. If the FA admins don't think those are mature, wuff can down-grade the rating.

Hmm... Bear or Lion. Wuff happens to have a couple "lion stories" already in work. But the bear idea is a distinct possibility. Wuff was also considering a fox and a rabbit, since they're such natural enemies in the wilds. *grins* Or perhaps a 'yote and a hare. *grins* Possibilities! Possibilities!

Thanks for the encouragement!

Are the lion stories about gluttony?

Cause I like stories where a Lion get stuffed with food? Favourite so far is Noone's series "The Lion".

Then comes canines (as there a few of these of which I could find, but the one I found are very good), and then bears. Have you read the Grandpaws stories by Jankcoon (I don't know if it is by him, but I know that they were based on Tolstoy's stories on Grandpaws)

Have you ever written a story about Huskies and their bellies?

I better stop typing as I'm going on and on and on. :) *hugs*

*nod nods* The lion stories are definitely about gluttony. Wuff really likes the ideas of stuffing a lion really full. Guess that 'cause lions can eat so much in 'real life', and get so round and full. Wuff just loves to imagine what might happen if someone could _encourage_ a lion to keep eating. Or to feed them again and again so they wouldn't have to wait until they were empty and slim enough to chase down their next meal befor they ate. Mmmm!

Vargr has DEFINITELY been enjoying Noone's "The Lion". But wuff hasn't read the "Grandpaw" stories. Thanks for the lead! Wuff will have to check those out! Vargr has also enjoyed all of Lupine's feeding/eating stories. He has several, with several different species, but they've ALL be excellent!

Vargr hasn't written any husky-belly stories yet. But.... *giggles*

I've also read one or two of Lupine's stories. 'For Tang' is my favourite. Don't know where most of his stories are.

The Grandpaws stories are on The Junkpile site. I read those stories. Not into vore that much, but the result of the eater's belly is cool.

YAY for lion gluttony!!

:)

And the wuff keeps growing. ^^ Good character development there Vargr! Seems the wuffy is getting quite sated and social the larger he gets. :)

*grins* Sated and social, a good description!

Bet that trick works on more than wolves, too! And if it doesn't; if you've stuffed 'em enough, they can't chase you either! *giggles*

WOW!!

The best chapter yet!!!

His belly must be very big!!

<_<
>_>
<_< MAKE IT BIGGER!!! hehehe

*husky kneels and open his mouth*

Please can you ask Molly to feed me as well! ^__^

Thank you VERY much for the wonderful comments! *Vargr twitches his nose (he has to use a pawfinger to help - Barbara Edan he's NOT!)* Wish GRANTED! *giggles* That wolf is definitely going to get much bigger!

*Vargr's eyes twinkle mischievously* You want feeding? Why settle for the 'student' when you can partake of the 'master'. After all, wuffy wrote the book (literally) on Molly's feeding. Besides, she's busy with her own 'doggy'.

*Vargr's grin grows wider and more toothy, and he rubs his paws together in anticipation* "Pop! goes the husk-y" *he sing-songs* Oh my, did wuff say that out loud? *giggles*

Oh, I didn't 'know' that Molly was the 'student'. Well learning from the 'master' is better anyway. ;)

I hope the food is delicious, but please don't eat me, I don't want to be eaten. I don't think I'll 'pop' when overstuffed with delicious food, I always make room for more. ;) hehehe

*husky's very empty stomach growls* ^__^

*rubs tummy and gives the cute puppy look of desperation*

*chuckles* Vargr will make sure you're on his "do not eat" list.

Vargr's pretty proud of his cooking. There's more to eating than just stuffing mass quantities down a fur's maw. Wuff's under the firm belief that a meal should be tasty, smell good, and look good as well. After all, you see and smell it before you ever taste it. And if you're not going to enjoy the taste, then might as well run a hose down your throat and fill ya up with something cheap like oatmeal or rice porriage. *smiles*

Oh! An "un-poppable" husky dog? Better be careful, Vargr might just take that as a challenge! Don't worry though, wuff keeps a BIG supply of "Fyreworks"-brand "fur patch kits", to patch up and 're-inflate' popped furs. (Wuff keeps such a big supply, because he's always needing them himself! *giggles*)

I argee. Cooking has to be tasted and savoured before going the gullet and into the belly of the beast.

And trust me. You won't need the "Fyreworks"-brand "fur patch kits" on my belly. ;) hehehe

Heh, I've read that story about the goose and the biscuits and the feather bed! But they were poppy seed cakes in the originial book.

And when I said that I had read others with little plot, I mean there was very little plot. It was more of "This is Fred. Fred is hungry. Fred vores innocent passerby. Plenty of details about such actions follow." Barely any work put into it. Just there for someone to fulfill their 'need' for vore/stuffing. Yours are infinitely better.

Wow! Someone else actually remembers that "goose" story? *bounces* So wuff wasn't nuts and imagining it after all. It's been SO long since Vargr read it, and couldn't find anything about it elsewhere. You remember even better than wuffy - they WERE poppy seed cakes. Vargr recalls that, now that you mentioned it. Wow again! *giggles*

Thank you very kindly for the compliments about this wuff's plots. *gives you a fluffy dragonwuff hug in gratitude*

Aaaww, thanks for the hug, I've been needing one this week from something so fluffy. [buries head in the fur]

Whoops! I forgot to fav this. :(

*+fav*

Thanks for the Fav!

I must say, Vrghr, you tell an awesome story. :) This little series is saturated with fairytale-style goodness (and the growing wolf doesn't hurt, either!). Can't wait to read more!

Thank you very much for the nice comment!

Not only saturated with 'fairy-tail goodness', but saturated with calories too! *chuckles* Hope that wolf isn't watching his cholesterol. *grins*

Wow! I really like where this is going and your descriptions of the evens and food are quite amazing!

But darn it, I'd swear that I am getting fatter with every chapter I read!

Nicely done!
:3

*Laughs* Now THAT'S a complement! Wuff's stories are so "real" that just reading the feeding scenes will put weight on ya! *giggles*

Better watch out during the following chapters - the meals just keep getting larger from here on out. You might end up needing a new wardrobe.

You're welcome and thanks for the warning, I'll start saving for those new clothes and a membership at the nearest gym too.
:3

I like how the characters have actual personalities. It's not something you see much in this kind of story. :)

Thank you!

This wuff has always been rather obsessed with creating "full fledged" characters, even while working out the 'script' for the parts those characters will play in the story. As things evolve, the characters seem to come alive in wuff's mind - even on Vargr's shortest stories.

Makes writing 'easy' from there on; all this dragonwuff has to do is 'chronical' what they do next, as they play out the scenes in wuff's head.
*smiles*

I LOVE this story!! ^_^ Yesh, finally, a really good reason to go on and check FA instead of just DA every day!! ^_^ I missed MY dinner, I think, but man, this is so worth it. I'm watchin' you after seeing this wonderful tale!! ^_^ (Tee-hee...I can't wait to see the cool hybrid kids! XD)

Wow! You missed a meal for this story? That's a very high complement indeed! Thank you VERY much! *hugs*

Not sure this tale will continue long enough to see a 'family scene', but it certainly does seem that there are some pretty deep emotions developing here.

Hope you enjoy the future installments just as much. And thank you very much for the +watch!

Great series, Vrghr! I kept expecting the story to go the way you originally intended, but I like it better this way. Can't let a good belly go to waste by letting it explode! XD Can't wait for future chapters. :)

Glad you're enjoying this version! Future chapters are on the way, now that wuff is back home and has access to his story files again.

As far as explosions - wuff has a few tales that 'end with a bang' as well, so furs of both preferences can find a finish that suits their fancy. Wuff will have those all posted here some day(provided he can get off his lazy tail and get 'em all finished *grins*).

Just be-ea-utiful work here again, Varghr! Each chapter is well-worded and very nice. It felt like I wasn't reading a story, I was watching a movie; the places and characters were that vivid.

Cannot wait until you put a few more chapters on this story, man. It's too good an idea to waste. The world always gets a little brighter with each new story you make, Varg. *snuggles the hefty-wolf, giving him a belly-rub as a reward*

Fear not, Russano. Wuff's enjoying this series too much to abandon it. There's plenty more to come in Vargr's wild and wooly imagination.

Thank you very kindly for the nice remarks! Very glad you're enjoying this so much!

I really like this story. I wonder what this wolf is gonna look like a a few months down the road =(^_^)= keep up the good work

*grins* Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it.

A few months? Just think what he's going to look like by the end of all those courses Molly has yet to feed him! Wolfy balloon, ahoy! *chuckles*

I've just read the last five. They are really good! You are a very good writer! I can't wait to see what happens in the next ones!

Thank you very much for the kind words, and for the +Favs on all these chapters. Wuff's so happy you enjoyed these!

More "installments" are definitely on the way!

Don't you mean more courses? ;)

*laughs* Definitely more courses as well! That wolf is going to end up stuffed fuller than a holiday turkey! Hope his belly can keep up with his boasts! *grins*

*grin* His eyes are bigger than his stomach. Well, we shall see if they are. Heheh.