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Well, since the last song posted had a decent reaction. I decided to post another one here. I think down the road, I’ll make a Myspace band page of my songs. But I think this song can go well with the FA audience here. The lyrics of Iron Man was a huge influence on the way this song was written. It does have that comic book doom and gloom feel of a man rejected by society bringing an end to mankind as we know it. Other influences as well. Just promise me not to take the lyrics seriously. It’s just fiction. I had a old friend freak out when he first heard it. He said it was the most darkest song I’ve ever written.
Revenge After Death
Poor lonely nice guy whom never had a girlfriend
Committed suicide to escape the pain
Found out that there was no heaven or hell
Stuck In the astral full of rage
Fresh from the grave he builds up energy
From the passion for revenge
Endowed with the power to possess
Sets plans for the kind who rejected him
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
You’re loved one is possessed by him
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
He now plants his demon seed
Lustful passion is his cue to get in
His spirit then plugs into their senses
Indwelling in pleasure he was denied in life
Then he takes over and they rape themselves
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
His seed will be born and taint mankind
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
The demon will take flesh and carry out his vengeance
The dragon child then grows
Rips out of the womb
Feminine and lustfull
Matures and makes her move
She kills and feeds on the women
Seduces the men
Gives birth to more demonesses
The cycle starts again
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
Like a virus she infects the population
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
The lonely guys give themselves willingly
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
Human society falls into collapse
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
He reincarnates and finds his mate
Revenge After Death
Poor lonely nice guy whom never had a girlfriend
Committed suicide to escape the pain
Found out that there was no heaven or hell
Stuck In the astral full of rage
Fresh from the grave he builds up energy
From the passion for revenge
Endowed with the power to possess
Sets plans for the kind who rejected him
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
You’re loved one is possessed by him
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
He now plants his demon seed
Lustful passion is his cue to get in
His spirit then plugs into their senses
Indwelling in pleasure he was denied in life
Then he takes over and they rape themselves
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
His seed will be born and taint mankind
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
The demon will take flesh and carry out his vengeance
The dragon child then grows
Rips out of the womb
Feminine and lustfull
Matures and makes her move
She kills and feeds on the women
Seduces the men
Gives birth to more demonesses
The cycle starts again
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
Like a virus she infects the population
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
The lonely guys give themselves willingly
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
Human society falls into collapse
Revenge Revenge Beyond the grave
He reincarnates and finds his mate
Category Music / All
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File Size 4.27 MB
Its... interesting O.o
The lyrics are good, but it just sounds like youre (I presume its you singing) just shouting them rather than singing. Try working with the tune rather than just screaming at the microphone. Theres no rythm or anything like that, its more like youre just reading the lyrics aloud.
Havent heard your other song, I'll go listen to that in a bit.
It might just be an accent thing or something, I dont know where you come from, but it just doesnt work with this song.
The lyrics are good, but it just sounds like youre (I presume its you singing) just shouting them rather than singing. Try working with the tune rather than just screaming at the microphone. Theres no rythm or anything like that, its more like youre just reading the lyrics aloud.
Havent heard your other song, I'll go listen to that in a bit.
It might just be an accent thing or something, I dont know where you come from, but it just doesnt work with this song.
Well. The singing style is normal for punk rock (and other forms of garage rock and such) and i do consider myself a punk rock musician. Simple, energetic, and to the point. I know this style of music dosn't move with every one but it has been a popular and motivating style of music since the mid 70s and there's plenty of pre-punk forms of music before that.
These songs are interesting. I'm kind of lukewarm on this one, but I liked your one on the "Death of the American Dream." Your sound is nice old-school punk. Your vocals and sound reminds me a little bit of Minor Threat, from what I remember listening to them back in high school.
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