This something I've been working on for a while. Please critique. Before I ink the sombitch. The long-haired, pistol-packing character is my sonna, the big-eared one is an ongoing development.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 931 x 1280px
File Size 114.2 kB
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I think the variation in the style within a single picture might be a little much, I think it's just the eyes on the fennec-eared character..... sounds like typical advice but look up tracy Butler's lackadaisy comic and her action scenes and expressions as well as her tutorials: http://www.lackadaisycats.com/ that may help! she has a lot of good advice, similar well uh, accessories? (not into guns and fight scenes but love the way some people render action/motion poses and similar scenes) so just a thought...... she has many different species of cats she uses with different cultural/ethnic backgrounds and she shows it SO well while still being consistent in her style with every frame.
I hope that helps a bit. Also, find places that offer redlines! weasyl I think has a critique section but it is still beta and I don't have one myself but that's worth a try if you can find a place that will do that. yerf used to be the best for critique and redline when they had their forums up and running years ago, I hope you find some help with your work too!
For anatomy, try anatomy books such as "realistic figure drawing" by Joseph Sheppard who I imagine has many other great anatomy/figure drawing books. learn from life, gesture drawing and the human form first rather than anime/animated movies and other things that are already stylized or you will repeat their flaws without knowing, style comes naturally as you get comfortable with your art. :)
I hope that helps a bit. Also, find places that offer redlines! weasyl I think has a critique section but it is still beta and I don't have one myself but that's worth a try if you can find a place that will do that. yerf used to be the best for critique and redline when they had their forums up and running years ago, I hope you find some help with your work too!
For anatomy, try anatomy books such as "realistic figure drawing" by Joseph Sheppard who I imagine has many other great anatomy/figure drawing books. learn from life, gesture drawing and the human form first rather than anime/animated movies and other things that are already stylized or you will repeat their flaws without knowing, style comes naturally as you get comfortable with your art. :)
Thanks, That was very constructive. I grew unhappy with this picture and put it on the bottom of the clip-board. I might reevaluate now. The big eared char. is causing me a whole lot of trouble. He is the first hybrid character I have ever done. I have no drawings of him full body, and not one in profile. I don't know how to draw his ears and head from the side. I can't draw my fox from the front! This whole drawing was compromised from the start.
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