Ooooooh.... librarian.... awesome...

Oh I just saw that you WANT critiques? Oh. Whups. Well, he's a librarian with a thunderhammer... and they usualy have a force sword or staff, but that's not really a problem, because in the VAST universe of 40K, there's gotta be a librarian with a thunderhammer out there somewhere. And looking badass.

The armor is perfect, as is his face and the tattered cloth. The feather is a sweet touch. I can't tell if you were going for a chapter on his right pauldron, or if that's a rank insignia? Anyway, this is awesome.

Thank you very much for the critique
Its the rank insignia, i know its hard to tell from the bad quality. X3

The circle with the skull in it? That's what I guessed. I'm not sure, but I think that librarians are all the same rank, "codicier", and that they wear their chapter on the right pauldron. There's some kind of rank because there's like ... a Chapter Librarian... but I don't think it's like regular marines. Which I could be EASILY WRONG about... and I don't care, but if you want to get all super specifically correct. Honestly, this is a FANTASTIC picture! I've tried drawing space marines and mine look .... not this good. :0) WELL DONE!

And, that mark is somewhat obscured so that could be a chapter marking just as easily... Anyway. You rock. :0)

Sorry if I nerd out right now but the thunder hammer needs to be larger the head should look like a huge iron block and the pole taller that a space marine but the thunder hammer in his hands is the terminator one.

No its alright.
I did know that the head of hammer is large, but went with a smaller size on purpose. :)

I really love this art your getting a watch

Awwwr thankies

Love it! Makes me want to finish my 40K figs :D

This is awesome. And hot. Did I mention that's a hottie right dere.