
Your Champion Comes Marching Home
Some quick personal art, always had a love-hate relationship with the idea of death notifications.
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It's certainly not a crime, but you could have done it more tactfully. You even stated that you knew what the commentator meant, so why not muster up a bit of grace and correct their use of words without making yourself look like an ostentatious grammar Nazi? Seriously, man. Tact. Try it.
>Correct someone giving innacurate comments
Let's see, let's analyze your response here...
">subtle
fucking.... what?"
> Using 4chan/message board style quoting
> "fucking"
> no proper feedback on the first response
Yeah, dude, great job correcting that person efficiently and informatively. You are such an asset to the human race. We should be so grateful to have you with us.
Okay, no, how about next time you try something like,
"Subtle probably isn't the word you're looking for; the picture is very still and nonexplosive compared to how other people react, but subtle would imply the message or the hurt was almost hidden and imperceptible at first glance. You probably were thinking of 'subdued' or even 'relatively serene'."
There you go. Was that so hard?
Let's see, let's analyze your response here...
">subtle
fucking.... what?"
> Using 4chan/message board style quoting
> "fucking"
> no proper feedback on the first response
Yeah, dude, great job correcting that person efficiently and informatively. You are such an asset to the human race. We should be so grateful to have you with us.
Okay, no, how about next time you try something like,
"Subtle probably isn't the word you're looking for; the picture is very still and nonexplosive compared to how other people react, but subtle would imply the message or the hurt was almost hidden and imperceptible at first glance. You probably were thinking of 'subdued' or even 'relatively serene'."
There you go. Was that so hard?
I did actually have a couple, the left hand on the right character seems unnaturally high for an expression of grief or shock, closer to the center of the chest would look more natural imo; also the tear looks like it was either rushed or thrown in at the last second, it traces a very odd line straight down. Also I can't really tell wtf is going on with the lighting direction and shadows, looks like the light is coming from about 3 different angles.
I think the blue could work if you were going for a kind of color in greyscale vibe ala Sin City. The pose thing is just a gutcheck strangeness, personally if I gasp like that (and most people I've seen do the same) the arms are drawn up closer to the center of the body, more exaggerated would be falling to a near fetal position.
I think it's because I kind of wanted a compromise between him using both hands to hold his mouth? But that would be a little more cliche, and I wanted to show the ring (thought about gripping the shirt near his chest though). I'll do some mirror poses next time haha.
Monochromatic sometimes works in a piece like this but there needs to be more blue overall were I to do it (although... this was originally in color and the year was kind of an accident). But yeah!
Monochromatic sometimes works in a piece like this but there needs to be more blue overall were I to do it (although... this was originally in color and the year was kind of an accident). But yeah!
I also noticed the salute with the right hand was a little high, and the arm almost looked like it was in a kind of unnatrual position. Whenever I salute, it's usually near the corner of my right eye or around that general area depending on the cover I'm wearing. Still great job though!
Your behavior and attitude is "completely inapplicable - for the picture"
You understood the meaning of the words, and therefor communication was successful. Having been in one of these situations first hand for a friend, the Widower in question is completely reserved.
Please be Polite to others whilst commenting, and also consider the subject of what your posting on too. Although its nice to see someone supports correct grammar, "you don't have to be a dick about it".
~ yours, W.A.D
You understood the meaning of the words, and therefor communication was successful. Having been in one of these situations first hand for a friend, the Widower in question is completely reserved.
Please be Polite to others whilst commenting, and also consider the subject of what your posting on too. Although its nice to see someone supports correct grammar, "you don't have to be a dick about it".
~ yours, W.A.D
well yeah,you are right but you know if you tear first from the left,it means pain and if right,happiness and look at him,if you face the way he does,it just full of pain and hes not on his knees cus he just heard these words "sir,I'm sorry but your husband...." i think :3
Hey man. Chill. As someone who's actually done this. Once for a fallen brother in arms and a few times working for the fire dept. That is pretty subtle... most people are on the verge of passing out or totally collapsing or breaking down in total hysterics.
Give the guy a break
Give the guy a break
Wow, I know what you mean dude. This is some really powerful stuff.
and of course I have this playing in my head as I look at it.
and of course I have this playing in my head as I look at it.
Funny story about the army and me. Involves my father being a Lieutenant Comander in the US Navy and some army recruiter calling asking to speak with me Xp
But anyway, this is a really sad and good mood killing picture. Which means you did a pretty damn good job with capturing that emotion of losing your loved one. One thing that bothers me is the guy saluting. It just looks off. -chuckles- always funny to see my dad constantly correct those who don't salute right.
But anyway, this is a really sad and good mood killing picture. Which means you did a pretty damn good job with capturing that emotion of losing your loved one. One thing that bothers me is the guy saluting. It just looks off. -chuckles- always funny to see my dad constantly correct those who don't salute right.
I think the arm faces more forward, and in a real salute it follows the path of the back (straight out sideways?). Two of my good friends are Marines so I'm familiar, haha. I just didn't want to cover his nose, the whole pose got... reeeeally awkward that way so this is a liberty.
Being military (CDN) myself yeah this hits home a little..could happen to anyone of my friends easily. Yeah it resembles the salute we do as NCMs at least. I have seen some different variations from officers I can tell you, but nice pic..very well done, definitely lots of emotion
Interesting perspective. I suppose that would fit, although the soldier is a little too stiff and distant for that (in my opinion).
I think the only way to make it more obvious or poignant would be if the soldier was handing the widower a folded flag. I don't know much about the subject, so that may be inaccurate (my only experience with this is through the lens of the media).
I think the only way to make it more obvious or poignant would be if the soldier was handing the widower a folded flag. I don't know much about the subject, so that may be inaccurate (my only experience with this is through the lens of the media).
Ok, this is basically how it goes:
You get the news
you cry
the next day they take you to another town to watch all the deceased soldiers come back with all the other crying familys(in my case, i went from fort bragg to Dover)
You go back home
have a memorial service on your town
go where ever it is that the actual funeral is held.
if i recall, the flag is presented at the memorial service. Me and my mom each got one, as did my step fathers mother. Another soldier/officer is with you the whole time as well, to help coach you through it.
i may have gotten details wrong... i was in a daze most of the time
You get the news
you cry
the next day they take you to another town to watch all the deceased soldiers come back with all the other crying familys(in my case, i went from fort bragg to Dover)
You go back home
have a memorial service on your town
go where ever it is that the actual funeral is held.
if i recall, the flag is presented at the memorial service. Me and my mom each got one, as did my step fathers mother. Another soldier/officer is with you the whole time as well, to help coach you through it.
i may have gotten details wrong... i was in a daze most of the time
First off, I'd like to thank you from the deepest well in my heart for your support of those like me. And, like the others have said, this is a simply amazing piece of work. It brings to my mind the fear that my family and boyfriend may have this happen to them, and it makes me feel truly honored to be a citizen of a country in which my freedom was fought for and defended.
And, sadly, this brings but one quote to mind: "Only the dead know the end of war."
And, sadly, this brings but one quote to mind: "Only the dead know the end of war."
I really like this piece.. and hate it at the same time. I hate the idea of the loss of servicemen and women, it shouldn't be happening.
For several years I've been a part of a charity that helps severely wounded soldiers get a handicap-friendly home specifically built for their needs, but it always pains me when they weren't fortunate enough to make it home with their lives.
I think you did a really great job coloring this, and I'm glad you went for the angle you did because it's really dramatic. overall amazing piece as always :)
For several years I've been a part of a charity that helps severely wounded soldiers get a handicap-friendly home specifically built for their needs, but it always pains me when they weren't fortunate enough to make it home with their lives.
I think you did a really great job coloring this, and I'm glad you went for the angle you did because it's really dramatic. overall amazing piece as always :)
What is this terrorist in training music? I got one to top that one: www.youtube.com/watch?v=XBOXQvx1xNM
I have a love hate relationship with them as well, they suck but the raw emotion you see when sum one is so upset is a beautiful sign of how they truly felt. So as hard as it is and as painful as it must be it is at times like this when you will truly get a glance into how sum one really felt on a deep emotional level.
So you hate the news and upsetting sum one, But you love that they felt that way and most people can or will try to empathise <3
So you hate the news and upsetting sum one, But you love that they felt that way and most people can or will try to empathise <3
It's very sobering and reminds me of thoughts I have about the possiblity of losing my Uncle while he is overseas...
Though I am bothered by the tear in this picture.. idk, it doesnt seem to conform to the shap/contour of the character's muzzle, and the tear ducts are on the side closer to the nose not the outside of the face so i don't know why it is where it is.... I mean if you produce tears rapidly enough they will bunch up and fall from many different points. But at the very beginning stages of what will most likely be massive grief? more in the middle maybe :) Anyways, I really do LOVE this pic. It connects with me and I'll remember that .. :)
Though I am bothered by the tear in this picture.. idk, it doesnt seem to conform to the shap/contour of the character's muzzle, and the tear ducts are on the side closer to the nose not the outside of the face so i don't know why it is where it is.... I mean if you produce tears rapidly enough they will bunch up and fall from many different points. But at the very beginning stages of what will most likely be massive grief? more in the middle maybe :) Anyways, I really do LOVE this pic. It connects with me and I'll remember that .. :)
I know what you mean. There's both some inspiration and intense pain that comes with it. There's always some emotional catharsis that comes from suffering.
The most painful thing about death notifications is the utter brutality and finality of the truth. Unlike other forms of suffering, that pain will be there always. It is so much more crushing than a goodbye without knowing if you'll see someone again. It is the last goodbye, and you would have never been able to deliver it.
The most painful thing about death notifications is the utter brutality and finality of the truth. Unlike other forms of suffering, that pain will be there always. It is so much more crushing than a goodbye without knowing if you'll see someone again. It is the last goodbye, and you would have never been able to deliver it.
This reminds me of what is quite possibly the most powerful music video I've seen in a very long time, by Linkin Park, for their song Castle of Glass. You should watch it if you haven't seen it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScNNfyq3d_w
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScNNfyq3d_w
non of whats above would even be be being talked about if every American sat down for ten minutes and examined why this is a reality. non of this would happen without the indoctrination of the American people and the coercion of government to send people to war for the purpose of imposing more power over others.
I feel for those who fall in combat, i feel more for those blindly following just cause the government said to.
I feel for those who fall in combat, i feel more for those blindly following just cause the government said to.
Red. you've reached some people with this peice. The title, context and Subject of this is Moving.
To knock on someones door is incredibly difficult when bearing news like this, And the salute is even harder. Wonderful work, the emotion is perfect.
Well done and thank you for the Feels x
To knock on someones door is incredibly difficult when bearing news like this, And the salute is even harder. Wonderful work, the emotion is perfect.
Well done and thank you for the Feels x
Huh... kind of reminded of "Leave from the vine" from Avatar the last airbender when general Iroh sings to his son who died in the war..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nuUz8v3ouhI :3
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nuUz8v3ouhI :3
My Grandfather was actually a member of the funerary corps for the Air Force a long time ago, and when he recently passed we had an honor guard present the flag to my grandmother. It was incredibly eerie, with the only sounds at the time their boots clicking against the ground as they folded the flag. I can't imagine how difficult this must be.
On a related note, this article from a few years back is incredibly poignant about the subject http://www.rockymountainnews.com/sp...../final-salute/
On a related note, this article from a few years back is incredibly poignant about the subject http://www.rockymountainnews.com/sp...../final-salute/
Truly a touching piece of work; its never easy to receive such sad news of a loved ones passing in defense to the freedoms some us seem to have forgotten have been fought for, and died for. I've never had to face such things as having an Honor Guard come to my door to present word of a family member's passing. But my thoughts are with those who have had to face a matter such as this. Its a hard to face reality, but the memories of those lost are never forgotten.
Doing this in an opera was bad enough, I can't imagine how it would be IRL.
La mort t'attend
Sur la grabat.
Moi, je meur de ta main,
Et je tombe a un soldat.
I actually had to pull my hat over my eyes when we did that first in full dress rehearsal so nobody saw me almost lose it.
La mort t'attend
Sur la grabat.
Moi, je meur de ta main,
Et je tombe a un soldat.
I actually had to pull my hat over my eyes when we did that first in full dress rehearsal so nobody saw me almost lose it.
When i saw the pic at first i thought it might be someone coming home. Then the title reminded me of Avatar: the last Airbender, when Iro is singing that song for his son. Which fits this picture.
This is a very sad picture and sorta hits me personally because i have quite a few family members in the military and so does my boyfriend. This is a very real fear for the both of us.
You really made a powerful picture here. I almost want to thank you for not being afraid to draw something like this.
I believe whether or not someone supports the military, everyone can understand how devastating it is to lose someone close.
This is a very sad picture and sorta hits me personally because i have quite a few family members in the military and so does my boyfriend. This is a very real fear for the both of us.
You really made a powerful picture here. I almost want to thank you for not being afraid to draw something like this.
I believe whether or not someone supports the military, everyone can understand how devastating it is to lose someone close.
This image makes me... extremely uncomfortable. It hits too close to home for me to just accept it as just another piece of art.
Congratulations for that, Red. Being confronted with the things that make us uncomfortable are, in the end, the very things that we should seek to appreciate the most. They stand as a reminder that no matter how much we try to blind ourselves to it, the world we live in is full of terrible things... and with luck, can remind some of us to always be grateful for the little fortune we have in a world of ever-present sorrow.
I sincerely thank you for this piece. I know it may not mean much, but this touches me deeply.
Congratulations for that, Red. Being confronted with the things that make us uncomfortable are, in the end, the very things that we should seek to appreciate the most. They stand as a reminder that no matter how much we try to blind ourselves to it, the world we live in is full of terrible things... and with luck, can remind some of us to always be grateful for the little fortune we have in a world of ever-present sorrow.
I sincerely thank you for this piece. I know it may not mean much, but this touches me deeply.
After looking at this long enough, I feel sick. As an Army Brat, I know this fear all too well.
I also appreciate the attention to detail on the uniform.
(Just to be clear, I'm sick from the pain of the feels. It's a wonderful piece, but god. Hits a little too close to home...)
I also appreciate the attention to detail on the uniform.
(Just to be clear, I'm sick from the pain of the feels. It's a wonderful piece, but god. Hits a little too close to home...)
I was married to a solider (I was one too, but he was infantry.. so the risk was his) and I was so scared of these. I had dreams about it, and I just would break down crying and screaming. I really don't ever want to risk such pain, but if my future husband (I'm divorced...so I could care less about that other dude now) was to go off, I would wait forever for him. ; A ;
You know Red.... lol now that im getting around to going through the 6000 submissions ive gotten lax on viewing... you art has... idk... a special kind of life to it... the saddest moment of my life was when i found out my birthfather passed away in the service... funny thing is i never really knew him.. i was adopted at the age of five from iceland but he managed to find me and... it's even stranger when an Icelandic military man shows up at your door, in utah no less, and waits for you to get home from school, this was back 4 years ago when i was in highschool, and me and him go into this long discussion of why it's me being told and i come to find out im his only living relative, while my adoptive parents have no clue what he and i are saying, lol but.... this will go into a very special place in my heart. thank you for this. really
I often daydream and I also have a love-hate relationship with the idea of someone sacrificing themselves for some they love, like pushing them out of the way of a moving car but getting hit instead. it is just such a moving idea that has so much love and pain it that it makes my throat clench up.
I have a few friends that serve for country's all over the world but the saddest thing in their life is delivering bad news they say it kills apart of themselves as well because some of them were best friends who saved them so they can live you know one friend of mine sorta introduced me to is mates but then he was sent out on a recon mission he was sniped by friendly by accident when his friends found out they were devistated (can't spell lol) he was open about his life you know he had a bond with everyone he met he even said he was going to quit because he had enough of this the sad thing is he had no family only friends we never defriended him (this was online PS4 you know) he served well he was a major just promoted he asked for recon missions only because he thought he would not get shot but he did
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