So...backstory things on this.
A while ago I tried doing "writing snippets" that were just little scenes that weren't really enough to be a full story on their own. I did one that was mentioned in a previous journal, and then...I tried to do this, it ended up becoming overly long and I kind of lost interest until now. It's still on the short side, a little over 2500 words, but I thought that was just enough to submit it here on its own.
Another factor of dropping this was that I became embarrassed over the subject matter. I've always had this strange fixation for things involving slime and ooze and such materials but I never really get much of a chance to write anything about them (aside from a very old, very stupid thing in my scraps). The content of this story quickly went in a direction that felt very bizarre to me, far more blatantly fetish-driven than anything I've written before. I also didn't like what I did for the protagonist, a random girl who doesn't have any name or even dialogue and pretty much exists for the sole purpose of getting stuck (hurr-hurr) in this scenario, but I couldn't really find any other way to do this.
Anyway after all that, getting to the submission itself, involves inflation, transformation, mild bondage I suppose, and copious amounts of evil black goop. There's kind of nudity at the end but there isn't really anything to be shown...I'm not sure if the method in which the inflation is carried out is enough in itself to warrant a mature rating.
I should probably try to get some kind of special thumbnail for these snippet submissions.
All writing snippets are also being submitted here
A while ago I tried doing "writing snippets" that were just little scenes that weren't really enough to be a full story on their own. I did one that was mentioned in a previous journal, and then...I tried to do this, it ended up becoming overly long and I kind of lost interest until now. It's still on the short side, a little over 2500 words, but I thought that was just enough to submit it here on its own.
Another factor of dropping this was that I became embarrassed over the subject matter. I've always had this strange fixation for things involving slime and ooze and such materials but I never really get much of a chance to write anything about them (aside from a very old, very stupid thing in my scraps). The content of this story quickly went in a direction that felt very bizarre to me, far more blatantly fetish-driven than anything I've written before. I also didn't like what I did for the protagonist, a random girl who doesn't have any name or even dialogue and pretty much exists for the sole purpose of getting stuck (hurr-hurr) in this scenario, but I couldn't really find any other way to do this.
Anyway after all that, getting to the submission itself, involves inflation, transformation, mild bondage I suppose, and copious amounts of evil black goop. There's kind of nudity at the end but there isn't really anything to be shown...I'm not sure if the method in which the inflation is carried out is enough in itself to warrant a mature rating.
I should probably try to get some kind of special thumbnail for these snippet submissions.
All writing snippets are also being submitted here
Category Story / Inflation
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