interesting, odd, fun, dunno why it would creep anyone out, must be some people are wusses :P hehe, really get;s you set in the mood though, I could almost picture it as a movie :D

For some reason this sounds like a good script for a Twilight Zone episode. They were often more interested in an peculiar image or individual point of view without being overly concerned with "answers" or some factual "truth."

Oh sure, I was a bit of a fan of the Twilight Zone. I loved the one where the guy survives some disaster by taking his lunch in a vault where it was quiet enough for him to read. I could maybe stretch it into something more along those lines.

It's good as it stands too, of course. It might be an interesting bit to have him call, I don't know, Laura's Loveline to talk about his girl troubles and then get 911 involved as the person taking the call realizes just how off the beam this guy is. But just a suggestion, mostly because I like your writing and selfishly would like to see more of it *grin* But do what you like. Otherwise it starts to turn into work :P

Anyway, yeah, love Twilight Zone. Of course, the one that ended up a raving lunatic at the end of many of those episodes was often the only one that actually knew what was going on . . . .

I liked it.... very much...

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Thanks, it's really just a strange little thing that leaped into my head and ran out my fingers :p

Those are the best kinds....

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Yeah, but that's just about everything I'm writing recently. Today I'm starting a project based on this really weird dream I had last night. I was trying to limit it to five pages, but the silly thing seems to have opened some sort of gate and I'm up past 17 pages now. Three hours. I finally had to take a break. Hopefully I'll be able to use some of those pages :p

I do hope do.... I love when the gate just kind of opens like that

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I didn't see your comment about Napoleon XIV until I had finished, but I was mentally humming as I read. Good work, Leasara!

Thanks much, glad it came across :)