Very deep hun. Knowing you, It shows the true side of your colors. Even if it's a sad one.

*smiles some, hugs tight* thanks for commenting....

Well, I liked it ^^. I can related to the emotions a lot of feeling like people deserve better for i suffer from a good severe case of self-loathing. I liked the cheater-deciever in-line rhyme. Also the 'monsters den' was a really nice image for the emotion with it.

I liked the whole idea of 'I don't know why you want me but I don't want to make you any sadder than i must already and if you want me to stay i will though i have know idea why you would want that." Thats how i saw the meaning anyway. *hugs*

On a side note, if you save your file as a text document (.txt) it will show on the page and people wont have to download it. That way you might get viewers to read and comment that wouldn't bother downloading but would read it if it showed right on the page instead. Just a thought *huggles* I love poetry and i look forward to reading more of your work

thank you very much ^///^; i've never considered myself a good poet, but when i do write it.... eh, my creative writing teacher perpetually used the word "cliche" throughout the poetry part of the lesson.

and your intepretation is perfect, which could be a good or bad thing. ^_^; i guess i'm not so clever at poetry but, again, i thank you for this. *hugs back, nuzzling some* ^^

And about the side note, i was wondering about that... perhaps i should re-upload my stories then? *huggles back* thanks for the tip cougar