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Okay ladies and gentlemen, Magnus (magnusserra), and I have begun working on a series lately and we've decided to publish a small teaser to the general public to see what you all think. Comments are welcome
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Just some comments on your teaser.
Just a personal preferance, I like an intro, something that starts off by stating what's going on, where are we. I get enough 20 questions to figure out what's going on at work, I don't need more in a story. Just a personal preferance you start with an clear intro.
Humm,... it's a good start
Just a personal preferance, I like an intro, something that starts off by stating what's going on, where are we. I get enough 20 questions to figure out what's going on at work, I don't need more in a story. Just a personal preferance you start with an clear intro.
Humm,... it's a good start
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