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[Weekly]rayoelgatubelo for desertliontallio
Week 4. Tier 1 Color(Flat color) requested by rayoelgatubelo.
I am under the firm impression that the small details go that extra mile for immersion. Example: the poster. It may not be legible, but there's text on there at least.
Apologies if I, for any reason, misrepresent the character.
Art: Cora"frostwyrm102" Valion
Character: desertliontallio
Request: rayoelgatubelo
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I am under the firm impression that the small details go that extra mile for immersion. Example: the poster. It may not be legible, but there's text on there at least.
Apologies if I, for any reason, misrepresent the character.
Art: Cora"frostwyrm102" Valion
Character: desertliontallio
Request: rayoelgatubelo
If you like this picture and would like one of your own design, check in here for slot openings. Sundays are guaranteed openings, but there may be openings all throughout the week.
Category All / All
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Size 698 x 1280px
File Size 99.6 kB
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Just a little criticism on this if I can?
The body posture and stance is great, but the posture on the pistol is off. The back/palm of the hand should be hugging the top of the butt against the arch below the hammer. Basically gripping as high as possible without interfering with the slide, and the opposite hand should be overlapped with the primary hand. As it is now if you were to fire that at a range the recoil would kick the gun up and off target since the top portion of the grip isn't held 100% and the secondary hand isn't fully supporting the primary hand.
Else as I said stance and posture is great, wrist is straight and extended while holding the pistol, as well as the upper body.
If you're interested go to youtube and look up "proper pistol grip" and take a look at a few videos. Being as I shoot regularly if I saw someone doing this at the range I'd say the same thing to them x3
The body posture and stance is great, but the posture on the pistol is off. The back/palm of the hand should be hugging the top of the butt against the arch below the hammer. Basically gripping as high as possible without interfering with the slide, and the opposite hand should be overlapped with the primary hand. As it is now if you were to fire that at a range the recoil would kick the gun up and off target since the top portion of the grip isn't held 100% and the secondary hand isn't fully supporting the primary hand.
Else as I said stance and posture is great, wrist is straight and extended while holding the pistol, as well as the upper body.
If you're interested go to youtube and look up "proper pistol grip" and take a look at a few videos. Being as I shoot regularly if I saw someone doing this at the range I'd say the same thing to them x3
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