After finishing Minato's stats, I decided to do all my characters as well. Here is a stat sheet and background story to my second OC, Korban, the Immortal Bounty Hunter.

I'm open to criticism so long as it's positive and helps me improve on my errors.

Korban belongs to me.


Korban Stats and Analysis

Name: Korban
Race: Anthromorphic Husky-Immortal Hybrid
Height: 5’ 9”
Weight: 176 lbs.
Age: 24
Preferred Weapons: Twin personally designed handguns, Immortal Arm “Armageddon,” Ice Magic
Personality: Cocky, Brash, Arrogant, Punny.

Korban is the second child of the Immortal Knight, Kleetra, and Clara, a Mortal Husky who agreed to let Kleetra breed her in order to carry on his legacy before sealing the Immortals away for eternity. When Korban was the tender age of 4, he witnessed his mother being savagely murdered by a group of Immortals that somehow managed to escape being sealed away, forcing the young pup to survive entirely on his own. A few years after the incident, he was picked up by a lone bounty hunter who raised him and trained him to be a professional killer. At this stage in his life, Korban was able to fend for himself and even managed to create his own personally designed handguns which he dubbed “Phobos” and “Deimos” after the Martian moons of the same name. There was one slight problem though that the bounty hunter didn’t count on when he raised Korban…he was a mute. No one had taught him to speak, so communicating with him was a chore. Eventually Korban left the hunter and started to pursue a life as a bounty hunter himself, taking on small time jobs to help him get back up on his feet. At around 14 years of age, he encountered another hunter, a sergal by the name of Sash. After their first encounter, the two decided to work together and become partners. Sash even teaching Korban how to speak and a few tips on sword play. Shortly after their partnership was forged, Korban managed to stumble upon a large sword, which turned out to be the Immortal Arm, “Armageddon.” The sword bound its soul to Korban’s and became his melee weapon to this day. Overtime, Sash and Korban’s relationship started to wane. Sash started to get deep into ancient literature and lore, and ultimately discovered old texts about the Immortals. It wasn’t long before Sash discovered that he was also a Son of Kleetra, which would make him Korban’s elder half-brother. Korban started to become aware of this and kept denying his heritage, which caused Sash to despise his brother, and ultimately they parted ways after a brutal fight, leaving them both heavily wounded.

Korban is very acrobatic and highly skilled in swordplay and gun slinging, pulling off insanely stylish maneuvers and aerial stunts such as spinning like a drill whilst firing his guns in midair and spinning his blade like a propeller parallel to his body. He also is very adept in using Ice magic to his advantage. His sword, Armageddon, also has a mind of its own and it obeys Korban’s every command, though hesitantly. At one point, Korban found a way to channel Harmonic energies into his sword and purify it temporarily, transforming the blade into the Heavenly Blade, “Divinity.” With Divinity active, his power is enhanced 10 fold and he has access to a special technique called “Divine Judgment;” an attack that literally judges its victim based on the purity of his/her heart.


At one point in his life, He took on a job from a scientist known as Jacob Rex, who tasked Korban with the assassination of famous musician, Volcanoran H. Skilerain. This, however, lead to another encounter with his brother, Sash, and the two duked it out once more, this time Sash claiming victory and almost killing Korban, impaling him with his own sword. This did not kill him however. Instead, by allowing Armageddon to taste Korban’s blood, it force awakened Korban’s latent powers as well as his Immortal Trigger for the first time. Whilst in Immortal Trigger, rather than his power increasing, his speed is increased 10 fold and he gains wings for added mobility and flight. He also has access to a new attack called “Chaotic Punishment,” an attack imbued with Chaotic energies that cleaves through anything in its path, leaving behind a wake of total destruction. However, Korban struggles to maintain conscious control while in this state, and should he stay in the form for too long, his sword’s spirit overpowers his mind and he goes on a spree of bloodlust and devastation.

Korban is cocky, arrogant, and brash. He utilizes bad puns and jokes in order to throw off his opponents, exposing their weaknesses and allowing Korban to move in for the kill. Despite his brashness, he has shown to be very cunning and somewhat of a tech genius, developing a small wrist computer capable of hacking high level security and digitally storing any extra weapons he may need for special jobs. He’s also shown a capacity to feel love towards another person, which is proof of his mortality. A perfect example of this is when he encountered Tsume Mondiale for the first time and after a few days of getting to know one another, announced their love for each other and they were involved in a relationship. This however also shows his more protective side as well as his more aggressive tendencies. If he sees anyone he cares for get hurt or even killed, his anger flies through the roof, sometimes causing his Immortal Trigger to self-activate completely against his will. Regardless, Korban is a capable fighter with the ability to back up his bark with a nasty bite. He is a valued team player to his allies, even though he openly states he works better alone.