Really loved this story so much :D looking forward for more flattening stories!

this makes me really want to commission you one :) the way you pull actions and how you describe the flattening feeling is just great x3

Oh, garsh

I don't think I would ever take commissions, but I have 3 more chapters planned out, two of which I'll be taking suggestions for, and then I'll be taking requests. So...hang in there!

omg! then im lookin' forward to it :D

all i could suggest is... you should try add a scene of walking while being flattened and fluttering away afterwards maybe? x3! i dunno if the people in your setting can even manage to move an inch while all flat and draped limply (which is a bliss x3!) yet i have also hope for some of them being able to move? :)

also, add a wolf as a flattening victim! xP haha!

Good times, I'm enjoying this series!

worth faving a second time! 3

To give a better comment: I LOVE the chemistry between these two; they're such a cute couple, and the toony hijinks just make things even more awkwardly endearing. ^_^

I'll agree with Alephgon, too; I'd be interested in a commission from you, too. ^_^

"I got blown up like a balloon by that crappy old shop vac in the complex broom closet"
That, I would like to read.

Amazing, cute and toony X3 I loved it~