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Tiriana Silverlight is an aspiring Blood Elf longing to be a part of the Farstriders. Though she is plagued by haemaphobia, she has struggled to overcome her trials to prove her worth to the Elven Ranger Corps. As part of her initiation test, she's been sent into Duskwood.
When the danger becomes too great, however, Tiriana is overcome with a strange curse that transforms her temporarily into a worgen. This new disguise protects her from the roaming alliance heroes and the Night Watch, but a kind worgen priest may steal her heart when she is not prepared.
Prologue + Episode I: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9686577/
Episode II: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9686608/
Episode III: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9729758/
Episode IV: Coming soon!
Did the Thumbnail myself! What do you guys think? :D
When the danger becomes too great, however, Tiriana is overcome with a strange curse that transforms her temporarily into a worgen. This new disguise protects her from the roaming alliance heroes and the Night Watch, but a kind worgen priest may steal her heart when she is not prepared.
Prologue + Episode I: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9686577/
Episode II: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9686608/
Episode III: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9729758/
Episode IV: Coming soon!
Did the Thumbnail myself! What do you guys think? :D
Category Story / Transformation
Species Wolf
Size 109 x 120px
File Size 57 kB
To be 100% honest, I liked the first chapter more, something about the phasing and way you described the events of the story and the character's thoughts felt more detailed and tended, while here you go for a more straight foward approach on how the characters speak and move almost giving a feel like it was written in a sort of rush. Its not bad however, I like the personalization you did with the priest, and love the detailing of Tiri's new body, how she gets used to it. Just beware of the grammar errors, spotted quite a few in this chapter.
And exploding leper gnomes. Oh yes.
And exploding leper gnomes. Oh yes.
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