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Recon one of the most dangerous S.W.A.T. Bot manufacturing and Robotisizing facilities in the area when you have the opportunity to destroy it?
That mis-guided 'general' knew nothing of the suffering of those he sent to the front lines.
The opportunity was there, there would most likely never be another one like it. He had set the charges at the key points, freed the prisoners and got the hell out in time to blow the facility to hell.
As of now, the prisoners freed, the facility destroyed, he slowly walked back to the Freedom Fighter camp, anticipating in his head the sight of that slathering, demented mongrel they apponted leader of this band of inexperience morons.
His fingers touched the data disk in his pocket. There was no way this disk would go to his hands. There was only one person on Mobius he believed he could trust this information with, and no matter how long it took...
He would get it to her.
The story is a little expansion to one of my stories nestled in my Gallery, if you're interested in that kinda thing.
This came out SO well. The cloud of smoke, especially...I didn't think I'd manage to pull it off, but I did.
Certan parts could have been done a lot better, IMO...but for me this is about as good as I could have got it without spending another 4 hours on it.
Well, I hope you guys like it! And if by any chance someone sees this and isn't watching Angelbreed, you're a fool! Go do it now!
Well? Still reading this?? GO WATCH HIM!!
[original sketch by
angelbreed]
[Nexus copyright to Me]
Recon one of the most dangerous S.W.A.T. Bot manufacturing and Robotisizing facilities in the area when you have the opportunity to destroy it?
That mis-guided 'general' knew nothing of the suffering of those he sent to the front lines.
The opportunity was there, there would most likely never be another one like it. He had set the charges at the key points, freed the prisoners and got the hell out in time to blow the facility to hell.
As of now, the prisoners freed, the facility destroyed, he slowly walked back to the Freedom Fighter camp, anticipating in his head the sight of that slathering, demented mongrel they apponted leader of this band of inexperience morons.
His fingers touched the data disk in his pocket. There was no way this disk would go to his hands. There was only one person on Mobius he believed he could trust this information with, and no matter how long it took...
He would get it to her.
The story is a little expansion to one of my stories nestled in my Gallery, if you're interested in that kinda thing.
This came out SO well. The cloud of smoke, especially...I didn't think I'd manage to pull it off, but I did.
Certan parts could have been done a lot better, IMO...but for me this is about as good as I could have got it without spending another 4 hours on it.
Well, I hope you guys like it! And if by any chance someone sees this and isn't watching Angelbreed, you're a fool! Go do it now!
Well? Still reading this?? GO WATCH HIM!!
[original sketch by
angelbreed][Nexus copyright to Me]
Category Artwork (Digital) / Sonic
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 1200px
File Size 241.7 kB
I can't believed you missed the opportunity to put the goggles over your eyes right as the facility blew up. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3d54Ok6Uz_A I hope you at least had the good sense to have just taken them off?
The background is a little off--is the biggest SWATbot manufacturing facility in the area in the middle of a fallow cornfield? What's with those rows?--but the three point lighting on your man in front is Hollywood perfect, heavy key, heavy kick, low fill. Nice!
The background is a little off--is the biggest SWATbot manufacturing facility in the area in the middle of a fallow cornfield? What's with those rows?--but the three point lighting on your man in front is Hollywood perfect, heavy key, heavy kick, low fill. Nice!
It's still pretty good. :)
Maybe put him closer to the building? It would justify the heavy kick effect on the left side a little more. On the other hand, that would be such a heavy kick that you'd be deeper in shadow than Lee Marvin unless you had a forward light source to motivate the fill. Do you smoke?
Other than that, maybe something more dramatic than flat desert. Mesa desert? Badlands? The stripes just seem a little weird.
Maybe put him closer to the building? It would justify the heavy kick effect on the left side a little more. On the other hand, that would be such a heavy kick that you'd be deeper in shadow than Lee Marvin unless you had a forward light source to motivate the fill. Do you smoke?
Other than that, maybe something more dramatic than flat desert. Mesa desert? Badlands? The stripes just seem a little weird.
Yeah...thing is while I agonise over details, I'm not a very skilled artist and I do what I can.
The picture doesn't need to be perfect. There are shading problems, for instance on the fabrics, but the thing is I'm still learning. I'm focussing on fixing the big things before I worry about little irrelevent crap like whether I put the shadow 6 pixels too far to the right or whether the photo I used for the floor was altogether too small for the purpose.
I appreciate constructive critisism, but I do not respond well to needless nit-picking about details of a picture which, really, are not that important.
The picture doesn't need to be perfect. There are shading problems, for instance on the fabrics, but the thing is I'm still learning. I'm focussing on fixing the big things before I worry about little irrelevent crap like whether I put the shadow 6 pixels too far to the right or whether the photo I used for the floor was altogether too small for the purpose.
I appreciate constructive critisism, but I do not respond well to needless nit-picking about details of a picture which, really, are not that important.
Fair enough. But next time you feel the need to not respond well, just link. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwSYBMLTbWY
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