kharma is so weird

Kharma is a moderately sociopathic sourceror with a penchant for occasional excessive violence and a slowly emerging attraction to a buff lion. That's pretty weird in itself, to be fair. xD

hehe "boom"

A fellow sociopath ! :P

Boom, baby!

The clap part made me think of full metal alchemist

kharma is so cute X3 hehehe

Curious, but what are Kharma's and Theran's stats?

Strength:
Dexterity:
Constitution:
Intelligence:
Wisdom:
Charisma:

Weapon:
Armor:

You forgot one critical stat!

Insanity Points.

I'll go by D&D standards, since that's the stat logic I know xD Wherein 18 is exceptional (i.e. genius level intellect, seer level wisdom, etc.) and less than 2 is functionally disabled.

Theran
Strength: 18 - Years of wearing heavy armour and carrying a large axe will do wonders for one's physique
Dexterity: 15 - Although his own bulk hampers his agility to a degree, Theran is still quick enough on his reflexes to dodge blows when needed.
Constitution: 18 - Theran can take a serious beating, including a massive laser at point blank range to the chest and getting back up once he came round.
Intelligence: 9 - He's not thick but he's also never tried to get any smarter :P
Wisdom: 9 - Common sense and forward planning are not his strong points xD
Charisma: 15 - Going on the D&D logic that Charisma = personality and likability, not physical attractiveness

Weapon: Greataxe
Armor: Medium Platemail

Kharma
Strength: 8 - Having never done a day's exercise in his life and relying largely on magic to do any hard work that presented itself, Kharma's physical strength is no better than the average peasant.
Dexterity: 9 - Without any serious combat experience (beyond 'use magic to nuke the fuck out of everything') Kharma's manual dexterity and agility leave a lot to be desired.
Constitution: 9 - Furthermore, a lack of the years of being beaten about that Theran's had means Kharma's tolerance for pain doesn't extend that far - save for when he's pissed off enough that adrenalin provides all the painkiller he needs. :P
Intelligence: 18 - What Kharma lacks in physical strength, he more than makes up for in intellect, having spent most of his free time reading and studying things that take his interest.
Wisdom: 16 - A life of watching the villagers make all manner of mistakes in their various jobs, as well as the many foolhardy adventurers he'd pry on from time to time, has left Kharma more than capable of thinking ahead and being ready for just about any eventuality.
Charisma: 8 - Sarcasm and a short temper are rarely very attractive traits in an individual XD

Weapon: None - uses magic, and lacks the physical strength required to use most weapons
Armor: Cloth robes/magical barriers.

Now that's cute. Talk about two souls that just complete each other. So how about Ghar and the jerboa?

I may well just do character sheets for them at some point xD

Yay! Maybe something showing them when they were younger too? I always imagine that Kharma was a sweet kitten when he was younger. Not all sour like he is now. Kinda like a raisin.

This is why I always play mages in LARPs.

Boom baby BOOM! Mad BOMBER which BOMBS at midnight!

last panel the shadow should be slightly to the right.

if gonna be that critical, it'd be more as multiple light sources.

Like this but more blurred and faded away from the body.

ohh, nice ref. Yeah, I know exactly what you mean, i was just giving him a stat at angle. I don't think even I could pull off that.

PS not correcting the artist, but the commenter. :P

Comic's cool.

For future reference, do you like critiques of your work?

Always appreciated! I know I shoulda put another shadow or two on that last frame, but it was 1 am and I just wanted to be done with this one for now xD But I do appreciate critique, as long as it is constructive and not just aimless and destructive :P

That's all I aim for. Constructive criticism is how we can help each other get better. :D

If that's the case, then there's one more little suggestion, if you don't mind. :b

In the middle of the page, for the lightning attack. When switching frames it gives a small gap of time between them. I would suggest the throwing of the lightning and the rings around the shadow would all be in one panel to show speed.

No need to change things. It's all about learning for tomorrow's art.

Keep up the good work.

A good thought, and I could see how it'd work o: I'll keep it in mind :3

Someone has a little child in himself ;)

Kharma is sooooooooo love!!! arghhh he's just too adorable and Theran has had his daww moments too "Boo Yah Whos the Kitteh!?"

Interesting. It would seem the lightning attack destabilized the shadow monster's entire form, instead of just slicing through it like the other fire attacks. Perhaps there-in lies a clue to their true nature? Or a ready weakness to be exploited, at least.