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I lie here in the Darkness
by Necrobat
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13 years ago
I got tired of lurking around never submitting anything of my own, so here's a little poem. Just be warned, I wrote this thing in an insomniac stupor one night, so it's a bit... iffy.
I'd also just like to assure everybody that I am NOT crazy; I have certainly never killed anybody, and I am most definitely not emo.
I have posted this in other places, but I figured I'd take a chance and expose it to a wider audience, get some variety in the feedback.
I suppose this could also go completely unnoticed, but nothing ventured, nothing gained.
I'd also just like to assure everybody that I am NOT crazy; I have certainly never killed anybody, and I am most definitely not emo.
I have posted this in other places, but I figured I'd take a chance and expose it to a wider audience, get some variety in the feedback.
I suppose this could also go completely unnoticed, but nothing ventured, nothing gained.
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It's always great to hear that somebody out there enjoyed something I wrote.
Thought you might like to fix that.
Other than that. One of the best poems I've ever read. Flawless and god damn beautiful. I wish there was more that could be said but to put it simply.....
I am envious.
And yes, I noticed how the ' turned into a block for some reason, but I don't know how to fix that. It shows up normally in Notepad, though, but changed when I uploaded it to FA.
The note pad's ' are different from everyone elses '
And you well deserve it.