Hmm, the lower chin should be out more, perhaps?

hmm perhaps

Thanks so much for doing this for me! I remember now you asking me what I would like to see, so I suggested a donkey. I think donkeys will always be one of my favorites b/c of the donkey tfs in Pinnochio (damn you Disney for corrupting me!).

The pic is pretty cool, and I like how you were playing with the furry texture, but it seems like your art program might be a bit lacking. Even so, there are a few things you could do to improve this pic, if you choose to.

For the hooves, notice how each of your hooves has a slant to it, except what would be her right hand. They should all have that slant. Also notice what would be her right foot has fur draping down over the hoof. You should also do this for the other hooves, to make it more realistic.

The torso itself is a bit squarish, and what would be her breasts are to high. Whenever you think of women, think of curves. For a donkey girl, i would imagine her body curve outwards a bit where her rib cage is before curving inward by the stomach. This is tough to describe via text, but I could show you what i mean if you want.

Overall, it's not a bad pic. Thanks so much for drawing it for me! Arf!

Most people that likes donkey tfs seem to have gotten this from Disney... perhaps it's some kind of conspiracy?

Thanks for the comments! Glad you liked the pic. I'll see if I ever remake it or fix it. I use paint shop pro to paint my pics (and to make my photomorphs). So I'm not sure if it's a bad program for painting or if It's just me that suck at painting:P If I had some RL tools like coloring pencils I probably would try that.

If I were you, the only changes i'd really make are a few touch ups, like the fur going over the hooves. Otherwise, just use the feedback I gave you on the next pic you do.

As far as Paint Shop Pro, there may be some better programs you can find out there. Photoshop is definitely the best of them all, but it's not free. There are some open-source programs, like GIMP, that you may want to try, but it's probably about the same as Paint Shop Pro.

Hmm I actually have photoshop. But I haven't used it that much because I find Paint shop pro easier. Perhaps I should train more on photoshop then...

Well Paint Shop Pro may be good for learning the basics, but Paint Shop Pro is certainly more powerful once you get the hang of it.

*nods* ok