Um...wow, Nate. I'm very impressed! Clearly one of your best works yet! Granted, I honestly did not have any idea what was going on or what was happening, since there was a severe lack of comedy or kinks involved (which tends to bore me), but what I gathered was that I'm a leader now, and so is Soline, and my team won! That freaking rocks! It's about time I got some recognition! Thanks so much, Nathan! Love you.

Oh, and...uh...it's nice to see Wolf-9 back, and good riddance to Chaos; didn't know who he was anyway.

Heh. I'm sorry about the lack of kinky stuff and comedy, but it's hard to incorporate into Silent Hill. I'm glad you loved it, and Chaos hadn't been reading for a while.

To be fair...well, not to be rude, but I doubt that more than half of your current players actually still read. The only ones who probably still do are Volsar, myself, and maybe Silenrea and Murphy. A lot of them aren't very reliable.

I know *sighs* Which is the reason I put on the story that I have the lowest ratings. I doubt anyone who isn't in it reads it. Also, you need to come up with a new team name if you want to change it.

Well, you kinda have a bunch of nobodies involved. To make a season successful, you need to incorporate both famous, attention-grabbing people, COMBINED with under-the-radar newbies. It's best to have a mix. Really, the only ones that are well-known in your story is Josh, Volsar, Soline, and Silenrea. Wolf-9 and Murphy are getting there, though. As for a new team name...um...well...Team Desert is alright. I wouldn't want to piss off the team and give them a crappy name...

Don't worry about it. I'm sure anyone else would pick a name they liked. It'll be fine, honest. Also, I don't know many popular people, and it was hard for me to even get the people I got this time. I don't plan on writing another season.

I'm not well known?

Sorry, Neko! Forgot about you. Sometimes an important and wonderful person can be lost in a list of nobodies. My bad.

I don't think anyone is really a nobody, as everyone is somebody. Still, it is good to see you remember me! And I've been checking your page regularly, so you won't surprise me with a new episode of TDVA without me finding it soon after!

Why don't you chat to me anymore, anyway? You had said you wanted to get to know me better.

I never know what instant messenger you're on!

I'm on Skype constantly, but only answer when I'm at home and usually stay invisible, and AIM and Yahoo both go to my phone.

All he wanted to do was give his friends a place in a wonderful idea he had; I agree that it should be more popular than it is, due to his writing skill and representation of ideas.

Great to know people who used to talk to me still remember who I am

Well Nate, you know I read. I even help you on the stories. Don't forget about me ;o;

I won't :3

Still reading, and may I say your best yet. I'll be honest, the "becomeing a public show" thing made me feel like your just trying to stand besides the others story/gameshows running around, but this one did come out amazing with your "ratings grab". On top of that, I have to say the pokemon cures bugged me at first, but turning that into a joke worked well. All in all, a surprising story, but the best yet ^^

And just remember, if someone likes your work, its good, but if you like it, its great

Thanks Wolf :3

Your welcome ^^

This is the best episode I've read until now.
Thank you very much for it!
But my eye hurts a bit now though... Ouch.
Maybe I should have my revenge on her, hah. Hah... Muhahaha!!

*snickers* Just be careful, she's no slouch.

I'm no slouch either! ...am I?!

Nah :3

Hihihi, thanks~

Welcome :3

Ehehe, neat episode. Good job, Nate! ^.-.^
The episodes are getting longer and longer. But that just makes 'em more fun to read. =3

Thanks :3 I try my best to make them as fun as possible :3

Glad you finally removed me. Was wondering when that would happen.
You are getting better with your writing, it's great to see that. x3

Thanks. I didn't know you wanted removed.

"Oh, my! Did I do something bad this time? I really thought that was part of the task to look out for others... *worried* (ó.=.ò)
Big Brother is kinda scaring me after a while now. Not just that place we wn't looked really much like out of a horror movie but that we shall vote other out for not knowing what happens. I don't wanna vote for anybody if that has to do with vore stuffs. I'm afraid of it. I thought we all would have much fun together... *sniffs* (T.=.T)"

Nice new story part, Nate. I surely know the Silent Hill games since they have quite interesting stories. Even I could never play them because of my big problems with creepy and horrific things I also think most of them are really great done video games. It was fun to see how well you adapted things especially from Silent Hill 2. =3
I must admit that sometimes in this chapter it got a bit confusing for me. You sometimes wrote direct speech in usual and sometimes in italic letters and I wasn't sure if someone actually was talking to each other or if they were thinking loud. Maybe you can tell me later. X3

Hmm, I think I'll reread all existing parts one more time and try to create a roster of the players so I can easier stay on track with all characters and the way they are acting. It's kinda hard with so many acting characters at a time that keep shuffling plus that you add more from time to time even.
Hopefully I'll get in contact with everybody soon as well. I always like that about games and competitions. It's something that all people shall enjoy together. Hehehe, hope that not everybody is now meant to leave the house in a vore-way. *points fingers together nervous* (^.///.^')

I can tell you that the italics are when they are in the Diary Room, talking directly to Big Brother/ the Audience. Don't worry, you didn't do anything wrong, but I had to have someone vote for you because of the fact that it would seem like you had cost them the challenge, but you really didn't. It's not your fault that Sentret happened to be wandering around inside the town and you just happened to find him. Also, not everyone will leave the house in a vore way, only those who are okay with it. If/When you are evicted, you'll just be walked outside and someone will shut the door behind you.

Oh that's nice from you! If that point should come I'll definately give everybody a hug before the finish. (-^.=.^-)

But may I ask something yet? Do the people who get vored appear outside of the house later on? I actually thought so and I'd be sad to loose some of my dudes because I guessed wrong. <=///3

Yeah, they get reformed inside of the mansion after they are evicted.

Oh, thanks! That makes me glad! Thanks, Mr. Big Brother! (-^.=.^-)

Welcome :3 I may be mean and vile (in the story) but I'm not heartless.

Yeah, I know your cuddly true self very well. *hugs* X3

*hugs back* Thanks :3

I've never played Silent Hill. Still, I've heard of it. I wonder if I'll ever be the leader of anything in a story... I was a fleet commander in the RP game I play, at least until I found the chance to get out... But then I just got right back in by joining a different fleet, one I had been in before, and ended up as a patrol leader... Long and convoluted story there, as it is a fast paced and quickly changing RP game... Another error I see in this section:

Meanwhile, inside the smoke-filled town, Team Tundra found a building that Marc said he saw the Sentret go inside. Everyone looked at it, and most everyone was nervous to go inside. There was a good reason for this, as it was Alchemilla Hospital. It was seemingly abandoned, and no one wanted to go inside a real hospital, much less a deserted one. Soline, being the leader she was, stepped out in front of everyone and motioned for them to follow her inside. Everyone started walking forward and following Marc as he led them inside to find the evasive Sentret.

While Desert was busy trying to find the illusive Sentret, Tundra had run into a problem, literally.

Bit of a reversal there...

Thanks for pointing these out, Spell check and etc. doesn't catch it.

It wouldn't... It was just the team names got reversed after you had said who was looking for the Sentret.

Eeyup. It's fixed now.

Excellent! I should go back through and save the ones I read. I was in a hurry to read them all and didn't take the time to save them all locally. I shall do this when I have time, unless you still plan to combine them eventually. If that is the case, it may be more prudent for me to wait.

I've been combining every episode thus far, but it looks like I might have to start over because of the changes to them. So, I think I will just put them together at the end of it all and then post a complete season copy, I don't know.

Okay, in that case, if I find the time to go back through and collect them, I will, and if not, I will await the compilation version.

I guess it wasn't that hard to go back and change 10 and 11. The compilation is still intact.

Excellent! The other typos I've found throughout have been rather minor and not worth mentioning. I did notice the one that Josh mentioned in Portal was still there, though.

Which?

The could instead of couldn't.

I thought I fixed that.

Perhaps not. Or perhaps you had and it didn't upload?

I'll change that.

Okay.

I reuploaded it again just in case.

Stellar! Mayhaps this time it succeeded?

I hope so :3

I would check it, but I'm too tired right now to do more than click and type.

It's alright. I understand.

Good night!

Nini :3

X3

You're welcome, by the way.

*nods*

*Purrs*

*hugs*

*Nuzzles*

*blushes and looks at your maw*

*Opens it and lets you look inside*

*puts my paws inside*

*Licks your pawpads as you slide them in*

*blushes and murrs*

*Suckles on your paws*

*murrs happily and blushes more*

*Sucks your paws in a bit further*

*blushes and lets them get sucked in*

*Feels them enter my throat*

*wiggles my toes and wags my tail*

*Gulps them down and licks*

*murrs happily, tail wagging faster*

*Gulps again, sending more of you down my throat and licking what comes into my maw*

*blushes and murrs even more, pushing up off the ground to try and help you* <3

*Gulps you in to your midsection*

*murrs and wiggles gently*

*Licks all over your belly*

*murrs and giggles loudly*

*Gulps again*

*murrs and blushes hard*

*Licks all over your chest fur*

*murrs and pats your nose* <3

*Gulps again and begins licking your face*

*blushes and licks your tongue back*

*Purrs and pushes your face further into my maw with my tongue so I can lick your ears*

*blushes and murrs, struggling gently*

*Gulps again, sending you all the way down, then purrs heavily*

*struggles all the way down*

*Curls up and purrs as I feel you struggling on the way to my stomach*

*is deposited into your stomach*

*Purrs and licks my belly*

*rubs back gently*

*Nuzzles into my belly*

*rubs back*

*Yawns, curls up in a tight ball by the fireplace, and falls asleep*

*is compacted by your stomach*

*Purrs and has good dreams*

*curls up and sleeps*

*Wakes up and stretches*

*hears gurgles* *eyes dart around, worried*

Good morning! Did you want to come out?

No it's okay...

Okay, then. *Licks my belly*

*smiles gently*

*Purrs*

Hehe~

*Curls up and rests*

*hears your stomach gurgle again*

*Purrs and relaxes as my stomach begins to work*

*shivers gently as acid begins to pour in*

*Falls asleep as my stomach continues working*

*is slowly digested*

*Wakes up to find you no longer in my belly* ...

**I reform a little later*

There you are!

*nods* yup.

Glad to see you are safe!

Thanks :3

You're welcome! *Purrs and nuzzles*

Hehe *nuzzles back*

*Purrs and lays down next to you*

Hehe~ *rubs your tummy*

*Purrs*

*nuzzles, murring*

*Purrs and rolls onto my back, stretching*

*rubs more*

*Purrs deeply*

Like that?

*Nods and mrowls*

*rubs more*

*Purrs and wiggles*

Hehehe~

Mew!

*keeps rubbing*

*Continues purring*

:3 *rubrubrub*

*Closes my eyes, smiles, mrowls, and wiggles*

*murrs and rubs more* <3

*Murrs and purrs*

*murrs too, rubbing with both my front paws*

*Murrs and stretches*

:3 *watches*

*Rolls over onto my belly*

Hehe :3

*Purrs*

:3 *pets*

*Purrs and nuzzles*

*murrs gently*

*Purrs*

~ <3

*Continues purring*

*murrs more as well*

*Nuzzles*

*hugs back*

*Hugs*

^^

X3

*nuzzles*

*Buries my face in your fur*

*blushes*

*Purrs*

:3

X3