
A re-write I did last year of one of my older stories.
An overworked single father wants nothing more then to spend time with his daughter. When she finds something special during a trip to the Zoo, both of their wishes just might come true.
An overworked single father wants nothing more then to spend time with his daughter. When she finds something special during a trip to the Zoo, both of their wishes just might come true.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Otter
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 31.6 kB
Wow, a triple wammy, species, gender, and AR.
Your grammer and spelling are above par, nothing jumped out at me.
A very cute and enjoyable story for the most part. It seemed a bit awkward in some places, but I think that's more due to my personal preferences. Plus, it is an otter TF, which automatically gets it major bonus points.
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Your grammer and spelling are above par, nothing jumped out at me.
A very cute and enjoyable story for the most part. It seemed a bit awkward in some places, but I think that's more due to my personal preferences. Plus, it is an otter TF, which automatically gets it major bonus points.
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