Sounds more techno-ish to me than it does hip-hop.

It does sounds pleasant to the ears, though. :)

Samples used in many hiphop-beats and -sequences come from various genres, so one doesn't exclude the other. :3 Everything is....connnnected.^^
My feeling tells me just that maybe the pace is a bit fast. Should I slow it down even moar?

I'm glad that it pleased your ears, although I'm only responsible for the majority of drums in there.

If you want VERY very good pheonix wright music, check out the Gyakuten official remake. It's an orchestral remake on youtube using gyakuten.

I actually don't care about that game. But I did as you said, and found very good music indeed.^^

probably because they expose who the killer / framer is and make it blatantly obvious? Oh yeah and it's a kids game... soooo, what says an at the most T-rated game other than a "insane" witness with HUGE breasts and pink hair? The humor is, the witness uses sex appeal to try and excuse all questions wright presses on her by gettingthe judge, proescutors, and jurys attention with a cutesy attitude. THE GAME WAS MARKETED TO THOSE GOING INTO THEIR TEENS! LET ME REMIND YOU! XD

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You wanna haz a cookie?

nah, I'll just eat Bills gerbil he brings to work... He can carry both a gerbil and gatling gun like he has 100 lb's of extra strength, guess it makes sense though since he's a heavy. XD Bill works nearby, mmm, fried gerbil...

kidding, I wouldn't be that cruel.

Did I mention that I don't care about that game, or that I've never played it?
My point is: I'll not discuss that game with you. Try a forum or something if you wanna rant.

perhaps add some lyric....? :3

I'm neither a rapper nor a good lyricist in that concern.
But you might, if you feel apt to do it. :3

all you need to do is expose yourself to lyriced music every day, the feeling should come naturally.

That's some good advice. Though I don't listen to rap music anymore. I did in the past, but it was only german rap/hip-hop.
+I can't understand half of it (english rap, i mean) because it's too much slang.

try virtual insanity, wait, you do know that one! XD

I thought we were talking about rap.

Here's one of my few attempts to write lyrics: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3340234/