From my previous upload, I got feedback from a few close people.
I should explain a few keypoints on this revision. The full art is here http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9852913/

what is different in the revision? is hard to notice actually, so I'll go into details. My previous piece was sketched months ago as some of you know already. Different things that struck me after posting came to bother me so I decided I could play some with the lineart to fix errors.

most glaring error came onto the breast size. While Monica is known for her massive attributes, she is not a girl that's supposed to grow in any form. My mistake was to draw her trying to proportionate the body to the breast... when I should do the breast to the head... her breast size is 1.9 heads but her torso is slightly longer than my regular females. This torso difference applies on Leony as well as Perla.

Second error came on the circle shape of the breast. The bigger the breasts come into manga, the rounder they go, but in a realistic way they don't come anything close to what my art depicts. Regardless, I try to apply a hint of realism so the right shape is not a round but an elyptical shape, kinda like 2 eggs, with one overlapping the other.

Third error can be attributed to the attempt to draw a round shape as well. There should be tension in the breast area and this intensifies with the size. How much physics you want to apply is up to you, but the stress of the clothing is a must if you want to make it look more real. Her breast is pushed in some more than in the color piece. At the same time there's a few more lines to represent the push.

All the changes made come to the breast. I am truly happy with the outcome of this revision and will continue practicing with these standards. Let's see how things turn out in 2014. I show new progress every time and I like it ^^

So, questions? comments? let me know.

Thank you all who helped me find out the errors here =p

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EDIT: ORIGINAL FILE HERE http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9852913/

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