...I dunno...I think he looks unhappy because he just found out that he was secretly killed and reanimated as a zombie...like...a month ago. And he just now found out. I dunno what it is...but I'm getting a very...undead...vibe off that picture. And I haven't got a clue why, but, that's just what I think of when I see it. Zombie-orc. Still, not a bad picture. Y'know, if you don't mind having a picture of a zombie-orc.

It could be the prominent cheek bones. Or the fact that his eyes are way too dark. Pupils came out too big, or something. Not quite sure what happened there, but I'm pretty sure that's what's doing it.

...definately not the eyes. Might be the cheek bones...but I suspect it's the whole...cheeks down part of the face. Including the mouth and jaw. I really have no clue just why that is. But, he's definately a zombie-orc. He's coming for your brains.

I guess I can see what he means about the zombie-orc... mostly because the lower part of the face seems very boney, kind of emaciated. Maybe it could use a bit more fleshiness and musculature on the jaw especially ^.^ He also has that facial expression that strikes me as him going: "WHAT??!??" ^.^

Yes, "WHAT??!??" is pretty much exactly what I feel like he's yelling. And, hmm, I'll have to think on how I can improve on getting more fleshiness in the lower jaw in this sort of picture. This is one of those things I can't really get photographic reference on, and I don't have an insanely detailed background in anatomy, so I can't just figure out how the muscles are supposed to fit. Well... unless I look up some of that information. I guess I could do that.